Well this is my first story but I really want to know everything about it
so please say EVERYTHING on your mind. Bad or good, I'll take it!! So
here is the story, Kohaku's Memory. Enjoy!
Chapter 1: The battle, and the eyes.
Kohaku was covered in blood. I wasn't only his own, but a bloodthirsty scorpion demon's, with a jewel shard. Naraku was surprised and slightly impressed by Kohaku's resend behavior. Kohaku had gotten 7 jewel shards on his own. But Naraku wasn't happy until he had gotten them all, and InuYasha was dead. Kohaku shot out his hook, while taking out his sword. His hook jabbed into the demon's neck, before Kohaku stabbed his sword onto the demon's head, causing the jewel shard to come out of its head. Kohaku took the mask off his face then sheathed his sword. He glanced at the scorpion demon, with his blank eyes, no expression showing. He turned his back on the demon and started to walk away. Before the demon died, it took its chance. It slowly lifted its tail, the sharp needle type end, glimmered in the moonlight. Kohaku saw this in his mask, but he was too late. Just as he was turning to look, the tail had come too quickly for him, and hit him in the back, injecting the poison. Kohaku's eyes opened wide. The color of his brown eyes slowly came back as he fell to the ground, as well as the scorpion demon. But before he fell unconscious, he whispered a word from his past. Remembering a slight image of a person close to him. Close to his heart. "..Sango..". He fell unconscious. The demon died. Kohaku didn't realize there as someone gazing at him, that witnessed the battle between him and the demon. Small, young eyes.
Chapter 1: The battle, and the eyes.
Kohaku was covered in blood. I wasn't only his own, but a bloodthirsty scorpion demon's, with a jewel shard. Naraku was surprised and slightly impressed by Kohaku's resend behavior. Kohaku had gotten 7 jewel shards on his own. But Naraku wasn't happy until he had gotten them all, and InuYasha was dead. Kohaku shot out his hook, while taking out his sword. His hook jabbed into the demon's neck, before Kohaku stabbed his sword onto the demon's head, causing the jewel shard to come out of its head. Kohaku took the mask off his face then sheathed his sword. He glanced at the scorpion demon, with his blank eyes, no expression showing. He turned his back on the demon and started to walk away. Before the demon died, it took its chance. It slowly lifted its tail, the sharp needle type end, glimmered in the moonlight. Kohaku saw this in his mask, but he was too late. Just as he was turning to look, the tail had come too quickly for him, and hit him in the back, injecting the poison. Kohaku's eyes opened wide. The color of his brown eyes slowly came back as he fell to the ground, as well as the scorpion demon. But before he fell unconscious, he whispered a word from his past. Remembering a slight image of a person close to him. Close to his heart. "..Sango..". He fell unconscious. The demon died. Kohaku didn't realize there as someone gazing at him, that witnessed the battle between him and the demon. Small, young eyes.
