Okay, this is my first story so if you think it stinks then post what you think in my reviews.

Laura, Hamtaro, Cona, and Oxnard were at Mr.Yoshi's (their teacher)
mother's house on the mountain. They always liked going there on week-
ends to here spooky old stories and getting scared out of thier socks.
"Well," said Laura. "Start the story." "Okay." said Mr.Yoshi's mother.

" It all started when there was this girl named Keoni. Keoni had a pet hamster named Roxy. But the wierd thing about Keoni was that she had very bad tempermental problems. Even the slitest thing would make her angry. She wanted a hamster and when her parents said no she got so angry that now she only has one parent left! But that parent left bought her a hamster which is now named Roxy. She took her hamster to shool one day and showed her of to the other kids in school. One student got jelous beacause he was allergic to furry animals so his parents wouddn't buy him any pets that look cute and furry. Only ones that were hairless and ugly. So while Keoni wasn't looking the boy opened the cage door and Roxy escaped! When Keoni went to check her hamster,Roxy, she was gone! Keoni got so angry that she ran away from home. Now she travels everywhere to find the person who let her hamster loose and to find her hamster. And guess where she's looking now.
HERE! RIGHT IN THE FOREST NEAR THIS VERY MOUNTAIN!" "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"
Laura, Hamtaro, Cona, and Oxnard all screamed in fright. Their hair stood up, thier bones chilled, and thier teeth chattered like jello on a motercycle on a hot day in July.