Disclaimer: The Star Wars characters and the Star Wars universe that I
borrow them from belong to George Lucas. The story and original characters
Melody Kazala, belong to me. The characters Ember, Master Gararr and Master
Barauga belong to Velvet_Elfin. You can use my story on your site if you
want, just let me know first.
Title: One Last Breath
Characters: Sifo-Dyas, Obi-Wan, Mace Windu, and original character Melody Kazala.
Timeline: Obi-Wan is 19. Qui-Gon Jinn is dead.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU: A friend of Obi-Wan has a vision of the future in which they were captured and Obi-Wan was killed. Will she be able to prevent his death from really happening?
Author: Peggy Schultz
Website: masterobiwankenobi@msn.com
Copyright © 2004 PS Schultz
Author's Note: This story is a Vignette of the story "Jedi Hearts" (you can find it on my website) written by myself and Velvet_Elfin (AKA Kenobi's Elf). It is set after Jedi Hearts prologue but before chapter one. You don't have to read Jedi Hearst to understand the story. It is basically just a glimpse at two of the characters of that story when they were Padawans.
Prologue
Melody glared at Obi-Wan as he looked down at her, an arrogant smirk covering his face. "Obi-Wan, you are an ynukyhd zang," she spat at him half in basic and half in her native language.
Obi-Wan stared at her, confusion clouding his features. She had seen visions of him in which he would develop into one of the greatest Knights in the Galaxy when he became older. The nineteen year old that stood in front of her now was an arrogant jerk. She could not believe that she had had a crush on him for over two years.
"What am I?" he asked, grinning at her, "You need to teach me to speak that language of yours."
"Then I couldn't insult you and see that look of confusion on your face while you try to figure out what I'm calling you."
"Aw, but how do I know that you're really insulting me. You could be telling me how much you love me," Obi-Wan teased, his blue/green eyes sparkling with mirth.
"I said that you were an arrogant-"
The click of the locking mechanism on the cell door interrupted Melody just seconds before the door opened. She whirled around to face the sentries that entered the small damp room. The guards aimed their blasters at them, refusing to take any chances that the Jedi would try to escape.
"You're coming with us," the first guard said looking at Melody.
"No, you can't take her. Take me instead. She doesn't know anything. She can't help you," Obi-Wan said desperately moving to stand in front of Melody.
"The boss doesn't want you, he has plans for her," the guard snapped as he pushed Obi-Wan roughly away. Obi-Wan stumbled backward landing hard on the cold damp floor. He quickly climbed to his feet, as the guard grabbed Melody's arm and started to pull her toward the doorway.
"NO!" Obi-Wan shouted as he ran at the guards. Suddenly Melody heard the horrifying sound of the guard's blaster as he stood in the doorway firing. She watched as the laser bolt hit Obi-Wan in the chest and he seemed to fall in slow motion down to the floor.
"Obi-Wan! NO!" Melody screamed as she struggled to pull away from the guard that continued to drag her out of the cell. She could see Obi-Wan's unseeing eyes as they stared up at the gray ceiling. She could not look away from his lifeless body.
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"NO, Obi-Wan!" Melody shrieked sitting up on her sleep couch. Breathing heavily, she looked around and realized that she was in her room and everything was in its place, just as she had left it the night before.
Swinging her legs over the side of her sleep couch, Melody took a deep calming breath and tried to eliminate the image of Obi-Wan's face from her head. At first, she thought that she had been dreaming, but her dreams were never this clear and vivid. She had to have had another vision of the future. However, if this vision were the true one then the other visions of Obi-Wan as an older Jedi would never come true. Somehow, she would have to prevent Obi-Wan's premature death.
Title: One Last Breath
Characters: Sifo-Dyas, Obi-Wan, Mace Windu, and original character Melody Kazala.
Timeline: Obi-Wan is 19. Qui-Gon Jinn is dead.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU: A friend of Obi-Wan has a vision of the future in which they were captured and Obi-Wan was killed. Will she be able to prevent his death from really happening?
Author: Peggy Schultz
Website: masterobiwankenobi@msn.com
Copyright © 2004 PS Schultz
Author's Note: This story is a Vignette of the story "Jedi Hearts" (you can find it on my website) written by myself and Velvet_Elfin (AKA Kenobi's Elf). It is set after Jedi Hearts prologue but before chapter one. You don't have to read Jedi Hearst to understand the story. It is basically just a glimpse at two of the characters of that story when they were Padawans.
Prologue
Melody glared at Obi-Wan as he looked down at her, an arrogant smirk covering his face. "Obi-Wan, you are an ynukyhd zang," she spat at him half in basic and half in her native language.
Obi-Wan stared at her, confusion clouding his features. She had seen visions of him in which he would develop into one of the greatest Knights in the Galaxy when he became older. The nineteen year old that stood in front of her now was an arrogant jerk. She could not believe that she had had a crush on him for over two years.
"What am I?" he asked, grinning at her, "You need to teach me to speak that language of yours."
"Then I couldn't insult you and see that look of confusion on your face while you try to figure out what I'm calling you."
"Aw, but how do I know that you're really insulting me. You could be telling me how much you love me," Obi-Wan teased, his blue/green eyes sparkling with mirth.
"I said that you were an arrogant-"
The click of the locking mechanism on the cell door interrupted Melody just seconds before the door opened. She whirled around to face the sentries that entered the small damp room. The guards aimed their blasters at them, refusing to take any chances that the Jedi would try to escape.
"You're coming with us," the first guard said looking at Melody.
"No, you can't take her. Take me instead. She doesn't know anything. She can't help you," Obi-Wan said desperately moving to stand in front of Melody.
"The boss doesn't want you, he has plans for her," the guard snapped as he pushed Obi-Wan roughly away. Obi-Wan stumbled backward landing hard on the cold damp floor. He quickly climbed to his feet, as the guard grabbed Melody's arm and started to pull her toward the doorway.
"NO!" Obi-Wan shouted as he ran at the guards. Suddenly Melody heard the horrifying sound of the guard's blaster as he stood in the doorway firing. She watched as the laser bolt hit Obi-Wan in the chest and he seemed to fall in slow motion down to the floor.
"Obi-Wan! NO!" Melody screamed as she struggled to pull away from the guard that continued to drag her out of the cell. She could see Obi-Wan's unseeing eyes as they stared up at the gray ceiling. She could not look away from his lifeless body.
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"NO, Obi-Wan!" Melody shrieked sitting up on her sleep couch. Breathing heavily, she looked around and realized that she was in her room and everything was in its place, just as she had left it the night before.
Swinging her legs over the side of her sleep couch, Melody took a deep calming breath and tried to eliminate the image of Obi-Wan's face from her head. At first, she thought that she had been dreaming, but her dreams were never this clear and vivid. She had to have had another vision of the future. However, if this vision were the true one then the other visions of Obi-Wan as an older Jedi would never come true. Somehow, she would have to prevent Obi-Wan's premature death.
