Addendum: Some of you may know this already if you have stories posted at ffn, but even some post-ers may not know. Sometimes when you edit in Quick Edit/Preview (last chance to clean things up before posting a chapter), it messes things up. I have seen a chunk of text disappear and, in the case of this story, a big chunk got repeated. I've fixed that now (in Ch. 7 - thanks to merrymagic for pointing it out to me).
By all means, if something reads really weird in my stories, or even someone else's, let them know. Likely they aren't aware of the problem unless you mention it.
