Yah, I know I'm not supposed to do this, but I can't leave you guys completely hanging while I go away for three days with no computer access ; So here's a little teaser for the next chapter, and Reviewer Responses!
Transfer
By Rukusho
Chapter 4- Packing
"Hawkeye," some one was knocking at the door, "Hawkeye, you in there?" Who's here this early in the morning? The knocking continued, and something started to bark. "Hawkeye? Are you in there? If you're in there, cover up if you're indecent." Riza's shot up in bed, eyes wide as saucers, looking at the clock. It's already 10 am! "I'm coming in Hawkeye!" Riza now knew who was outside the door. She jumped out of her bed and ran to open her door before the Colonel broke it down.
J.L. Dexter & Ayashi - Thanks so much for the critique! I always enjoy reading it (which is strange because I normally can't bear to read it,) but I really do agree w/ what you said. I had a lot of trouble with writing Kain for chapter two because the image that I have of him is pretty much based off of Spades 44's Havok and Fuery Drabbles ; Not the best true picture of him, but oh well, I'll end up rewriting parts of that chapter actually. I think I was trying to portray the shock more than anything that chapter, and now the emotions will start flooding into the plot.
Madam Midnight: Yah for procrastination! It's the best way to go imo (don't listen to me though, I have really good time managements skills when under pressure ) Good luck on the AP Chem! Hope this gives you a bit of taste for what's supposed to come!
Jo Jo Da Crow: I think you'll see how he's feeling in the…next two chapters coff like that helps any bit Yes, and poor Riza! She'll go through so much hell thanks to me oooooo foreshadowing!
Chaos of Hearts: Thanks! Please save the tears for chapter 6 and the end ; It's not worth it to cry right now. Thank you for al the comments!
Danibellerika: Haha, good D I've found a way to hook you guys! Lol, thanks for the comment!
Mortari: TT I know she's supposed to be with him…..gah I don't want to say to much ; Hmmmm…will true love prevail?
Rukunetsu: glomp Thank you for reviewing…taking time away from your kick ass movie! Can't wait to talk to you on Sunday!
Well…I got to get going. I need coffee….bad My crazy friend in Virginia decided to txt message me at 3:30 this morning passes out from lack of sleep I'll see you all Sunday, and hopefully I'll have something to post on Monday. From there out, most my updates will be on the weekend so maybe 12 chapters per week? See you all soon!