For those of you that think I'm rushing 'Miss Simon Cowell'(coughAnne Camp aka Obi-quiet cough)im only 12 so deal w/ it. Though im trying my best to include more detail.

Here's Chapter 6

If I didn't know any better I would've said that his eyes just flashed neon green, but then again I couldn't even see his eyes! With all that hair, how could ya? I looked down at the ground, I gulped. I just remembered something, I'm afraid of hights! The people down there looked as big as frogs, I know it's supposed to be ants, but I wasn't that high! Just high enough for me to be afraid. I looked at Danny and he just started running away! That's not good. Then all of a sudden the ghost just dropped me!The air wasrushing past me as I fell.I knew it, this was the end. Good bye world! Then I closed my eyes, and right when I knew I was supposed to fall and maybe even die, I didn't. I opened my eyes and a white haired guy with glowing green eyes was carrying me and he set me down on the ground. I tried looking into his eyes, but he had the same messy hair as Danny. Wait, Danny! I looked around and Danny was gone. Oh yeah, he left leaving me to fall to my death, what a guy! Before any other ghost could get close to me, I ran out of the field. I didn't leave, I just wasn't where all the ghosts were. I didn't want to have fall again, maybe I wouldn't be so lucky next time. I peeked out of the tree to watch them fight. It was going pretty good. By now all of the people were out of the park, but me. I was perched up in a tree, watching the fight from above. That kid who saved me took out a thermos and pointed at the ghosts. What was he gonna do give them soup for being bad? I started to giggle softly, I didn't want them to hear me. Then he pressed a button on the thermos and a blue swirling light came out of it sucking the ghosts in front of it in! I watched as he sucked ghost after ghost until there was only one left. The devil ghost. The kid pointed the thermos at him, and the ghost shot somered stuff at it, making it fall out of reach. He glared at the ghost and his fists started glowing a bright green. Then he continuely shot same as the red stuff, but just a different color, at the ghost. The ghost dodged some and then put up a red transparent wall that seemed to block the blasts. He just floated there yawned as if this was too easy until the shield disappearred. Then the devil ghost shot a yellow blast at the kid. The blast was more like yellow goop, and it enveloped the kid sticking him to a tree, my tree. The tree shook as he hit the tree and stuck to it. The branch started to shake I fell, and grabbed on to the branch. I desperatly pulled my dangling legs up to the branch and wrapped them around it. My dark brown fell as I was hanging from the pole, so it was hard to see. The kid couldn't move, he was stuck and the devil ghost flew towards him. I had to help him, just like how he helped me, but what could I do? I grasped on to the tree more as I tried to sit up straight, now my hair was all messed up. I noticed a nest on the branch next to me. I smirked. The devil ghost blasted the kid and it shook the tree, almost causing the nest and I to fall. That branch was pretty far away,so the only way to actually get to it was to sort of jump. Questions started filling my head about the possibilities, butI just shook them out. I had to do it, for him. I closed my eyes and counted to three, then I leapt from my branch to the next. Once I felt the rough surface of the bark I opened my eyes. I made it! I felt like jumping for joy, then remembered that the only thing I was holding on to was a branch so I climbed up. Just as I thought, the nest was filled with eggs. I looked down to make sure he was still there and took a deep breath. The ghost was about to blast him again when I chucked an egg at his face.

"DIRECT HIT!" I cheered as he wiped the egg yoke off his face and pushed it to the side. He glared at me with clenched teeth.

"Why you little-" he was interupped when another egg hit his chest. I couldn't help but laugh, it was too easy! And funny! I through another one, but he went intaangible.

"Nice try." he smirked and he flew up to me. I had no more eggs left. Uh-oh. There was nothing else for me to throw, besides even if there was, he'd just go intangible.

"No where to run now." and he raised his arm to me and they started glowing red. He was right, there was no place to run, I looked down. I knew it was either this or become mush. I jumped off the branch and landed on my feet on the ground just infront of the kid. The devil ghost blasted the tree then relized I wasn't there in the first place. I looked at the kid. He was still stuck then he started pointing at something. I looked at what his was pointing at, it was his thermos. I picked it up and pointed to it.

"This?" I asked. Then he pointed to a button and smiled. I opened the lid and pressed the button. I could hear it start up, and I pointed it at the ghost.

"Good-Bye!" I said and the swirling blue light came out and sucked the ghost into it,thenI put the lid back on. As soon as the ghost was gone, so was the goop. It disappearred and the kid walked out.

"Thanks, for well saving us." he said and held out his hand.

"Welcome." I shook his hand. His snow white hair was still covering up his neon green eyes.

"want me to fly ya home?" he asked.

"Okay!" I said, then he took my hand and lifted us into the air. I looked down at the city of Amity Park, all the houses passing by us, the air rushing pass me, this was AWESOME!

"This is so cool!" I yelled down below.

"I guess it is." he answered. I looked up to this awesome kid, and wondered what it would be like to have powers like that. His hair was flowing behind him flying threw the air. His eyes were in clear view. This was the thing I was waiting for since I first saw the ghost boy, and some how it felt longer. He looked down at me and smiled, and I did too. I looked into his eyes, and mine widened.


How'd like that for an ending? Okay, okay, I know all of you wanted to know what he saw in Danny and if I get atleast 5 reviews demanding to see it, I'll post it as a deleted sceane! And if ya people do, it'll be posted by tomorrow!

srry Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet, it just started getting to me, and I'll take it as advice for my other stories like Time Vengence, especially Time Vengence! R&R!