1Finally fixing format sorry..

Hi I'm Dragonlady626 and this is my first story that I've put on here. To be honest I had the story on paper for a long time trying to get the beginning right and this is the best one I have come up with so Enjoy!

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Aftershocks

Yungsung looked from the sword in the ground before him to the girl in the corner.
He took a closer look at it and then stepped back. "That sword is definitely evil,"he decided out loud . He then shook his head and walked back to the corner where the girl was. She was out cold he figured, he felt kind of bad right now about that. Yungsung at that point in time then took it upon himself to take a closer look at the girl.

She wore a green shirt that was very short and white capri pants. She had dark green just-longer than her shoulders length hair that was in two braids. Yungsung realized all-in-all she looked younger than he was which was shocking. Yungsung recalled the fight they had earlier and that was one of the hardest fights he's ever had. "Well guess you were right, huh, girl, oy," Yungsung gave a short smile and continued,"Hmph can't just leave you here can I though, hm..."

Yungsung then looked around and spotted a bag by a window he grabbed it and then dug around it for a blanket. After a moment he hit paydirt. He rolled it out and set her on it .
After a moment the girl settled into a deeper sleep and hugged her blanket closer to her.
Yungsung had to admit she looked cute there. After a minute though he realized he was falling asleep he shook his head and figured he better wake her up so at least someone is awake that way if someone attacks them someone can wake the other up.

Something was shaking her was all that she knew... maybe if she didn't open her eyes she could fake being in a coma, the girl figured. So she kept her eyes closed and let the guy talk. Wake up girl, you were the one so hell-bent on not letting me have the sword so get up," she realized it was that guy from earlier. She still wanted to hear more of what he had to say. He has a nice voice she thought mildly, it was deep but not a resounding deep, more kind of soothing. Talim stop it, she thought sternly regaining control of her momentarily vacant thoughts. Talim then feigned waking up though she was entirely awake,"Hm..? Girl? What?...Uhh,
what's going on here?"Talim opened her eyes and noted a little worriedly, he looked beat up and he had a burn on his right shoulder,?"Are you okay?"

"Hmph. I'm fine, you?" He asked feigning disinterest. Talim could tell that he was faking something though, because he was crossing his arms for no apparent reason. She took note of that as well as his clothes. He wore a kimono like shirt that stopped just above his well-defined stomach. He had reddish-auburn hair and brown eyes. Was I momentarily blind Talim wondered, he's cute. Talim took a long pause to evaluate her injuries she had mended most of them after the guy had left. "yeah, I'm okay. My name is Talim by the way," she said calmly concealing the fact her thoughts had gone awry again.

"I'm Yungsung," he said curtly.

"Umm..were you not going to take the sword, Yungsung?"Talim asked fearing the worst.

"Yeah, but I don't need it," Yungsung answered calmly. He could get used to that he figured.

"Huh? Pardon me?"Talim asked looking surprised. For all her wisdom and intelligence Talim was at a loss. The guy who was so determined to have Soul Edge was telling her right here and now after all the fights he has probably been through. Including fighting her that he didn't need it or want it. "The sword, the one you were telling me was evil. So, you going to do something about it , since you had a plan right?" Yungsung asked grumpily, her disbelief must've been showing on her face because he continued even more grumpily with,"What you don't believe what I'm saying, you need proof see-me-here-without-the-sword"

Why is he so defensive? Talim wondered for a moment. Before speaking. "I don't need proof of that. Do you want to know what I am going to do? Is that what you're asking?"
Yungsung nodded and settled down onto the ground."Yeah,"

"Okay well, Everything has it's place and when something is not in it's place it throws everything out of balance. Even Soul Edge has a place and I intend on getting it there," Talim explained

"So, Where do you need to go?" Yungsung asked politely.

"I need to do something else first, and that I can do right here," Talim said mysteriously.
She then got up and walked toward Soul Edge and grabbed it's hilt.

A blinding light erupted from the sword momentarily blinding Yungsung. After it subsided both Talim and Soul Edge were gone.

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So what do you think... Did I keep faithful to the Talim in the game, to Yungsung?