Influence
Well, since Schest has given up and gave the story to me I have great plans for the universe, plot, etc.
This is my first fic. I hope you review and show me my mistakes so I can make better chapters and fics.
Chapter 1:
The End Of Hao
Yoh's POV
I thought he died, but he managed to stay in my head but luckily I'm strong enough not to let him control me so all he says are about world destruction, killing, world destruction, raping, swearing, world destruction and showing frustration and me helping him. Of course I got sick and tired of his ramblings and sometimes shouted out telling him to keep quiet and I got embarrassed. I keep on telling him in my mind that I'll never join him, so I thought…
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