Kuramas Mary-Sue

A/N: Wow, last chapter got a really big response. I went from one review to five! So here's my replies:

Dreammistress Jade: Don't worry, poor little Sue's gonna be disturbed beyond all reasoning soon. Oh, and I'd like to purchase one of them there Mary Sue Basher 60's please! As for the telepathy, I'm planning on writing a prequel, so be on the lookout! Hope you keep on reviewing.

Natsumi-chan: Thanks for your review! I'm adding a new chapter now. Does that count?

Kuramafan-06: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like my Sue bashing. It's been a lot of fun to write this, because, the more I work on it, the better I get at my own character devolvement. I guess that's the goal of this story. That and therapy for Sue writers. Lol!

Calamity-Angel: Don't worry, Brittany is a far cry from a Mary-Sue. She cusses far to much and has tons of really good personality flaws. And yes, this is coming from the Authoress that is working with her. I love working with Brittany 'cause she's so versatile and has a great personality. I'll try and update those two as soon as I get a really great idea. And do you really think I'm not going to review for chapter 14 of 'My Reality' when Ally's in there? Of course I'll review!

Well, those are my replies. I'm gonna go straight to the story. Hope everyone enjoys!


Chapter 3- The Date


When class let out, it had started to rain. The rain wasn't just a drizzle though, it was a down-pour.

"Hey Kurama," Sam said. "Wanna share my umbrella? I brought it just in case."

"Sure," he replied aloofly. His thoughts still lingered on the events that had taken place earlier that day.

"Still thinking about lunch?" She asked, popping open her umbrella.

"Uh, what would you do if I said yes?"

"I would say, well then, want to go see a movie?"

"How about 6:00?"

"Sounds great!"

(5:30, Kuramas House)

"I'm leaving mom!" Kurama yelled.

"Where are you going?" Shiori asked.

"Oh, just out."

"With who?"

"He and Sam are going on a date," Mary-Sue said maliciously.

Shiori raised an eyebrow. "When did this happen?" She asked smiling. "Last time I checked, you two where just friends."

Kurama blushed slightly. He had hoped that his mom wouldn't find out. "Err… would you believe me if I said some things happened at lunch today that caused it?"

"Well, despite the way she chooses to dress, Sam's a good kid, so, I guess I really don't mind."

Kurama gave his mom a hug. "Thanks mom!" He said. "We won't be out to late. I promise. Bye Mary-Sue," He added in. Then he dashed out the front door.

Oh, I'll get Sam back for stealing my Boyfriend, and then she'll regret it, Sue thought to herself.

(At Sam's House)

"Arrrrgggghhhhh! I have absolutely nothing to wear!" Sam yelled. Currently, she had a towel wrapped around her hair and bathrobe around her body.

"Sam, what's wrong?" Her mom asked, running into the room.

"Well, lets see, I'm going out tonight, and I have nothing to wear, and the person I'm going out with will be here in half-an-hour! You tell me mom!"

"Well, where are you going, and who are you going with?"

"Um, the movies."

"Okay, and with who?"

Sam turned deep red. "Kurama…" She mumbled.

Here mom was wide eyed. (Something like this: O.O) "Did you say Kurama."

"Yeah. I err… Kissed him at lunch today. But It was just to make Mary-Sue mad, but we both kinda liked it…"

"Oh sweetie, that's great! I really like Kurama! But who's this Mary-Sue girl?"

"She the knew exchange girl staying at Kuramas. She another one of those perfect girls."

"Ohh…"

"Well, what should I wear?"

"How about this?" Her mom said, pulling a white off the shoulder peasant top and a longer version of her black plaid mini-skirt.(Inspired by my Sim on The Sims.)

"Mom, where do you learn this?" Sam asked.

"It's natural. Now, lets hurry and get you ready."

(Half-an-Hour Later)

Kurama rang the doorbell at Sam's door. A minute later, Sam's mom opened the door. "She'll be down in a second," she said, smiling softly.

"Okay, thanks Mrs. Doney, but how'd you-"

"I have my ways. Does you mom know?"

"Yeah, she does."

Sam came stampeding down the stairs. "Mom, is he here yet? I thought I heard the door…" She stopped, seeing Kurama standing in the doorway. She flushed a deep red and said, "Hi, uh, I'll be done in just a minute." Then she dashed back up the stairs.

"She really likes you," Her mom said.

"I know."

Sam came back down the stairs. She was dress in the white off the shoulder peasant top and black plaid skirt that her mom had suggested, with a pair of combat boots off her feet. She wore a red rose pendant around her neck, the one that Kurama had given her as a present on her 15th Birthday, and a silver bracelet on her right wrist. Her mom had put some neutral colored make-up on her and had helped her put some waves in her hair.

"Shall, we go?" Kurama asked.

Sam just nodded.

(Three Hours Later)

"Ohmigosh! That movie was great!" Sam exclaimed as they walked out of the theater.

"It was," Kurama agreed.

They walked down the busy streets of Tokyo, just enjoying the sights.

"It's so pretty," Sam sighed.

"Not as pretty as you," Kurama said.

"Stop it," Sam said teasingly. "You're making me blush."

When they reach Sam's house, Kurama kissed her lightly on the lips.

" 'Night," Sam said, smiling.

"See ya tommarrow!" Kurama said.

Little did they know, there would be no tommarrow for this relationship.


E-N-D


A/N: What did you think of that. I have reasons why this is rated, I'm just not telling why yet. But you'll find out in the next couple of chapters.

Well R and R please!

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