Two Peas in a Pod
By: lilpnaipenguinlover
lilpnaipenguinlover: I know that this story is lame. I can make it better. just give me suggestions. Hey this story might be the lamest story u've ever read. That's how pathetic I am...
door creaks
Detective Moore: ahh! Good to be home!
Detective
Moore: smiles and stretches and looks at Rachel and Conan
Rachel: hey dad, someone called for you. I told them they could come tomorrow. Is that alright?
Detective Moore: well I guess so. You made the decision without me. So it must be alright.
Conan: interrupts
Conan: we are gonna see a movie! wanna join? (I hope it's a bloody movie! haha.)
Conan: smiles
Rachel: yeah you should! after all, you came from work.
detective Moore: well when you put it that way, I guess I should.
microwave: beeps from the kitchen
Conan: yay! the popcorn is finished! (im hungry now...)
Rachel: I'll go get it! want to help, Conan?
Conan: sure thing Rachel!
Rachel and Conan: leave to go to the kitchen
detective Moore: takes off coat and places the brief case on the table next to the front door
Rachel and Conan: races to the couch with the popcorn bowl
Rachel: turns the movie on and sits on the couch
all: watch movie
15 minutes later
phone: rings
detective Moore: I'll get that. it's probably the person who called earlier today.
detective Moore: picks up phone
detective Moore: hello?
client: hi is detective Moore there?
detective Moore: im him.
client: oh thank god!
detective Moore: what's the problem miss?
client: I think someone is trying to kidnap and kill my daughter. (uh oh! who's the culprit? I don't even know!)
detective Moore: okay. can u wait until tomorrow to come? or is it urgent?
client: well could I come over with my daughter now? I'm so scared for her.
detective Moore: okay. we will wait for you. and if you won't make it in 40 minutes tops, then we will come to get you. ok?
client: thanks detective. by the way, my name is Robin Karr. My daughter's name is Roslyn Karr. She's 13.
detective Moore: thanks for the information. we will be waiting for you. good day ma'am.
client: goodbye.
phone line: clicks
detective Moore: puts the phone back and sits on the couch to inform the others
after informing the others about the phone call...
Conan: wow!
Rachel: I hope we can help them!
detective Moore: they should be coming in about 40 minutes.
Conan: thinks as jimmy why would someone try to capture her? what does she know that others don't know of?
door: loud knocks
Rachel: races to the door and opens it
Rachel: smiles
Rachel: are you miss Karr?
ms Karr: yes I am. is this the home/office of the famous detective Moore? (famous! r u crazy! haha.)
Rachel: yes it is! we are here to help you. first off, I'm his precious daughter Rachel! (sure! whatever!)
Conan: thinks as jimmy precious! how about annoying and a pain in the ass? (so true! haha. j/k)
Rachel: well come on in! I'll make some hot cocoa for you two. just sit here and my dad will be with you in a moment.
Rachel: smiles
Rachel: turns to Conan
Rachel: hey Conan, want one too? would you like to help?
Conan: nods his head up and down as fast and he can
Conan: thinks as jimmy anything to get me hyper! I really need it since I need to help this girl out and listen to the situation.
Conan and Rachel: walk to the kitchen and prepare the drinks
at the dining room
Roslyn: I'm scared mom! why would someone try to kill me?
ms Karr: I don't know why! we didn't do anything to anyone we know!
Roslyn: mom, do you think dad is part of this?
ms Karr: hush about your father. he does not live in our lives anymore. he left us for someone else. don't worry, he still loves you even though he's gone.
Roslyn: but mom --
ms Karr: interrupts
ms Karr: shh. the detective is coming.
detective Moore: walks in the dining room and takes a seat across from ms Karr
detective Moore: so when did you start suspecting that someone is trying to kill your daughter?
Conan: hides near the door to listen to the conversation (like the nosey little brat he is! haha.)
ms Karr: it started last week. every morning I would wake up and find something missing.
detective Moore: and what does that have to do with anything?
ms Karr: well a couple of days ago, someone wrote a death threat on her mirror and locker at school.
detective Moore: so what does the lost personal items have to do with the threat?
ms Karr: well I figured it might be the same person.
detective Moore: maybe it is.
ms Karr: well the killer knows that Roslyn knows something that he doesn't want others to know about.
ms Karr: looks at Roslyn
ms Karr: what do you know that was a supposed to be a secret?
Roslyn: thinks for a moment
Roslyn: I don't remember anything about learning something that is supposed to be a secret.
detective Moore: Roslyn, do you have any enemies at school who hates you a lot?
Roslyn: none that I know of.
detective Moore: have you said anything offending to anyone in your school including teachers? I mean, for the past week.
Roslyn: come to think about it, miss Clemens was very mean to me but I don't think it would be her. she lives so far away from here.
detective Moore: okay.
detective Moore: takes out a pen and tablet to make notes
detective Moore: writes: #1. miss Clemens -- teacher
Roslyn: detective Moore, could it be my boyfriend?
ms Karr: looks at Roslyn not knowing she had a boyfriend
Roslyn: put her head down and felt guilty... SO guilty
detective Moore: well did you two have a recent fight?
Roslyn: well come to think about it, he did get mad at me because he thought I was cheating on him but I didn't! I promise!
Roslyn: raises her voice
Roslyn: it can't be him! it can't be him! it just can't! why me!
ms Karr: hugs Roslyn
ms Karr: honey calm down. he's just a suspect. Not the criminal. for now.
Roslyn: but why would he try to kill me? we were such a good couple! how could he! I loved him!
ms Karr: whispers
ms Karr: that's how I felt about your father the day i said "i do"
detective Moore: I will go over the conversation and let the both of you get a hold of yourselves.
detective Moore: leaves the room
ms Karr: why didn't you tell me about you and Robert! I just thought you two were best friends.
Roslyn: we were. but we decided to be more than that. trust me mom. we didn't have sex. promise.
ms Karr: I just want you to tell me everything that's happening because I don't want to lose my daughter the same way I lost your father.
Roslyn: cries
Roslyn: everything is so screwed up I don't know where to start!
ms Karr: I have to admit something.
Roslyn: what is it mother?
Roslyn: looks in her mom's eyes
ms Karr: I slept with Robert the day that your dad left. im sorry honey! I'm so sorry! wrong move mother!
Roslyn: shouts
Roslyn: WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU SAY! YOU BITCH! GO TO HELL! (now that's wat I like to hear! haha.)
Roslyn: stands up and runs to the kitchen
Rachel: are you okay? I wasn't able to bring in the hot cocoa because I heard crying and shouting. do you need some help?
Roslyn: no it's okay Rachel. I'm just crying with tears of joy that I found you and your dad. it's okay.
Rachel: hey you can crash here if you want.
Roslyn: that's great!
Roslyn: sniffs
Roslyn: um. can you show me the room you're letting me sleep in?
Rachel: yeah I could. you will be crashin' in with me tonight.
Roslyn: thanks. you're a great friend!
Conan: smiles
Conan: can I take you to Rachel's room?
Roslyn: why yes Conan. thanks a bunch.
Conan: it's okay. Rachel's busy with my dad and cleaning.
Roslyn: okay Conan. show me watcha got!
Roslyn: tries to smile
5 minutes later
Roslyn: wow. this is a nice room.
Conan: well I wouldn't know. I'm not a designer person.
Roslyn: thanks Conan for walking me down here. can you do me a favor?
Conan: umm. okay.
Roslyn: I need a friend now. can you help make me feel better?
Conan: well I'm not so good at doing that. (I kan tell! haha.lol.)
Roslyn: oh ok.
Roslyn: sighs
Conan: hey lady, I'm just a little kid so I think it would be best or you to ask Rachel for this kind of stuff.
Roslyn: I guess so.
Conan: i'm guessing this is girly talk! ew! im gonna get cooties! (wat a sissy!)
Conan: runs around frantically like he's having a seizure
Roslyn: chuckles
Roslyn: well you should go to sleep. did you know sleep prevents you from having cooties? (sure... that's wat they all say)
Conan: wow! really! I'm going to sleep right now!
Conan: thinks as jimmy whaddya think I am Roslyn? some stupid kid that believes in cooties. dammit. she does think like that.
Conan: says goodnight and walks to his room
at the dining room
detective Moore: walks in
ms Karr: still crying
detective Moore: her boyfriend is our lead suspect. but not the criminal. just so ya know.
ms Karr: umm. this may sound weird but can Roslyn and I sleep here for the night?
detective Moore: well okay. just as long as you sleep on the couch. I like my bed.
ms Karr: thanks detective.
detective Moore: I do what I can.
Rachel: walks in with a tray of glasses filled with hot cocoa
detective Moore: ooh yay! hot cocoa! just before bed time. yay!
ms Karr: looks at the detective and thinks he acts like a kid when he's on his break
detective Moore: smells the scent of the chocolate drink
Rachel: dad, right after you drink, brush your teeth and go to sleep.
detective Moore: what if I don't want to? huh? tell me!
Rachel: yells
Rachel: DO IT OR YOU'RE GROUNDED MISTER!
detective Moore: feels frightened
detective Moore: oh okay. yes ma'am.
ms Karr: looks at the detective
ms Karr: wow. women DO rule the world. yup... they rly do! just joking!
ms Karr: smirks
detective Moore: shut up old woman!
Rachel: yells again
Rachel: LEARN YOUR MANNERS OLD ONE! AND NEVER SAY THAT AGAIN! YOU SOUND LIKE AN IMMATURE ADULT!
Rachel: smiles at ms Karr
Rachel: NOW GO PUT ON YOUR PAJAMAS!
detective Moore: but but --
Rachel: NO BUTS! GO NOW!
detective Moore: stays put
Rachel: I said... NOW!
detective Moore: runs and puts his pjs on
Rachel: tsk, tsk, tsk
Rachel: goodnight everyone! sweet dreams! lights out!
lights: turn off
dining room: BANG!
all: run to the dining room
detective Moore: what happened!
everyone: stays silent
so what happened? I don't know. tune in next time for the second half.
hey everyone! im new so I don't rly know how to make great stoories. read and review please! u can put suggestions too! damn my story is so gay. its corny too. so dramatic! tear haha.
