Ok warning Character death, im writing another story at the minute and I thought of a different ending so I wrote this one with it, hope you like, oh and I will update that one soon, I've nearly finished the next chapter.
This will only have two chapters so a short one
Nick, Warrick and Catherine were gathered in the break room. Nick and Warrick played on a computer game while Catherine read a magazine.
"Hey, Brass just called one in six bodies," Nick was up straight away. "I take it you don't mind helping then" Grissom commented as Catherine put down her magazine.
"What happened?" she asked.
"Mass shooting at a supermarket and two hitchhikers were found dead half a mile away, suspected to be the same people" he said heading for he cars.
"Where's Sara?" asked Nick
"She's late I've pager her told her to meet us there" he finished as Nick made a 'what' face at Warrick.
When they arrived on the scene they had to stop quite a distance away. The police officer told them there was tire treads going from the two dead hitchhikers to the store and Brass said not to let anyone touch them. This scene was eerie, officers seemed gathered away from the store and more to the cordon. They never seemed that bothered about evidence before normally it was stomp everywhere checking for danger, today it was keep to the sides.
"HEY" Brass ran over to the cars.
"He's keen" commented Nick. Everyone got out with their kits.
"Guy's I erm" Brass couldn't finish. Catherine noticed the look in his eyes, his face was pale, o this must have been a pretty bad sight to affect him.
"Catherine, I need to tell you something first.." Brass was interrupted.
"MOM" Lindsey ran over hugging her mom.
"Lindsey are you ok, what are you doing here?" Lindsey had Brasses coat wrapped round her and it wasn't until the wind blew it Catherine noticed there was blood all over her clothes.
"Oh god. Are you hurt" Catherine began frantically checking her for injury's.
"No. MOM" Lindsey shouted to get her attention. "Mom, she's dead it's my fault". Tears ran down Lindsey's cheeks.
"She helped me. I Tried to run" Lindsey broke down. Catherine didn't understand what she meant but comforted her all the same. The rest of the group jut stood watching.
"Lindsey. It's not your fault, she wouldn't want you to think that" said Brass bending down to her level. His eye's now also glistened with tears.
"I didn't know how to tell you over the phone…one of the victim's …it's Sara" those words seemed to echo, it's Sara. Everyone stood. Catherine held Lindsey tight. Nick dropped his kit to the floor and kicked I, Warrick turned away and Grissom just stood.
"She saved my life" sobbed Lindsey. This was something Catherine could not imagine Sara doing.
"I can call Ecklie get someone else in but I thought…" Grissom simply nodded at Brasses comment. Nick picked up his kit and walked to stand next to Grissom. It was then Catherine noticed Greg. He was sat on the edge of the car seat his face pale like Lindsey's tears could be seen running down his face.
"Greg look after Lindsey" Catherine lead Lindsey over to Greg and they sat together in the back of the car. The walk to the scene seemed like miles. They were shown the too dead hitchhikers each killed with a single built, probably shot as they made their get away. They were lead in through the back of the shop. There was a dead cashier, money still in the till so not a robbery, three customers two seemed to have being involved with a struggle. As they went out through the front there was a woman laid in the doorway.
"Five more been taken to hospital" Brass said quietly taking them out side. There laid on the floor outside the front of the shop was Sara. Catherine had to turn away, Nick could no longer hold back his grief and feel to the floor, Warrick put a hand on his shoulder. Sara was laid on her front a coat covered her as a sign of respect a pool of blood had formed around the side of her. Grissom stood staring at her lifeless body, it was too late now she was gone. A corner appeared through the doors and asked Brass where he was to start.
"Start by going home" Doc Robbins voice was heard.
"What" asked the other corner put out.
"Go home, me and David will do this" he said as a upset David followed him through the doors.
"It's my shift" the man began.
"And this is my friend and she will be taught with dignity and respect by me and David" the man looked taken back and walked away.
"How'd you know?" asked Grissom.
"Brass" he simply said bending down to Sara.
"Get a trolley, I'm not examining her here" he told David. Nick had begun pummelling his hand into his kit.
"Nick, braking you hand isn't going to help, if it did I would gladly break mine" Grissom's compassion suspired Nick and he stopped. Doc gently rolled Sara onto her front. Catherine gasped, she had clearly struggled, bruising and blood around her face. Doc took Sara shoulders and David her feet as her did so the bone in her legs scrapped it was clearly broken. David had to suppress his gag reflex as they laid Sara on the trolley and covered her body
Everyone stood silent until. "Sir we got the CCTV from the inside and out side of the shop" said a officer handing tapes to Brass.
"Lets start" said Grissom picking up his kit.
"Follow the blood," replied Nick wiping his eyes with his arm.
"Actually with that tape, we need sample of everything and that should show us what happened.
Each person was given their own bit to take samples from. Grissom had taken any from around Sara. Catherine had gone to talk to Lindsey.
"Hey Lind's You said Sara saved you life" Lindsey whipped he eyes with her sleeves.
"They said that they were going to kill me" sobbed Lindsey.
"It's ok I wont let them hurt you".
"That's what Sara said" she whispered.
"She gave me a lift, said you wouldn't like me walking around by myself. Then this car started following us. I got scare but then it went away" she started crying again. "It's my fault I wanted to phone you but Sara's cell wasn't working so we stopped so I could use the pay phone" Catherine wiped her eyes as Greg stared at the sky out the window not wanting to look at either of them.
"They tried to grab me, Sara stopped them, they started fighting" she began to cry again.
"It's ok you don't have to say anything else. I call Nan you can stay with her while I finish here" said Catherine hugging her. Greg followed Cath back to the shop.
"Payphone's out the front Sara's body's out the back" Said Catherine pointing to the phone.
Once inside they found everyone gathered around.
"We've finished but we did find this" said Warrick unfolding a piece of paper and handing it to Cath "it was out front near they payphone.
It read LET OUR BROTHER OUT OR YOU LOSE SOMEONE YOU LOVE. Catherine broke down, someone had tried to take Lindsey and Sara had died probably trying to get to her.
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