Because of stupid exams, I probably won't be able to update my other stories any time soon. In fact, I shouldn't have had time to write this! But anyway, this poem is kinda longer than the other poems I have written and 'Surprise Surprise' is about Julian and how evil Jenny was to him. I hate her soooooo much…GRRRRRRR! Stupid, ungrateful, losery… Sorry! I am rambling here. So anyway as I was saying before I so rudely interrupted myself, here is my poem:
How could she be so blind
To all your pain?
You lived in darkness.
Longing for her light,
Yet you were denied.
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Angry tears roll down my face,
As I remember all she did,
Her empty promises giving you hope,
Her lying kisses giving you comfort,
But never giving you the love you so desperately needed.
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Why couldn't she see
How much you needed her?
Wanted her for always,
To bring warmth into your cold harsh world.
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The only thing she left you,
Were cuts and bruises,
Scarring your soul,
And breaking your heart.
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How could she have chosen
Anyone but you?
Your love for her unending,
Undying and boundless,
Yet still she refused.
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Though you've gone,
And left your cruel heartless world,
Your love for her still lasts,
Unharmed by the centuries,
Unchanged by death.
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I still hope one day,
Your wounds will heal,
That you'll find another,
Worthy of your love,
And offering love in return.
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I dream of the day
When you'll leave your world of shadows,
And enter ours,
Find your soulmate,
To mend your broken heart.
Yes, I know technically Julian didn't die but he might as well have. Poor poor Julian…. Why did he have to fall in love with Jenny? Any normal girl would have been more then happy to stay in the Shadow World with him. And they would never have been dating that fungus Tom in the first place.
Please reply with any constructive criticism, comments, ideas about how to kill Jenny in the most painful way possible etc.
Hey! I have just had an idea….Maybe I'll do another poem talking to Jenny in it. Like this one, except directing it at her…. HMMMMM! I am not sure. What do you think?
P.S I am sorry for the very random poem structure….It is rubbish. If you cant think of a better one please tell me!