Okay I read through all of my stories read through all of the comments and here is my verdict....my stories suck and are mediocre in my eyes. There for I shall redo all the chapters before I allow myself to continue any of them further. That is all from this author so to the people who pointed out to people or to themselves "Hey these stories don't have a plot!" I must say this....what took you so long to finally review and say that?! So they will come back and have a plot and better story lines and blah blah blah. Just in general better, but the story outlines will remain the same so don't worry for all you fans who like the chapters the way they are.