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Rating: R- language (no kidding), and possible "sexual references" in the future, it's mainly rated R "just in case" but please don't be disappointed if there are no detailed sex scenes later on…

As you'll probably be able to tell later in the chapter, some of the D-tent fellas are a little OOC, but I'm sure you can forgive me for that as it happens in most FAN FICS.

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Meet the D-Tent Boys

When Mr. Pendanski left her to make her bed and get herself situated, but making the bed didn't take too long, so Suze just lay on her cot as she tried to accept her fate. Okay, they're guys right? You're the only girl, so you're going to have to be tough and…I'm just not going to tolerate any harassment of any sort. Show them that you're tough too, and not just a lousy girl. None of the guys here are decent are they? I mean, this is a fucking detention camp! Shit…

A tall boy in an identical orange suit walked in, and as he got a good look at her he stopped dead in his tracks and stared, the toothpick he was chewing fell out of his mouth. So this guy didn't know I'd be a girl? Ha! This'll be fun… Suze automatically plastered a friendly smile on her face as she sat up in her cot,

"Hi," She chirped, the boy's eyes remained wide as marbles as he snapped out of his shock,

"Hi…uh-" He started slowly, but Suze interrupted,

"I'm Suze Jacobs; it's certainly swell to meet you- um…" Dear God, I just said 'swell', shoot me now.

"Uh…My name's Squid," Squid? What kind of name is that? Oh, I get it, it's a nickname. But it's still a weird nickname. Squid looked nervous as he tried to say something; just nothing was coming out, but Suze waited patiently. She was enjoying her effect on him. "Uh, sorry but, uh…are you a girl? It's just that your hair is really long so it's a little confusing…"

Suze gave him a fake little laugh, "Yes, Squid, I am a girl…" Squid nodded slowly and made his way to his cot, which was two cots away from Suze's. Suze felt a little shock herself. Wow, no nasty comments or anything…huh, but he's only one guy. This camp is full of guys. At least there's one that's decent. She looked up at him with raised eyebrows, but he wasn't staring at her anymore, not bad looking either.

She suddenly heard running footsteps, and as they got closer, she heard the voices that accompanied the runners,

"Where is SHE?!?!" Yelled a muscular black boy with dirty glasses, another larger black boy followed him into the tent, "Where is…" He realized that Suze was right in front of him, he grinned broadly, "Hi, I'm X-Ray," he stuck out his right hand and Suze shook it, he gave her a quick up-and-down analysis. And here we go with the odd 'only girl' moments…but X-ray didn't say anything rude either. Holy shit, maybe they're all gay…

"And this is Armpit." Suze and the larger boy also shook hands, Armpit? I guess they all have weird nicknames for each other. I wonder if…Suze stopped herself, why she would want a nickname like Armpit or Squid…well, she felt that she didn't want one. "Hey Squid," Said Armpit, "did you know that the new 'guy' was gonna be a girl?" Squid looked up,

"I sure as hell didn't, how did you know X?"

"Mr. Pendanski told me, and he said to be on our best behavior 'an all that shit. Oh!" X-Ray looked at me and covered his mouth in mock surprise, "I'm sorry! I shouldn't swear in front of a girl!"

"No worries," Suze answered, "I swear all the time…See? FUUUUUUUUUCK." X-Ray seemed a little taken aback by my answer, "This is a detention camp remember? I'm no damsel."

"Right." X-Ray replied. He sat on his cot, which was between Squid's and Armpit's.

"Oh man!" Armpit said excitedly, "Magnet and Zigzag are gonna have fun with this news…" Suze knew he was referring to her being a girl, but she became worried,

"Whadya mean that they'll have fun with me?" Armpit realized what he just said,

"Oh, um," He said, stumbling over his words as Suze gave him her 'dangerous look.' "I just meant that uh, well, they don't know about you bein' a girl yet, so, that was what I meant!" Suze almost laughed at his answer, he almost seemed scared!

Then two more guys walked into the tent, one on the shorter side and a Latino, the other one was also tall, like Squid, with dirty blond hair sticking out at every angle. They immediately walked past her, not noticing that she was even there, and the Latino asked,

"Hey, where the hell is that new guy?"

"She's right there." Squid pointed in my direction, with a small smile on his face as though he were keeping himself from cracking up. The two boys began to turn around.

"Ha! So you're say'n the new guy's a…" the Latino stopped in mid-sentence, staring open mouthed at Suze, who grinned and waved.

"Holy shit, he's a girl." Said the tall blond,

"Holy shit she is! Damn! How the hell did she get here man?" The Latino said, laughing. The blond boy wasn't done staring at her; he finally gave her the routine up-and-down, twice, and stared at her face again.

"Hello?" Suze shouted to get his attention, waving her hand in front of him. He finally stepped out of his trans. "Have you never seen a girl before?"

"Ya, actually I have, I'm just not used to it nowadays." He switched his gaze to her bedpost,

"Then I guess we won't have any problems, will we?" Suze challenged, he looked into her eyes, and he didn't need to say anything to challenge her back.

"This is Magnet," X-Ray said, referring to the Latino, "and this is Zigzag." He said pointing to the blond boy. Suze nodded in greeting,

"I'm Suze." There was a short period of silence, "So, do all of you live in D-Tent?" They all nodded, Wow, lots of males that I'll have to change in front of! Dammit.

"Ya! And you still have to meet Caveman and Zero" said Magnet.

Suze suddenly realized that a terrible smell had overpowered the grungy-tent-smell and she wrinkled her nose, "What the HELL is that smell?" All of the boys grinned and turned to look at Armpit, who shrugged his shoulders innocently.

- - -

A loud knocking was heard twice on the door. Her mother got up from the dinner table to answer; a few low mumbles of voices could be heard from the dining room. Suddenly two policemen appeared in the doorway with her mother yelling desperately after them, "There must be some kind of explanation for this! You can't just come into our home and take our daughter!"

Suze looked up in panic to hear her mother refer to her, the two policemen both had the same stern look on their faces, "Susan Jacobs, you are under arrest, whatever you say or do can, and will, be used against you in a court of law…"

"What did I…?" Suze began,

"I suggest you stay quiet Ms. Jacobs." Scowled a policeman as he force cuffs on her wrists and pulled her out of the dining room,

"NOW HOLD IT!" Her father yelled angrily, "You need to give us an explanation for barging into our house and taking our daughter or I'll contact the authorities!"

"We are the authorities Mr. Jacobs, have a nice evening." Suze was so taken aback by what has been going on that she didn't start yelling until she was being dragged outside,

"MOM! DAD! I DON'T KNOW WHAT HAPPENED! I DIDN'T DO ANY…" Only the door was quickly shut behind her by the second policeman, and as he was shoving her into the back seat of the patrol car, Mr. Jacobs and Mrs. Jacobs were outside too yelling at the two policemen. "THIS IS ILLEGAL! I'LL HAVE A TALK WITH THE SHERIFF! THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE…" but that was all Suze heard from her father as her door was slammed and the car took off. Suze only sat there, in shock, all alone and unable to speak, thinking about the look on her parents' faces as the car left them behind.

- - -

Suze woke up suddenly from a loud bell, looking around dazedly, she asked, "What the hell is that?"

"Dinner" answered X-Ray. She watched as the boys filed out of the tent, then she followed close behind Magnet as they approached one of the old buildings.

She entered what looked like a run-down cafeteria with wooden tables and benches, and a buffet line where the boys were quickly filing in. Cool, a buffet. Nice. Only once she had grabbed a tray and started down the line, the only thing that looked remotely edible was the bread, everything else looked like burned bean-like mush, but she took some of it anyway; she hadn't eaten all day. After she was served she turned to find a place to sit, looking for X-Ray or Squid…she heard a few whistles coming from her left, she looked to see that none of the D-Tent boys were over there, but a whole table of guys were staring at her in shock, then she heard more cat calls from that direction, so she turned to her right and began looking for a place there.

"Hey Suze!" a voice yelled from across the cafeteria, Magnet was waving her over his table, and as she approached she noticed that all of the D-Tent boys sat together as she grabbed a chair between Armpit and another guy with a red hat and curly hair. "Okay, Suze, this man next to you is Caveman, and the guy next to Zigzag is Zero." Red hat boy, Caveman, stuck out a hand and shook hers, she glanced at who Magnet called Zero. He was a smaller guy and had to be considerably younger than the rest of the boys; he gave her a small nod, and then continued eating. Silence spread over the table, shit, I want to leave. Suze looked down at her plate, "What the hell is this?"

"Food." Zigzag answered blankly, she looked up and gave him a dirty look.

"Whatever that is…" Suze began.

"Just try it; it's not so bad after a while" said Caveman in mid-bite. Suze lost her appetite and got up to throw out the food in her tray,

"Can I have your bread then?" X-Ray asked; she handed him her bread as she made her way back to the tent.