Sorry, sweetangel4, but I didn't get your review right away. Stupid page is only showing yours when I tell it to specifically show only chapter 2 reviews.
Anyway, on to chapter three. Hope it's lives up to your expectations, seeing as how I'm writing these in ten minutes each so as to live up to my promise of every day.
Chapter Three: Trust
"The new hyperspace module is being constructed even now," said General Hammond. "If we're lucky it will be tested by the end of the week."
"General Hammond!" yelled Siler. "We've just detected an energy build-up of unknown origin!"
"Have you pinpointed it?" asked the General.
"Yes, and it appears to be a Goa'uld design! We think trying to shut it down would result in an explosion."
"So don't shut it down," responded Colonel O'Niell.
"We think that waiting will have the same effect."
"How large of a blast?" asked Hammond.
"How large is England?"
"That's big,"said Jack.
+I know it's there+ Nephthys told Sam. +And I know I can shut it down+
They may think we're going to try to make it explode early+ responded Sam. +And how do you know the design wasn't changed over the years? I mean you have been trapped in a cave for who knows how long.+
Goa'uld don't have the same ingenuity that humans do. It would not have been modified.+
Look, we still shouldn't go+
Under the circumstances, I afraid I must not allow you to have any say in the matter.+
Nephthys ran to where she sensed the device She began to pry off the cover.
"Step away from the device!" yelled an airman, pointing his gun at her.
/I must shut this down or we're all dead!\ Nephthys yelled, not even looking up. She continued to work.
"I said step away!"
Nephthys completed her work as the airman shot her.
"As soon as she was done the energy began to deplete," a voice said.
"Oops," said another voice.
Sam couldn't make sense of it. Then her senses began to come back together.
"She's waking up!" yelled Daniel.
"Well done, Major," said General Hammond. "You did good."
"It was Nephthys, sir," Carter managed to whisper. "Nephthys did it."
Well well well. Do they trust her after this? Or is it thought that she planted the device and disarmed it so they would trust her? I haven't really decided yet. I'll decide when I update, though.