Well you asked for it so here it is the updated version of my story. Hope you like it.
Midnight.
As Chris walked into the little club where the atmosphere was nice and calm unlike his house where everything was going wrong first his mom then his little annoying cousin. As he walked he saw a girl looking at paintings on a side wall that were done other artist you could say this was an art type club where people could show their work and see others and give their opinion. The girl he saw had long wavy auburn hair but with two distinct white streaks. She also seem to wear a lot of layers of what he saw she wore a black tank top, with a jean jacket over it, and then she wore a pair of bellbottom jeans, and a long black leather jacket, then around her waist she wore a Native American type belt. But the most distinct thing was her silver and green sunglasses he thought to him self, this place is dark and dim and she is wearing sunglasses. He slowly walked over to her.
"So you like art?" he asked while he looked at her.
She turned around "Yeah I like it would I be here if I didn't?" then looked at him as she replied.
"Sorry didn't mean to offend you." He said with a friendly jester as he stuck out his hand for her to shake it.
She looked at him. "No I am sorry it is just been a hectic day for me. Sorry." She said as she shook his hand with her gloved one.
He shook her hand and neither of then noticed they were holding hand until Chris spoke. "Oh my name is Chris. What is yours?" he asked as he let go of her hand.
"Oh it's Annie. It's short for Anna Marie." She said as she blushed she had never told a complete stranger her name.
Then all the sudden her phone rang. "Uh Chris can you hold on?" she said as she picked up her cell phone. He nodded yes as he was just awed by her beauty.
(phone call) "Ok ok. OK Gramps I got it I know be home in 45 min." After she hung off she walked over to Chris and Gave him the bad new. "Well I got to go it was nice meeting you."
But as she began to walk off he stopped her "Hey can I get you number." Totally Forgetting he was in a different Time zone.
She turned to look at him "I am going to be leaving for college soon So I will have a new number. Here" she wrote it on his hand.
As he looked at the number he noticed it was a California Number near to where he was and then he knew he would be seeing her very soon. But as he began to look up she was gone but he was going to find her one way or another.
Well here is the second chapter if you like tell me I know it is kind of sloppy but when I get into the plot it will get a lot better oh I would like to thank Faith- Charmer for reviewing I mean the more you review the faster I reply. SO keep them coming and if you have any questions IM me at Rogueof Mages at Yahoo
