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Seth sat in the park, watching the geese by the river. He'd been here about a 2 months, and was coming home soon, it was a nice change from the Newport scene. "Seth?" a familiar female voice asked behind him. He turned to see a cute girl with a blonde pixie haircut. "ANNA?" he shouted jumping up and engulfing her in a hug. "Omg what are you doing here" she asked excitedly. He smiled "well, it's a long story, how bout i tell it to you over dinner" he asked her. Anna smiled "of course, I would love to talk to my best friend over dinner" he laughed "I just have to stop at Lukes to grab a jacket" They walked the 3 blocks to Luke and his dad's apartment where he absentmindedly left his cell phone as he was leaving.
Ring Ring You waited anxiously for Seth to answer his phone, you were about to hang up when you heard luke's voice on the other end "Hello? Cohen's Phone" he said, you laugh " Hey Luke its me Summer, is Seth around?" you aske trying to sound cheerful. "OMG Summer! HEY! Actually Seth just left, he and Anna went to dinner." you were speechless but managed to sqweek out "Anna?" "Yeah you remember the girl Seth went out with before you, short blond hair, dresses in really bright colors-" you interupted Luke's excited babbeling. "I know who she is Luke, can you just tell Seth, wait no don;t tell him I called, I'll talk to you later Luke, Bye" you said, hanging up before he could respond.
Has he moved on? you asked yourself. No, they probably just friends you tried to convince yourself. Nonetheless you weren't going to let this bring down your entire Summer, you told yourself, just make sure you have tons of your own great stories you thought, rolling over on your bed you noticed it was about 3 am, you picked up the phone and called Luke.
Half a world away it was about 7 o'clock Anna and Seth were sitting and laughing at an old deli. "God Seth, I missed you" she said grabbing his hand lovingly. He pulled away suddenly. She frowns "Let me guess, your still hung up on Summer, even though she dumped you" Seth pulled back shocked. "I can't believe you Anna, she didnt dump me we agreed to take a break, and yeah i guess i am "hung up" but i like to call that love, i guess you don't know what thats like" you yelled at her as you started to storm out, "yeah i know what its like to be in love, unfortunately he blindly loved a season" she mumbles as He left, pretending he didnt hear her.
You had been chatting with Luke for about half an hour, when you heard a door slam on his end, "hey one sec sum" he said placing the phone down, on what you guessed was a coffee table. "Hey man whats going on" you hear Luke muffled voice ask.Your shocked to hear the response "It's Anna, she tries and make a move on me, after she listened to me talk about summer for an hour before- " His volume raises as he continues "And then she yells at me for still being in love with Summer, i just can't believe her sometimes, im just gonna go to bed and forget tonite ever happened" you hear a pause and then Luke picked up the phone again "okay sum, im back, so did you really meet Jack Johnson after his concert" you laugh still amazed about what you had just heard "yeah i met him, i told him about all my troubles, and get this he wrote a song about it and put it on his latest album!" you exitededly told him (this is false, there is no song on the Jack Jonson cd about Summer Roberts- this is just fictional for entertainment value) "Omg no way" Luke shouts into the phone, you held it away from your ears, "yeah he gave me a couple of his cds I'll send one to you before we leave tommerow afternoon, but Ihave to go I'll send it overnight so hopefully you'll get it soon night Luke" you say sweetly into the phone, "thanks sum, night" luke responds before you hang up.
Seth had stayed in his room the last day or two, fuming about the Anna situation, but got up Wedsday, and took a shower, emrging to find an excited dancing Luke. He laughs "Luke I know I'm leaving tonite, but i thought you would wait until i got on the plan before the happy dance." Luke looked at him confused but just said "I talked to Summer the other day, she met Jack Johsnon in Australlia, and he wrote a song about her, listen to it, its called "summer"." he shouts turning up the volume.
"Summer"
She walks around with a brave face
inside her soul cries
she left her love at the beach
he dosnt know
he dosnt know
how much she loves him.
She made a mistake
now she pays
for leaving him all alone
she cries everynight thinking
thinking 'bout him
She just hopes and prays
that just one day
he'll forgive her
she's made up her mind
all by herself
She loves him
She loves him.. . .
The song continues from there but Seth sits there in a daze, the song was about him, he realizes he runs and grabs his phone. he dials the number, that he'd tried to dial so many times that summer, before she even had the chance to say hello, he said "summer i love you too" . . . .
