Here I am from my writing block. I was delayed due to the fact that this is based on a Star Fox Comic, and after reading it (thanks to the reviewers who told me about the comic), I found out that my story is messed up. So I spent the past weeks fixing the story to make it follow the basic plot of the comic, but I added some changes on my own. For example, the fight between Fox and Falco isn't just an Arwing fight.
Here is where you can read the comic this story is based on (but first, go to the bottom of the page under Star Fox 2002):
Chapter 3 – Leader vs. Ace Pilot
In the Great Fox, Fox, Peppy, and Slippy were discussing on what they should do.
"I will look for Katt using the Arwing," said Fox.
"Why can't I do something important?" asked Slippy.
"Well, do you remember…" began Fox.
FLASHBACKS
"Slippy, get back here!" shouted Peppy while Slippy flew towards the enemy while Fox was flying above a Cornerian ocean, "Slippy, look out. Bogey on your tail."
Slippy was flying away from a ship, shooting at him.
"Whoa! Help me!" shouted Slippy.
Then Fox remembered when he was in Sector Y with Slippy.
"Escaping? I don't think so!" said Slippy before being chased by a large group of ships, "Hey! Leave me alone!"
Then Fox remembered when Star Fox was in Fortuna.
"Stick to the pond, froggie," said Andrew.
"Fox! Get this guy off of me!" shouted Slippy, making no effort to escape himself, for Andrew didn't have his contact lenses on, so he barely saw anything.
Then Fox remembered one of Slippy's biggest mistakes, which was in Sector X.
"Let me help!" said Slippy as he flew to Spyborg who Fox was fighting.
"Slippy, get back here!" shouted Peppy.
Then Spyborg knocked Slippy away into Titania.
"Fox!" shouted Slippy.
"Slippy!" shouted Fox.
Then Fox remembered having to save Slippy from the Goras from Titania, nearly destroying the Landmaster. Then he remembered this in Sector Z.
"Don't worry, Slippy's here!" said Slippy.
Then there's a huge explosion that vaporized everything within a fifteen-mile radius.
END FLASHBACKS
"That last one never happened, right Fox?" asked Slippy.
"It could happen," replied Fox.
So, Fox flew the Arwing over the desert to look for Katt using the newly-installed Tracking System.
Meanwhile, Katt and Falco were flying in a large brown ship. This was a ship that was found in the Titanian desert. Luckily, it still worked.
"I just hope that this doesn't explode on us," muttered Falco.
"Wait, what is that?" asked Katt, pointing to Fox's Arwing in front of the ship.
"It's Fox! He must be looking for us!" replied Falco, "Let's go and…"
"Let's jam our communicators," interrupted Katt as she pressed some buttons.
Meanwhile, Fox found something in his tracking system.
"Peppy, I found something on the tracking system," Fox said through the VAC.
"All right. Where is your position?" asked Peppy.
"I'm…" began Fox when he heard a screeching sound from the tracking system, "Crud! They have a jammer!"
Then Falco's Arwing flew out of the brown ship and towards Fox's.
"Wait," Fox said as he turned off his tracking system, "Slippy, I thought I told you to stay in the Great Fox!"
"I am inside the Great Fox!" replied Slippy.
"Okay, what about you, Peppy?" asked Fox.
"I'm also inside the Great Fox! What's going on?" replied Peppy, "And you know that I can't fly an Arwing anymore, unfortunately."
"It's Falco!" exclaimed Fox as he talked to Falco through his VAC, "Falco, what are you doing?"
"Hey Fox! Can you help Katt and I? You see…" began Falco.
"You're working for Katt!" asked Fox.
"Yeah, but…" began Falco.
Suddenly, Fox began shooting at Falco, for he knew Falco was an enemy.
"Fox! What the crap are you doing?" asked Falco.
"You're an enemy Falco, and I, as the leader of Star Fox, have to shoot down the enemy," replied Fox.
"What, do you think that I am actually working for reviving Andross?" asked the bewildered Falco as he flew out of Fox's laser range.
"I don't think, I know," replied Fox.
"Then I'll play it your way!" said Falco as he did a somersault to fly behind Fox's Arwing.
Then Falco shot lasers at Fox's Arwing, damaging it. Then Fox did a somersault, but suddenly, Falco flew upwards. As Fox made his Arwing make a complete stop in mid-air, he looked up. He couldn't see Falco.
"Where the hell is Falco?" wondered Fox before realization hit him, "Of course. He's hiding in the sun's glare. I just wish they didn't teach us that in the academy."
Just then, Falco flew downwards at full speed, shooting lasers. Fox tried to do a barrel roll, but Falco kept on shooting. Then Falco flew through Fox's Arwing's wing, lobbing it off.
"Crud!" thought Fox when he thought of an idea.
Fox did a U-turn to fly towards Falco's Arwing. Neither of them were flying away from each other, so soon, they were going to crash into each other. Then Falco finally swerved out of the way and that was when Fox chased him. While doing that, Fox shot a charged shot at Falco's Arwing.
Suddenly, Falco did a somersault, and soon, the charged shot was chasing Fox. Soon, Fox's Arwing was hit as he began going down. Just then, Fox left his Arwing and with perfect timing, jumped onto the wing of Falco's Arwing. Then Fox got out his blaster and pointed it at the windowpane and at Falco's head.
"Continue opposing Star Fox and you'll die," said Fox.
"Maybe the years of boredom have affected your mind," replied Falco.
Then he did a barrel roll when Fox held onto one wing while holding the blaster. Dizzy, Fox shot blaster shots until they made contact with the hull of the Arwing, making it crash into the sands next to Fox's damaged Arwing while Fox fell off the wing before he was crushed by the sands below him.
"All right. You want to fight? I'll give you a fight," said Falco as he left his Arwing.
Just as Fox was about to come to his senses after the barrel roll and the crash, Falco jumped and punched Fox in the face. Falco was about to punch again when Fox kicked Falco's shins, making him trip. Then Fox held the blaster over Falco's head.
"Don't move," ordered Fox.
Just then, there was a small earthquake, which was ordinary in the planet of Titania. That was enough to trip Fox. Then Falco kicked the blaster out of Fox's hands. Then Falco, bent over Fox, began punching Fox's head mercilessly over and over and over again. When Fox was bruised enough, he kicked, and his foot made contact with Falco's crotch, sending him away. Then Fox bent over Falco and punched his head mercilessly over and over and over again. Then Falco pushed Fox away and just as Fox was about to retaliate, Falco jumped into his Arwing and flew away, leaving behind a trail of smoke.
Then Fox looked around and tried to find the Great Fox. Then there was a sandstorm, but Fox passed out.
