Just to get a couple points across.
1.This is my first time writing a Fanfiction here.
2.Not a big fan of romance, but look what I'm writing!
3. MOST INPORTANT I accept all criticism, but do not just say "this fic sucks" or along the lines of that, give me a reason, and how I can make it better. Just a matter if I listen to you or not!
Black Gumdrop
The sun rose above the water, casting a beautiful red shadow on the blue sea. And once again, the young Air bender was in some kind of trouble.
"Aang! You can't just do that, it doesn't it work that way." Said Katara, as she glanced frustrated by his ignorance. "Katara, you just don't understand, it will work." Replied Aang, more cheerful about the situation. Aang laid his eyes on Katara as she fiddled with his annoying puzzle. "Do you give up, can I show you now?" Aang asked, excited. Katara let out a sigh and nodded.
Aang started to arrange the pieces in the correct order just when Sokka runs in scattering the pieces. "Sokka!" Aang depressingly said. "Sorry Aang, but the earth guy………you know, what's his name is telling a story. He told me to get you and Katara." Sokka rushed out with some food. "Okay, coming." Katara replied and looked at Aang with her caring eyes. "Come on Aang, I help you after the story is finished." Aang smiled and blew him self up. They both hurried through the town to hear the so called story.
"Now Aang," The elderly earth man asked Aang. "Did you know any fire benders?" Aang looked surprised, but answered anyways. "Yes, I did." "Then you know that not all of them are against the Avatar." The elderly man spoke, with his slow deep voice. "Well yeah, almost all of them believed in him, but now there all gone." Aang looked at him curiously. "That is where this story begins, and is proof that not all of them are gone."
Sokka's eyes got wide, and leaned in to hear the story. So did the others. The elderly man breathed and started to speak. And everyone went silent.
"On these shores, about 17 years ago. A fire navy ship sailed these seas……………"
Sorry it's slow, but I have to go to bed soon.
Black Gumdrop