FINE I'll update this to OK? Ok I don't know what really to say for now so I'll just get to the reviewers then the story!
Reviewers:
Yodai Hiro: What does ja ne mean? Your welcome always happy to do so, if you need any ideas please don't hesitate to contact me! Your whole poem thing just clicked something in me, yeah that happens to me quite often. I'm not sure how many chapters will be in any of my stories for that matter but it will be long, that's just the way I am! Any kind of poem is fine but sad stories and poems have ALWAYS been my weakness especially if they make me cry, I just love them! Sorry this is so long!
Animeforeyou: um ok
Chapter 3
Kurama sat there shocked at Hiei's confession. He just wanted to be heard, why hadn't he seen it before?
"Hiei why didn't you come talk to me about it?"
"You were so happy and you just deserved to be that way." Hiei's head fell sideways on the table.
Kurama was silent for a moment he didn't want to say the wrong thing, "I'm sorry Hiei I should have seen it but there had to have been more reasons. Your not one to quite so easily."
"All I ever did was taint the Earth, no one ever cared for me, ever. I don't have anything more to live for."
"What about Yukina that's always been what you hold onto." "She doesn't deserve to have a murderer as a brother, Yusuke and Kuwabara never liked me and you had found a humans to love." (Once again Hiei NOR Kurama is gay just so you know.)
"Yusuke and Kuwabara do they just have a odd way of showing it. I told you before Hiei nothing could ever spit us apart, I don't know why you would ever think that way."
"I don't know I just want to die."
"Hiei you might want to die to escape your pain but what about the pain it brings onto us, Yusuke and Kuwabara would be crushed trust me I know."
"Once Yukina found out she would probably never stop crying and never forgive herself, she would blame herself Hiei, and as for me, what would I ever do without you Hiei you're my best friend what else is there to say?"
Hiei just lay there, he just wanted to die, sure it would cause others pain but he had lived with it all his life, he had once learned to deal with it but in time it becomes unbearable, especially when it just keeps growing.
Why couldn't anyone see how much he wanted out of this life, to be for once free of all this pain?
"I just don't know Fox." Hiei said getting up and walking back threw the long hallway. He just wanted to die and nothing would keep him from doing otherwise. He had done it before he could do it again and this time, he planned on succeeding.
A/N: Yes I know VEERRRRYYY short but you get the point, anyway if anyone else has any idea's that would be sad in the least or incredibly sad please suggest them I'm all out and I feel like writing a sad story like last time. Please send me your ideas!
