Raziel's Child

Chapter 1: vampiric love

Hey, there this is my first lok fic so please review and make constructive observations that will help me improve.

I am Raziel the first-born and lieutenant of my father the Great Kain, the master and all of my brothers including me have started a revolt against the human rule in which they have tortured hundreds of my kind. And it already passed a year in which we started the revolt but we are losing we need more vampires so our lord Kain had send all of us to search more vampires in the city of Meridian while my father takes care of some business with the vampire Vorador.I had reached the western side of Meridian and still I have not found any vampire until I reached a bar with a very casual name "The Red House" so I decided to enter there and found a very mysterious and beautiful vampire with long black hair, green eyes as the abyss and without exaggeration a body like a dark goddesses, after some minutes I noticed that she was staring me and pointing me to enter a door that I supposed that was the entrance to something underground; I entered and saw that it was like a save heaven for vampires suddenly the woman that I was staring some minutes ago started to talk to me and said you must be Raziel the first son of Kain I responded yes I am, woman who are you, she said I am Ale and I am the keeper of this heaven. Well I am here to make you an offer Ale I want to take all of these vampires to the heaven of my father that is more secure than this place. In that moment Ale told to me that ok that we will depart tomorrow in the night, and also told me I never thought that the so-called Raziel son of Kain would be so handsome and also I could bet that you look better than any of your brothers. I said thanks with a small smile in my lips and then I focused into my thoughts where would my bothers be, what my master is doing now and which will be the outcome of this war, none of them with answer.

The next day I was awaken by the vampiric girl of yesterday and said good morning handsome, I responded thanks and asked what you do in the mornings, and she responded talk and drink some alcohol, some hours later in the night she and me talked about personal experiences of the past and slowly without any warning she kissed me then I said why you did that and she responded it is what you wanted don't I obviously responded no but I could not denied to my self that I thought about it some times. Several minutes later I we were already for going to the sanctuary of the clans, some hours later we reached the place and found that Melchiah and Zephon had already returned and they brought with them like 6 vampires each one an they were surprised that I brought like 40 vampires then they started to talk me and said hey there brother you have done a great job, thanks Melchiah I responded and told which was that beautiful vampire standing there and I told to him she is Ale then he asked me you could introduced me to her. At that same moment I introduced him to Ale, they had

Some minutes of conversation then Melchiah said that he was tired and he will go to his chambers then she came close to me and said neither the 2 of them is as handsome as you and I responded thanks.

3 Days Later

Each of my brothers returned and the only one that brought as many vampires as me was my second brother Turel in which I could not denied that was a very powerful warrior and personally very close to him. then while me and all of my brothers were in a reunion and all the other vampires including Ale were as spectators, suddenly Kain appeared and all of us kniled to him, then my father said Raziel and I respond yes master and he said tell me my son you and your brothers have accomplished the mission and all of us responded in unison yes father, we have gathered in total 112 vampires sir, very well responded Kain now we will slowly start kill the Sarafan but without being noticed.

When I reached my chambers I saw that something was different it was full with candles when I reached my there she was in my bed and she said hi there Raziel asked why are you Ale and she responded I cannot handle it anymore I am in love of you then slowly I started to kiss her then I took away my closes and we made love for the rest of the night.