off the story for a bit
Ok I have had some people read this story and they don't like it. TO BAD, SO SAD! This is my story, this is how I want it to be. I don't go to your stories and tell you how to write them. Leave CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, OR NONE AT ALL! I have tried every way I can think of to put this Princess into this story so that my plot works, BUT everybody complains about how I have her. "She is too Mary Sue" "There is no such thing as Mountain Elves", I KNOW THIS! I MEAN FOR HER TO BE A BIT OF A MARY SUE! SHE IS OLD, SHE HAS LIVED FOR A VERY LONG TIME! SHE IS SUPPOSE TO KNOW EVERYTHING, SHE IS SUPPOSE TO BE ABLE TO FIGHT THE WAY SHE DOES! SO GET OVER IT! Read the story, get more into it, my plot hasn't even started to come out yet. DON'T JUDGE, TILL YOU KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON! And if any of you have any questions, ASK ME! Don't go off to another website and talk trash about my writing! will be happy to help anyone who needs help understanding my story, but don't talk trash about my writing, ok? That is one thing no one does, my writing is mine, your's is your's, I love to write, writing is what I am going to do with my life, can you say the same? Can you make money off of your writing? I can, I have. No I don't have proper writing skills, you know why? I live in a place where writing doesn't mean anything, everybody is a farmer, their children are farmers, and their children are farmers. That is not going to be me! I am going to school for writing when I get out of high school. I don't know correct grammar, I don't know how to spell hardly, I don't know sentence structure, and you know what, I have read stories that is all proper like that, I HATE THEM! Writing is suppose to be fun, you express yourself in writing, I write what I say, or see in my head. I don't talk proper because it doesn't matter in my town. So I don't write proper! But if you don't like my writing, DON'T READ IT, AND DON'T INSULT ME! GET IT? GOT IT? GOOD!
I will fix my story a bit, maybe ya'll will be able to understand it a bit better.