My real first chapter. Please review!
Influence, Book I
Chapter III:Control
"Hey, if you make me go into his body for the night, I promise you something very sinister." Hao says from deep inside.
"And how do I do that?" Yoh says while looking at the fainted Ren.
"Well, it won't be good, but it's worth it" Hao answers.
"Just cut to the chase!" Yoh says impatiently.
"Ya have to kiss him on the lips." Hao says with hesitation.
"You're doing this for your own pleasure, then damn you! Well if it doesn't work, you' re going to die, in my head or not!"
With that Yoh looked at Ren and hesitatingly kissed him. "Eugh… I'm never going to do that" Yoh says to himself. "Hey, wake up, Hao!" Yoh says impatiently and kicks Ren at the back of his head. "Wake up!" Ren was slowly standing up while rubbing his head. "You didn't have to kick that hard!" Ren raised his head and smiled the smile only Hao could make. "I'll back in your head in the morning." With that Ren/Hao walks out.
Well that's all I can give you for now. I'll up date very soon.