attack of the n00b-chapter 3

hello, this is son-of-snicket i have not had any reviews so far but im gonna carry writing it anyway because it is fun, anyway, please review and it will give me a little boost to make the story better, enjoy!

Neo reached the ground floor, he casually walked out of the building, he was outside, he had to work out this n00btrix thing, it didnt make sense, it happened too fast.
suddenly, a shiny black car pulled up recklessly, leaving long black skidmarks almost engraved into the pavement 'get in!' a familliar voice bellowed.
Neo did as he was told

They where all wearing long black trenccoats and sunglasses, Neo couldnt really see their faces 'mr.Anderson, pleased to meet you, my name is Morpheus' Morpheus said, shaking his hand 'what do you guys want with me'
'we will explain in due time'
'no, tell me now!' Neo shouted, he was starting to get angry 'trinity' Morpheus said 'get the gun 'sure thing' a woman in the passenger seat said, she handed morpheus a large gun 'calm down mr anderson'
'keep that away from me'
'realx, may i call you Neo'
'if you keep that peice of crap away from me, yes'
'what this, it wont hurt you Neo i promise, look'
Morpheus fired the gun.

Neo woke up in a large, empty room Sunnypeak flats, the shittiest place in town 'he's awake' a voice Neo recognised as trinity 'indeed' Morpheus said he reached other, and teared off the duct tape from Neo's mouth 'OW!' neo yelled in pain 'sorry Neo' Morpheus said 'Neo we have something to show you'
'hey! wheres my mountain dew'
'i got thirsty on the way' a man Neo hadnt recognised spoke up 'quiet Chypher' Trity said 'sorry' said Chypher 'as i was saying' Morpheus glared at chypher and trinity angrily 'come with me neo'
Neo got up and followed Morpheus 'hey Neo' chypher said 'next time get me a code red' trinty and chypher laughed.
Neo walked into the room where Morpheus was,
a sudden icy wave came accross him as he stepped in 'Neo' Morpheus said morpheus unclenched his hand, showing a red and a blue capsule 'You take the blue pill and the story ends. You wake in your bed and you believe whatever you want to believe'
'You take the red pill and you stay in Wonderland and I show you how deep the rabbit-hole goes'
'remember, all i am offering is the truth' Morpheus seriously said Neo opened his mouth and popped in the red pill.

look out for part 4 soon, as you can see im taking the story in a new direction, please reiew with you thoughts son-of-snicket