I am only 13 and in the 7th grade, gah, If you don't like my stories, don't read them. If you really don't like my stories, tell me, and if I get enough complaints, I'll stop writing. Sorry, I don't take constructive criticism very well.
Keily-
Lily turned around to see James. He had a look of disgust on his face as he retorted, "Why are you sitting with this loser? Get away from her O'Brian, I called her, she's mine!" Lily was surprised; she never thought James would act like this. So she protested, "Um, excuse me, I am not owned by you nor any other living being. I also don't want to belong to anyone, I am an individual. Wanna go somewhere else Thomas?" "Sure," Thomas added as he gave a look at James saying –ha ha, I'm leaving with her, you're not—. Thomas and Lily got up and left to go outside on the castle grounds.
Lily walked fast ahead and Thomas had to jog to keep up with her. Lily practically ran down the hall and through the large, front, oak doors. When they got out side, Lily realized that it was quite warm and stripped herself of her hoodie.
"Shall we," Thomas interjected, making a gesture toward the lake. "Ok," Lily replied awkwardly. They went and sat down on the edge of the lake, Lily sitting with her back to the lake and Thomas sitting across from her.
"I never thought James would act like that," Lily thought out loud, breaking the silence. "I mean, other guys had always treated me like property, but I thought I had found someone different," Lily whispered, sounding hurt. Thomas lifted her head with his head, and told her, softly and sweetly, "I'm different." And with that being said……….
-James in the great hall-
James, still being amazed because what just happened is something he had never experienced to him, went to sit down at his own table. When he sat down, Sirius saw the look on his face. "What's wrong mate," he asked. He looked at Sirius and, shamefully, told him what happened. After he was done, he added, "I don't know what happened, every girl wants me, no matter how I treat them." "Well, maybe that's you're problem," Sirius replied, trying not to laugh. James was confused, and a little irritated at the fact that his best friend thought that the fact the 'girl of his dreams' just walked away from him was amusing. "What's so funny," James asked, letting the irritation sound in his voice. "Don't get your britches in a bunch. It was just, I can't believe that James Potter just got dumped!" James buried his head in his head because he knew that by tomorrow morning, this would be all over school.
-Lily and Thomas by the lake-
And with that being said, they shared a warm, gentle kiss. It felt so right being with him. She pulled away first and whispered, "I also didn't like the way he talked to you." They both laughed a little and he kissed her again.
Sorry about before, I have a bad temper. If you like (or dislike and have suggestions) please
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P.S. SOOOOOO sorry it is so short. I am sick and i………………..
