Thank you all for reviewing...
And yes, I do concentrate on the dialogue. But I had stated it in one of my previous chapters.
But I guess some people are starting to get lost... I'm not really that great in description and all that jazz... when I read a fic I usually skip through until I see dialogue. I know for sure some people out there reading this feel the same way.
But I will try to be more descriptive this is a test chapter if you like the way it turns out and if you understand more review if you like the old ways review...
Also I have noticed that the format on here is different than that of windows. And I was wondering how do you get things bolded and italicized?
With that said lets continue shall we???
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Last time : Kagome had just told Sesshoumaru that the trip was only for three days.
"WHAT?!?!"
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He stood there in shock trying to register what Kagome had told him. The trip was only for three days not two weeks, oh was his dad going to get a piece of his mind.
Sesshoumaru abruptly rose from his seated position and made his way to the kitchen. Finding her stooped over the counter, looking at the papers that lay out in front of her.
There she stood, well more like humped over, in a wife beater, clearly no bra. White socks, and just in a pair of boxers. Looking at it more closely it was his pair.
Judging by the facial expression she had on her face, she was lost as he was.
He stood at the entrance wondering what was going through her head. He watched her shift through papers and jotting a few things down.
She couldn't understand what could have happened she remembered Mr. T saying two weeks. Her mother packed enough clothes for two weeks, well more like pajamas. Their plane tickets were dated for two weeks, and the room was reserved for two weeks. What in the Seven hells was going on?
She racked her head in frustration; she slammed her hand on the counter causing an echoing sound throughout the suite.
Her hand began to throb she looked at her palm, and full on red. She rubbed her hands together to try to get rid of the stingy sensation. She felt a hand brag a hold of hers, blown on slightly and a cold cloth of some sort.
Looking up she saw Sesshoumaru grinning. Shaking his head as if she was a child, she pouted and turned her head to look the other direction.
He gave a small laugh, released her hand and walked to the sink to rewet the cloth.
Outside her face was mad and confused on the inside she was doing the million man march. Here she was Kagome Higurashi, the 19 year old undecided chick, and there was Sesshoumaru Takadoshea, the 21 year old owns a company and decided on his life dude, no a MAN.
Even if he had a fiancée, she had him for two weeks and she was going to try to make it the best two weeks of her life.
"What are you doing?"-k
"What does it look like? Your hand is going to be fine just don't slam it again"-s
"Yeah yeah, alright"-k
"Now would you kindly tell me what is going on?"-s
"Well like I said, the itinerary is scheduled for three days and no more'-k
"You must be mistaken, maybe some pages are missing."-s
"Fine what ef. I don't feel like arguing right now. It's been a long ass day I'm going to bed."-k
"Ok"-s
He watched her as she began to organize the area she had once occupied. Placing the papers back into the folder, she grabbed a couple of grapes tossed them into her mouth and made her way towards the bedroom.
"Sesshoumaru?"
"What?"-s
"Whose getting the bed?"-k
"Does it matter? It's huge we both can fit"-s
"You sure?"-k
"Of course just like old times."-s
Yeah just like old times but what if she didn't want old times? What if she wanted new times, that if a girl and a boy share the same bed they would do something more than sleep, but no not Sesshoumaru. Can't do that with him, she could never, cause Kagura did that now. ~that bitch~
"Hey kag you alright?"-s
"Umm yeah I'll see you in bed."-k
"See you"-s
He watched as her figure disappeared into the bedroom. How beautiful she looked, he let out a sigh before returning his gaze to the neatly stacked files on the counter.
He walked over and examined the files. Once locating the correct file he removed it from the stack.
Carefully reading each page, checking to see what had been planned. Meeting at 7 two workshops after, lunch break, three more workshops and one more meeting, then the end of the day. The first two pages where the same the last page seemed short. Looking over it the top part was the same but the last is what caught his attention closing ceremony.
He was definitely going to call his father tomorrow, and was he ever going to give him a piece of his mind.
He couldn't think anymore, he just needed to rest, he placed the folder back in it's proper place.
He thought whether to sleep in the same room with Kagome or just sleep on the couch.
He slowly made his way to the bedroom.
He stopped at the threshold and peered into the darkened room.
Even though it was dark he could see her figure shifting in the bed
How her body illuminated, it glowed with perfection. Now he wanted more than anything to jump in the sack with her.
He thought of her, just sleeping like an angel, he wanted her, he didn't know why, but her felt whole and complete with her, his other half.
But his mind traveled towards Kagura, the woman he promised to marry, how could he deny his feeling for her.
When he had met her, she brought happiness back into his heart, but he though of it for a while, why did the happiness leave?
"Sesshoumaru?" her voice snapped him out of his trance
"Yes Kagome?" finding his voice
"Are you planning to come into bed, or are you going to sleep like that cause if you are be my guest just turn off the hall light"-k
"Sorry. I'm coming" He slowly made his way over and stood right next to her "Move Over"-s
She complied and twirled her way to the other side of the bed.
Once he let himself underneath the covers he felt a small hand pat him on the arm, her way of saying good night. He looked at her and saw her bright blue eyes for a second before her eyelids closed.
Her breathing evened out signaling she had fallen asleep. He felt the need to have her close. He snaked his arm around her waist and pulled her into a tight embrace. He buried his face into her damp hair breathing in her scent.
"g'night" he whispered before letting sleep claim him.
~*~*~*~*
Now tell me what you think about it...
EVIL I SAY I AM EVIL
~*~*~*~*
P.S I have two fics I am thinking about
1. My Vows.
I actually have this one up. Okay here is the summary
She lost love young. And a way for her to get away her mother moved her in with her father. But when she gets there her past basically comes back to haunt her. Inuyasha seems to remind her of her former love. Like hard core.
2. Return to me.
Inuyasha had the perfect life. Wife and child. But in a freak accident he lost his wife. After a year of glooming and mourning, his friend sets him up on a blind date. But during that date, he meets the spunky waitress. His heart goes a flutter. They start dating but something happens, and now he has to make the toughest decision he has ever faced.
Just let me know which one I should do...
Thanx ya'll
And yes, I do concentrate on the dialogue. But I had stated it in one of my previous chapters.
But I guess some people are starting to get lost... I'm not really that great in description and all that jazz... when I read a fic I usually skip through until I see dialogue. I know for sure some people out there reading this feel the same way.
But I will try to be more descriptive this is a test chapter if you like the way it turns out and if you understand more review if you like the old ways review...
Also I have noticed that the format on here is different than that of windows. And I was wondering how do you get things bolded and italicized?
With that said lets continue shall we???
~*~*~*~*
Last time : Kagome had just told Sesshoumaru that the trip was only for three days.
"WHAT?!?!"
~*~*~*~*
He stood there in shock trying to register what Kagome had told him. The trip was only for three days not two weeks, oh was his dad going to get a piece of his mind.
Sesshoumaru abruptly rose from his seated position and made his way to the kitchen. Finding her stooped over the counter, looking at the papers that lay out in front of her.
There she stood, well more like humped over, in a wife beater, clearly no bra. White socks, and just in a pair of boxers. Looking at it more closely it was his pair.
Judging by the facial expression she had on her face, she was lost as he was.
He stood at the entrance wondering what was going through her head. He watched her shift through papers and jotting a few things down.
She couldn't understand what could have happened she remembered Mr. T saying two weeks. Her mother packed enough clothes for two weeks, well more like pajamas. Their plane tickets were dated for two weeks, and the room was reserved for two weeks. What in the Seven hells was going on?
She racked her head in frustration; she slammed her hand on the counter causing an echoing sound throughout the suite.
Her hand began to throb she looked at her palm, and full on red. She rubbed her hands together to try to get rid of the stingy sensation. She felt a hand brag a hold of hers, blown on slightly and a cold cloth of some sort.
Looking up she saw Sesshoumaru grinning. Shaking his head as if she was a child, she pouted and turned her head to look the other direction.
He gave a small laugh, released her hand and walked to the sink to rewet the cloth.
Outside her face was mad and confused on the inside she was doing the million man march. Here she was Kagome Higurashi, the 19 year old undecided chick, and there was Sesshoumaru Takadoshea, the 21 year old owns a company and decided on his life dude, no a MAN.
Even if he had a fiancée, she had him for two weeks and she was going to try to make it the best two weeks of her life.
"What are you doing?"-k
"What does it look like? Your hand is going to be fine just don't slam it again"-s
"Yeah yeah, alright"-k
"Now would you kindly tell me what is going on?"-s
"Well like I said, the itinerary is scheduled for three days and no more'-k
"You must be mistaken, maybe some pages are missing."-s
"Fine what ef. I don't feel like arguing right now. It's been a long ass day I'm going to bed."-k
"Ok"-s
He watched her as she began to organize the area she had once occupied. Placing the papers back into the folder, she grabbed a couple of grapes tossed them into her mouth and made her way towards the bedroom.
"Sesshoumaru?"
"What?"-s
"Whose getting the bed?"-k
"Does it matter? It's huge we both can fit"-s
"You sure?"-k
"Of course just like old times."-s
Yeah just like old times but what if she didn't want old times? What if she wanted new times, that if a girl and a boy share the same bed they would do something more than sleep, but no not Sesshoumaru. Can't do that with him, she could never, cause Kagura did that now. ~that bitch~
"Hey kag you alright?"-s
"Umm yeah I'll see you in bed."-k
"See you"-s
He watched as her figure disappeared into the bedroom. How beautiful she looked, he let out a sigh before returning his gaze to the neatly stacked files on the counter.
He walked over and examined the files. Once locating the correct file he removed it from the stack.
Carefully reading each page, checking to see what had been planned. Meeting at 7 two workshops after, lunch break, three more workshops and one more meeting, then the end of the day. The first two pages where the same the last page seemed short. Looking over it the top part was the same but the last is what caught his attention closing ceremony.
He was definitely going to call his father tomorrow, and was he ever going to give him a piece of his mind.
He couldn't think anymore, he just needed to rest, he placed the folder back in it's proper place.
He thought whether to sleep in the same room with Kagome or just sleep on the couch.
He slowly made his way to the bedroom.
He stopped at the threshold and peered into the darkened room.
Even though it was dark he could see her figure shifting in the bed
How her body illuminated, it glowed with perfection. Now he wanted more than anything to jump in the sack with her.
He thought of her, just sleeping like an angel, he wanted her, he didn't know why, but her felt whole and complete with her, his other half.
But his mind traveled towards Kagura, the woman he promised to marry, how could he deny his feeling for her.
When he had met her, she brought happiness back into his heart, but he though of it for a while, why did the happiness leave?
"Sesshoumaru?" her voice snapped him out of his trance
"Yes Kagome?" finding his voice
"Are you planning to come into bed, or are you going to sleep like that cause if you are be my guest just turn off the hall light"-k
"Sorry. I'm coming" He slowly made his way over and stood right next to her "Move Over"-s
She complied and twirled her way to the other side of the bed.
Once he let himself underneath the covers he felt a small hand pat him on the arm, her way of saying good night. He looked at her and saw her bright blue eyes for a second before her eyelids closed.
Her breathing evened out signaling she had fallen asleep. He felt the need to have her close. He snaked his arm around her waist and pulled her into a tight embrace. He buried his face into her damp hair breathing in her scent.
"g'night" he whispered before letting sleep claim him.
~*~*~*~*
Now tell me what you think about it...
EVIL I SAY I AM EVIL
~*~*~*~*
P.S I have two fics I am thinking about
1. My Vows.
I actually have this one up. Okay here is the summary
She lost love young. And a way for her to get away her mother moved her in with her father. But when she gets there her past basically comes back to haunt her. Inuyasha seems to remind her of her former love. Like hard core.
2. Return to me.
Inuyasha had the perfect life. Wife and child. But in a freak accident he lost his wife. After a year of glooming and mourning, his friend sets him up on a blind date. But during that date, he meets the spunky waitress. His heart goes a flutter. They start dating but something happens, and now he has to make the toughest decision he has ever faced.
Just let me know which one I should do...
Thanx ya'll