1Okay I admit my summary sucked last time. Anyway so right now I am typing up my next chapter in desparate hopes that someone will read my first chapter even . I don't have a title for my story yet which has not been my #1 priority, I have to admit. At this point in time I am waiting for reviews which is frustrating and nerve racking. In the school library which is my only access to a computer so here I am. I'll start writing my next chapter. Hope someone reads this for the sake of my sanity. And oy, do I want that beta program or whatever someone typed about semi-desperately. I even noticed, once my story was on the internet that my paragraphs were messed up. Great just great I know someone is going to complain about it sigh. Oh well, I will try to do better this time.

Tuesday of next week at school:
Thank you!!! Okay, now I wish that my computer at home didn't need replacing that way I could type more so I will make do with what I got.
Thank you for the reviews! Oh and I didn't need to worry about my paragraphs. They got fixed. Phew
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"That was your plan, oh come on!" Yungsung yelled after he realised what happened to Talim. He realized she had gone after that hell thing,

So at the moment he didn't care if he was talking to himself because a)She was crazy b)No matter how tired he was he now couldn't get to sleep because c)If he tried to sleep someone would probably in a month find his dead body somewhere. Just great he thought bitterly after his reasons not to sleep. The first cute girl he meets anywhere is criminally insane.
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Talim stood in a burning wasteland. As she stood the very ground beneath her grew hot to the touch and her feet were burning .
The air was getting hard to breathe and soon after Talim was feeling the effects of oxygen deprivation. So when a figure that burned brighter than the surrounding fire. She couldn't see it. A blow suddenly connected to her stomach. Talim fell back and clutched her stomach.

She took a few gulps of air and focused forward. Before her stood a burning human-like figure that was wielding a staff. She immediately knew it was the thing that had attacked her as well as it's nature. It dove at her again this time though Talim could see it she somersaulted under it and took a breath of air on her way . She scored two hits from her elbow blades from behind it. When it tried to trip Talim she nimbly danced over the staff and leapt on and over it's head as she crouched after the jump. She breathed a large gulp during one of her somersaults. She stopped and turned. When she turned around she got slammed in the side by a very big sword (a zweihander). She got sent flying and landed hard on her shoulder. Talim saw the figure spin gaining momentum before it swung that big sword into the ground. Talim frantically somersaulted away.

Even with the extended breather Talim was exhausted. Talim was starting to feel winded. She needed to finish that thing soon. Her shoulder was protesting to the slightest movement and was starting to lose feeling. Talim ducked under another high attack and hit the beast with her good arm. Then knelt to breathe again.-
As Yungsung was getting drowsy again he could have sworn he heard footsteps behind him. Before he could fully turn around, he got hit in the back of the head by a familiar weapon. His vision blurred then unblurred to show a young woman in her twenties wielding a zanbatou.

"This isn't a place for kids,"she said sounding as if she were superior to him. He knew that voice anywhere, her name was Seung Mina, and she was the bane of his existence,"go home and leave Soul Edge to me."

Okay Yungsung thought, if she wanted to play then so be it. She was asking for it,"No, no let the young handle it,"Yungsung told her snidely. If that didn't work Yungsung figured than nothing would.
Seung Mina charged at him zanbatou first then at the last second spun into a side step. He had seen the ruse before and was ready for it.

He bent forward and scored three swift kicks, she recovered from quickly.

She shot a kick back, and swept her weapon near the ground, Yungsung dodged the kick, but then Seung Mina swept her zanbatou upwards and hit him in the stomach. He got sent down to the ground, he shifted his weight and rolled back into a stand. He then looked for an opening parried and launched himself into a long and involved string of attacks that was a gamble that payed off.

Seung Mina then stopped and looked around."It's not here is it.. Shoot,"Seung Mina said severely. Well Seung Mina soon left after the fight. It was easy to see that she was going to be gone for a while. Even if she found out that Soul Edge was gone she would want to gallivant still. Perhaps looking for something else... He didn't want to know about.
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For once Talim was glad she was so short. The fire thing had just tried lunging at her with two knives and had just missed her head.

While the thing was vulnerable Talim desperately leapt onto it and started pummeling it. After three hits it started shrieking and Talim got off it, she could barely stand as the light flashed again. Talim slipped into the comfortable warmth of unconsciousness.