1Still editing

Okay next chapter a friend of mine that helps me put my story on here still has my disk so at the moment I am working on something I had already started on a different disk. Oh well, worse has happened.
I have had no new reviews yet but my friend just put the new chapter on so, "I wait and wait for the wave to break"(imitating guitar sound)That was a song that just came to mind there. It's by the Red Hot Chili Peppers. Don't ask me why except for the fact that bit is kind of appropriate for me right now. I've kind of had a miserable day. The weather sucks where live right now, not to mention I am getting a cold.
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Yungsung had just turned around when the light shone again. He blocked his eyes and when it dissapated Talim was falling to the ground he caught her and set her onto her blanket. He assesed her injuries and did the best he could to help her out. She had a dislocated shoulder and numerous burns. He applied a bitter smelling ungent that he was told would help the burns heal faster. He reaplied some to his own burns. And applied some to Talim's. She had a dislocated shoulder that had hung limp by her side when she fell as well as a nasty bruise that was starting to show on her back. There wasn't much he could do about the bruise, but he knew how to put her bone back in place.

He carefully propped her up with her back to the wall and as gently as he could manage set her bone back in place. She must've been sent flying Yungsung figured as he set her back on her blanket, yeash. Yungsung sighed as he looked toward the horizon. It was slowly starting to turn purple. Yungsung had stayed up all night before and probably will again he figured. But right now it was best for Talim to sleep.
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She was flying Talim realised as she flew over the night sky she knew she was dreaming but enjoyed the sensation nevertheless. She used to envy the birds who were wrapped up in the wind everyday, when she was small. Now though she knew that to be a bird you had to be born one and blessed with wings. They had a short life Talim knew and her destiny could possibly stand through many generations of birds. And of her family.

She was soaring over the ocean right now and swiftly made her way to her home town. It was getting to be sunrise now and Talim knew that her mother and father would be waiting for her. She wondered, Would they recognize her like this after all this time? Talim shook her head of course they would it was her dream after all. She landed on the roof of her home and perched herself. For she had realized on the reflection of the sea earlier that she was a bird. Perhaps she could swoop down and make herself known as soon as they came out. Talim flew down to her window and watched her parents. They had aged a little but Talim knew them to be her parents.

She flew in through the open door to see that there was a young man on the spare mat in her living room. She landed on the ground and hopped her way towards him. He had his head covered by the blanket, so Talim used her beak and pulled the blanket down she was surpised to see instead of the recognizable head of black hair belonging to her old crush Tomas there was a head of reddish-auburn hair. Talim stopped pulling and let him wake up on his own. She was just about to pull the blanket again when she woke up.
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I have to admit I had originally planned for us to see Yungsung's dream but, I like this a lot better. Send me your opinions please