Muahah my first fanfiction being D.N.Angel! My favorite manga and anime in the entire world!
It's only logical that my first had to be this.
Well enjoy please give me your reviews and tips plz! Especially about the build up of the lines a paragraphs. I've never written a story before Oo
Enjoy! PS:I might be really out of character, but It's my story so there
A full moon.
A shadow could be seen passing the moon. The air was crisp and the stars where bright and shyning like diamonds.
Anybody would think this to be beautiful and romantic. Dark sighed. Though he wasn't one for hiding, his cover of darkness was slightly brighter then usually.
"No matter" he thought as he glided through the air.
"With Hiwatari-kun out of town the security will be poor anyway."
"Stay on your guard Dark" a voice whispered in the back of his mind.
"Why my dear Daisuke, are you worried for my safety."
"Of course not, I'm worried about my own safety; if you get caught I'm the one in trouble!" Daisuke yelled in despair.
Daisuke had promised himself not to change into his other self today; he had a mountain of homework to do that had to be finished this week. But as his mother flashed the cute picture of Harada Risa, he didn't have much of a choice. Another mission another theft and another amused Dark grinning at Daisuke's misfortune.
"Curse him" Daisuke thought angrily.
"Daisuke, you seem in a very foul mood today, it hasn't got anything to do with me now does it?" Dark retorted amused.
"It Has Everything To Do With You! I'm getting fed up of it Dark! My grades have dropped dramatically ever since you came into my life! I have no time to do my homework or study. And when I'm at school and you decide to show your head I'm the one in trouble! You are so relaxed about everything, but you're ruining my life, and it's my life!"
Daisuke sighed in despair.
"I've had enough, I want it over with, I want you out of my life."
Dark remained silent. With the mission forgotten he landed next to the large fountain on the outskirts of the city. He looked with a face devoid of emotion at his surroundings. He closed his eyes and listened to the sound of the cascading water, the crickets chirping and the cool breeze of autumn.
It relaxed him; Daisuke had no idea that his words had hurt Dark so much. He opened his eyes again.
"Very well Daisuke." Dark finally spoke after a while.
"I have never wanted to ruin your life, I have always been in the Niwa family and I have had to work with hundreds of different generations of your family. I mostly got along with all of them, but you are the first who has really hated me for being in your life...
"Dark I didn't say I hated you..." Daisuke replied with a soft voice, he wasn't sure where Dark was going with this conversation.
"It's okay, you don't have to say it, I know how you feel, I get it. And you're right, it is your life, I have no right to interfere."
Dark looked at the sky, the bright moon beaming down on him.
"Be seeing you, ne…Hikari." Dark closed his eyes once more. Daisuke felt a tingling sensation and closed his eyes as well. When he opened them again he was in his own body.
"Dark?" he spoke out loud.
The tingling sensation was gone, but with that the feeling he had everyday while Dark was dormant had also disappeared. He brushed it of.
"Dark?" he tried once more but to no avail.
"Cut it out Dark this isn't funny anymore...Dark! Fine be that way!" Daisuke replied angrily as he started walking home.
"He could have at least dropped me of somewhere closer to home if he was planning on changing back."
Daisuke lay back on his bed as Wizz happily started making a bed on his stomach. It took Daisuke a long time to get home it was almost dawn when he arrived. His mother had started scolding him when he got in. She was not pleased that Dark was a no-show at the Centrum for Art and Culture where he was supposed to steal a ancient dagger said to belong to one of the greatest warriors of the old days. It wasn't the work of the Hikari's, but it was so masterfully made, that Daisuke was sure his mother just wanted it for herself.
But when Daisuke came in with a face full of anger, she held her mouth. She would save the scolding for tomorrow plus it would be Saturday, so shopping at the market would be his punishment.
"Dark?" Daisuke tried one more time. He turned on his side and apologised to Wizz for knocking him off. He would talk to Dark in the morning; right now he was tired and needed his sleep.
If Dark was going to brood tomorrow as well, Daisuke would have a chance to finish his homework. He smiled slightly. Maybe Dark was being considerate for once.
"If you are, thanks Dark; I'll speak to you tomorrow all right?" Again Daisuke got no reply and shrugged it of.
He made himself comfortable and closed his eyes waiting for sleep to claim him. It never did.
Yawning his head of Daisuke slanterd down the stairs. His mom had come to wake him up then take him shopping, but he was already awake. He had been tossing and turning all night and saw every hour fly by on his clock. He had also squashed Wizz a few times who woke up angrily and squeakt in annoyance.
"You okay sweetheart, you seem tired" his mother said notioning to Daisuke's excessive yawning. "Rough night." He replied. His mother looked at him with worry.
"You never have rough nights."
Daisuke glared at her.
"Well tonight I did, okay!" he huffed as he opened the fridge and grabbed the milk, drinking it right out of the pack.
"Daisuke! Where are you manners? You do not talk to me like that, and you do not drink from the milk pack itself." She said as she grabbed the milk and replaced it in the fridge.
"I already made you some breakfast, with a GLASS of milk, so hurry up and eat. I want to get to the market before it gets too busy."
Daisuke sat down and started eating, from the corner of his eye he saw his grandfather watching the TV. He turned around fully as he heard the name 'Dark', he frowned as he saw the reporter interviewing Takeshi Saehara's dad.
"So why do you think Dark didn't show up last night inspector?" The inspector's smile widened at the question.
"Well isn't it obvious? That Dark scum was too afraid to show up! He probably realised that he wouldn't be able to steal the dagger. The security was too much for him, he wouldn't have had a chance!"
He then burst out in a pathetic laugh. The presenter started to ask another question as the screen suddenly turned black. Daisuke's grandfather had turned it off.
Daisuke turned back around and resumed his eating.
"Daisuke…" His grandfather started talking.
"Don't say it. I'm not in the mood, so don't even bother." Daisuke's grandfather looked at him with wide eyes. What's going on, Grandfather thought. "Daisuke is never this rude nor does he ever cut me of in the middle of my sentence. Something was definitely wrong with Daisuke. And he was sure to get to the bottom of things. He started making his way to the dining table as Daisuke abruptly stood up.
"I've had enough to eat." He exclaimed and left to get ready, leaving his half eaten plate behind. He hadn't even touched his milk.
All his grandfather could do was watch his grandson walk up the stairs with a scowl on his face.
Omg my first Fanfiction oh happy days
It's short I know, it's more like a teaser for things to come...mhh Daisuke isn't acting like himself now is he? Wonder what's up with that Oo
Review pretty please; it's my first come on! Tell me I suck and that I should quit while I'm ahead!
