All right, I guess this is just to clear a few things up for b Sceptic /b , and some other confused or disappointed readers. I realize that it is looking like a Mary sue so far. (And yes I am aware of what a Mary sue is.) But what you readers must realize is that in total there is 526 words written, 83 of those words were not part of the story, so I think I haven't dug my grave to deep so far. Also, for the bases of her perfection, Draco is merely explaining things he knows nothing of. In all actuality this is a story of Electra herself, not what Draco perceives of her. I had begun this story with Draco doing the introduction of Electra to show how she carries herself. I'm not going to give away her whole being and characteristics, because that would tear down the entire story. But to clear the whole knowing all, she doesn't, (though she is smart, for some other reasons. And book smart) he was merely being coy. I suppose a badly brought out statement.
For the fact of Electra being Draco's love interest, I assure you, we won't be needing a rocket scientist to figure that one out. Electra isn't even close to perfect, I'm sure that no one could possibly be perfect with a father like her's.
Oh yes and that reminds me, the whole thing with the questions for J.k. and my characters not being fathomable. You see fan fiction has the word Fiction, (something invented by the imagination or feigned; specifically: an invented story fictitious literature as in novels or short stories) in it, because it is made up. This is purely from my imagination. I have a great respect for J.k., because without her I would have never found my love for words, reading, writing, poetry, ect. But all in all I highly doubt she's going to have that great of a problem with me tweaking the story a bit.
And I am terribly sorry for my horrific grammatical errors, I suppose if anyone really wants to they could help me out there. I'm still working on it as I'm 13. (Though that's no excuse.) I think I've cleared most of the questions and concerns. I do greatly appreciate you're critiquing, to tell the truth it is quite helpful, even if it is a pain in the arse. ).