Darkside Girl-Once again thanks for the review, it's nice to have someone who reviews. There are a few who have my story on their faviroutes list but haven't said anything. It's nice to know what people think, it's the only way an author get's better.
Enter the Light-Chapter 7
Y.MalikPOV
Damn that girl, damn her! Damn Rishid as well! I'm not done yet, little Malik isn't that strong, he can't keep me in here for long! Then I'll send you all the Hell screaming, even you Hera! I won't forgive what you did, I'll kill you after all, nice and slow!
MalikPOV
All we can do for the moment is wait for Hera to heal. I put her in there, I gave birth to that vile demon, he killed my father and ruined my life! I'm not sure I can bare to know what he did to Hera, I never meant to drag anyone into this, I have to fix my syns alone, now because I failed to do so, Hera suffered. No, enough self hatred, I have to move on to make up for my syns, the spirit inside me is a part of me, so his syns are mine to bare as well. The question now is what to do. I can't simply leave Hera in Egypt. My family knows English because we're high class in Egypt and sometimes dealt with Americans. Most here in Egypt didn't speak english, most spoke Arabic. Also Hera is Christain and probaly dosen't understand about our culture since most of those in Egypt are Islam, with the exception of my family who worship the gods of Egypt, Orsiris, Obelisk and Ra(we don't really worship any of the others, not even Amonre)It's hard to believe a few days ago I didn't even know what America or Christianity was. I still don't know what Korea is though.
We stood in front of the tomb, the tomb of the nameless Pharoah from the lost 18th dynasty, who's father had a servant named Akundian, created the Millenium items. He took an entire village and burned them down into the Millenium items. For all I know, my Rod may have once been an entire family. There is myth that one survived but it's not certain. "Brother, now what do we do?"asked Isis. I let out a sigh, turning my eyes away from the tomb. "Once Hera is healed we have to getr her back to America somehow, she can't live here"I said. I didn't want to see her go, but she couldn't survive here, even with us. "I don't know how we can do that, from what I hear America is very far away"said Isis. "What about us? Should we continue living under ground and guarding the Pharoah's tomb?"asked Rishid. I shook my head, why should we! How's he so special, you don't see other Egyptains guarding a pharoah's tomb by wasting away in it. He must've been very arrogant to think he was important enough that his tomb should be guarded 3000 YEARS AFTER HIS DEATH! If the Pharoah does return, I'll make him suffer the pain we did.
"Malik-Sama, perhaps it's time we all leaft Egypt"said Rishid. "Please Rishid, call me Malik, and yes, once we return Hera to America we'll go somewhere else. Maybe this Korea I keep hearing about"I said. "Still, how?"asked Isis. "How did my darkside get here? There must be a boat around"said Malik. "Now that you mention it Malik-Sa, er Malik, there was a boat across when we took Hera to the doctor"said Rishid. I'm glad he was allready beggining to stop calling me Malik-Sama. "Good, once Hera's out of the hospital we'll bring her back home. For now let's spend the night in the tomb, our last night"I said.
IsisPOV
We came back to the hospital the next morning, Hera was as good as new. "Malik!"she said when they saw eachother. She rushed up and wrapped her arms around him, Malik returning the hug. I saw the smile on Rishid's face, and I couldn't help but smile. Malik finally found someone outside our family who cares about him. "Isn't this touching?"I gasped in horror, I heared it from Rishid too and Hera popped her head up. It was the Dark Malik, in control! He wrapped one arm around Hera's throat, holding her to him. "How!"I gasped. "His spirit was fatigued, still guilt ridden and sappy"he said. Hera was fighting back with everything she had, even kicking him in the shin but he held tight. "Let her go you bastard!"yelled Rishid. Rishid usualy didn't swear but I certainly couldn't blame him. "Bastard? You're right, I should've gotten to know my father a little better before I killed him but you can't change the past"he said. Hera pit his arm, the evil Malik screaming and waving his arm. Hera rushed towards us but was caught by the hair and pulled down. He pulled the end off his rod. "Enough! Go to Hell!"he said taking the cap of the end of his rod. I had to do something, but my millenium item couldn't do anything except protect me from his rod's mind control. He kept his foot on Hera's hair and was unable to move. Hera simply screamed loudly thrashing around. However for some reason a suprised look came over Malik's face and he stopped.
NormalPOV
In a large dark space within Malik's mind, the two stood face to face. "We'll settle this here demon only one of us can use this body and in spirit form you don't have the rod, so we're on even ground"said Malik. "This is great, I won't have to worry about you taking over anymore, then I'll kill Hera. We'll settle this in Ka battle, and I choose my Ka, Sun God of Ra!"he said. A giant yellow phoneix appeared in front of the Dark Malik. "Orsiris, appear and banish his God!"yelled Malik. Orsiris let out a blast of lightning from both it's mouths but Ra swiped them away with his wing, then turned itself into a flaming phneix, launching itself at Orsiris and burning it. Malik fell to knee, catching the breath he had lost. Orsiris was gone. "You are dark little Malik, I am your dark side, darkness can't defeat darkness"he said. "I may bare the weight of your syns demon but unlike you I'm going to repent from them. Obelisk, come forth!"he yelled. The large blue masculine God came out, striking it's fist down at Ra, Ra responding with a blast from it's mouth. The attacks clashed and a mighty explosion erupted blowing both Maliks back. Ra flew up into a firey phoneix, Obelisk punching it again, another explosion keeping the Maliks down. Ra however went through it and Obelisk shattered. Malik felt so dizzy and tired, his vision blurried.
"What a pitiful death"said Dark Malik. "No, it won't end like this! I still have a shot!"thought Malik. "Ra, come forth!"yelled Malik. "What!"yelled Dark Malik. Ra appeared now in front of Malik. Both turned in firey phneixes and clashed, explosions emmiting from them like crazy but neither one budging. "Keep going!"yelled Malik. His Ra however was shattered through. "How!"yelled Malik falling back. "Don't get it, your spirits fatigued and weak now, you can't fight anymore. Ra, send him to Hell!"yelled Dark malik. "NO!"
They both looked up, hera's spirit floating there looking down upon them. "Hera, get out, he'll kill you too!"gasped Malik. Hera floated down towards Malik, giving him a kiss. Malik's spirit began to glow. "What's going on!"gasped Dark Malik. The 3 Gods appeared in front of Malik, then mixed into a swirl. "The Gods are fusing, impossible!"gasped Dark Malik. "What the?"asked Malik. He remembered something from the scriptures, a prophecy:
The Dark one was sealed away but not defeated
When the battle of darkness against light returns
Only two unities can decide the fight
"So Hera's spirit is giving me enough strength!"he thought. "Helakti, finish off Ra and him!"ordered Malik. Dark Malik laughed. "Go ahead, you can't kill me! I'm eternal, I am Hell!"he laughed. The blast engulfed everything into light.
RishidPOV
"Malik!"I yelled. Malik sat up from the ground, he was back, thank Ra he was. "Malik, you okay?"asked Hera hugging him. "Thanks to you"he said. "Huh?"asked Hera.
MalikPOV
She must not remember what happened. I looked to the Millenium Rod. Picking it up I walked over to the ocean. "This is his source of power, without this he can't control me"said Malik. "NO!"he heared Dark Malik yell from the Rod. He dropped it into the ocean, where it sank. "Let's go"I said.
We boarded the ship and the man agreed to give us a ride back to America to drop Hera off. He lived in America so he would've had to go back anyway. Hera and I went into one of the rooms, alone. "I apoligize for whatever my other self did. I gave birth to him"I admitted. "Me and everyone else released him. He's gone now, and he's never coming back"she said. She gave me another hug and I happily returned it.
HeraPOV
I felt so warm, so safe in his arms. He wasn't muscular and certainly not big, but I still felt so shielded in him. I felt a little bad when I let go. "Will you come back to America? Your other side looked diffrent when he took you over, maybe we can convince them it was never you"I pleaded. I didn't want to leave him, not now. "I'm going to dedicate my life, to helping others to help repent for the havoc I've caused. I can't run away from America"said Malik I nodded, Isis entering the room. "Are you sure? Once in America, they can arrest you"said Isis. "Not if we testify. It was the Dark Malik who did it, he looked diffrent so it should work"I said. "What about you being kidnapped?"asked Isis. "I'll just say I ran away. I'll get in trouble from my parents but it'll be worth it. Please Malik"I begged. "I allready said i can't run away.I burried my darkside so my syn in Egpyt is done, now for America. However things won't be so easy without the Rod"he said. "Rishid and I are of adult age so we can pretend to be married, that should get us a house, correct?"asked Isis. "You'll have to buy one, but yeah it'll make you fit in easier if you're husband and wife. You allready share the same last name so you'll be able to fool everyone. If they ask, say you took your last name Isis"I said. She looked looked confused as did Malik. I couldn't help but laugh.
Epilouge:
Through photographic evidence, showing Dark Malik, regular Malik was leaft off the hook. Hera was grounded for months but she couldn't be happier. For now she would have to keep from seeing Malik since her parents forbid them seeing eachother but Malik was in town and if need be Hera could always run away to them. Rishid and Isis were managing fine, Isis opening up an egyptian museum and Rishidbecoming, among other things, a professional boxer.He was currently undefeated.
Malik was sent off to a private school and was quickly making friends. His darkside had indeed been banished forever. Malik never showed anyone the scars on his back.
MalikPOV
My private school will be having a holiday soon. After visiting Isis and Rishid, I know who else I'll be seeing. Wait for me Hera, I won't go back without seeing you.
The End
That wraps it up. The original ending involved Malik remaining in Egypt and Hera promising to come to Egypt when she was old enough on her own but sometimes the story writes itself and the story thought my ending didn't fit. I also added in a few elements from Memory World since it's the only other arc Malik's in. I couldn't help but make Rishid a professional boxer for kicks, considering how massive he is, he would be very good at it actualy. I thought the Ka battle would be the best way to finish of Y.Malik
Amonre is the cheif God in Egpytian religion, he's the one most picture when they picture an Egpytian person
Y.Bakura was the one who survived, having escaped. After seeing his village burned down, he took vengance and became the evil spirit we all know today. Akundian was ancient Kaiba's father.
In the japanese version, Yami is very arrogant at times, something the dub cuts out as they wouldn't want him to be a bad role model for kids
Ka is a monster, part of the person. Their are many Ka battles in Memory World, the final arc however neither Malik nor Dark Malik were in the Memory World itself but they are in the arc
Slifer in the dub, they named him after someone at 4kids. Guess what Slifer, you're not a God, you're a moron who works for a company that turns everything they dub into shit