Summary: Hello! I know I take forever to update, but for people who are a
teensy weensy bit impatient cough Fire of Darkness cough You must
understand that my parents are severely strict. I was grounded for a month
off the internet (DO YOU KNOW HOW HORRIBLE THAT IS?!) The next time they
catch me, I'll be grounded from the entire computer for SIX MONTHS!! I
repeat SIX MONTHS!! Now... here's chappy two for all you JSRF POTC fans out
there. Believe me! I'm working as fast as I can to finish this! I'm working
on chapter four now! Anyway, Enjoy!
Fire of Darkness... read this!!: Thanks for the review. You're really enthusiastic... or just hyper. There are a few things I must say about your review. First of all... You said you'd go crazy, grab an axe, track the kid down and chop of his big head. I am a GIRL! Second, my head's not big! I'm just smart. (Why are people like me picked on so much? sob Ah, I'm just screwing with ya!) Thirdly, I am not affected with threats like that. There's a jerk at my school named Chris Vande Velde. If you don't know him, you're the luckiest kid on earth. Christoph is a bastard that threatens people... mainly me and... mainly me, so now, I don't mind them anymore. Don't feel bad. I didn't take it personally. I'm just telling the world the story of my miserable life. Anyway, I loved your review. Hope you like this chapter!
Cast: Rhyth- Elizabeth Swan Beat- Will Turner Yoyo- Captain Jack sparrow Ana-Maria- Oh... nice try! You'll find out soon enough!
Chapter 2: The famous Captain Jack Sparrow! Yoyo stood on the mast. Wind and mist blew in his face. He smirked as Port Royal came into view. He looked down at the hull, which was half full of water. Yoyo grabbed a rope hanging from the mast and swung down to the hull of the boat. He quickly grabbed a bucket floating by his feet and started to empty the water out of his miniature ship. He looked up at a rock formation where skeletons hung by their necks on ropes were shown. Hanging from another rope was a sign, which read: Pirates, ye be warned. Yoyo took off his hat and placed it on his chest to honour the long deceased pirates. After a few more buckets of water being thrown overboard, Yoyo finally gave up and climbed up the mast. He was almost there... The whole boat had sunk. One third of the mast and the sail were all that stayed above water. Yoyo stood proudly on the mast as it traveled to the harbour. The mast got closer and closer to the water. As the dock finally came close enough to reach, Yoyo stepped off and walked down the dock to Port Royal. 'Jack was the luckiest pirate alive.' Yoyo thought happily as he acted out the famous 'Jack Sparrow walk'. "You there!" Yoyo turned around. A man wearing a white wig ran up to him. He carried a large book in his hand. A small African boy followed timidly behind. "It costs a shilling to have your boat at the docks. They all looked over at the ship. The mast was the only thing above water. Yoyo sweatdropped and turned back to the man. He rummaged around in his pocket and pulled out three small coins.
"How about three shillings..." Yoyo dropped the shillings on his book, "and we forget the name." The man looked from Yoyo to the money. "Welcome aboard, Mr. Smith." He said happily as he closed the book. Yoyo nodded and walked away. As Yoyo passed a small stand, he snatched a small bag of money, shook it, and continued on his journey. Yoyo walked down a few steps to one of the ships at the harbour. As he walked onto the dock, a few fairly stupid soldiers blocked his way. "You there! This dock is off limits to all civilians." The first guard stated. "Really?" Yoyo said innocently. "Well if I see one, I'll tell you." He took a step to the right, but the guards ended up in his way again. "It seems like a ship like this..." Yoyo gestured to the ship before him, "seems like nothing to a ship like..." Yoyo walked to the left and sweatdropped when the guards blocked him again, "that!" Yoyo gestured to a ship on the other harbour. "Oh, well that's the Interceptor." The second guard said proudly. "There's no ship that can match the Interceptor." Yoyo rolled his eyes. There were obviously ships that could pass it in modern times, but he decided to stick with the story. "I've heard of one... one that's never been beaten. The Black Pearl." The guard started to laugh again. "Like I said... there's no real ship that can match the Interceptor." "I've seen the Black pearl." The first guard said quietly. "No you haven't." "Yes I have." Yoyo rolled his eyes and snuck away quietly. He walked onto the ship and stood at the wheel. He smirked at the thought of how easy this must've been for Jack. "You there! Freeze!" The two guards came up holding their guns up at him. "I'm sorry." Yoyo let go of the wheel. "It just such a pretty boat-ship." "What's your name?" the second guard asked. "Smith." "Well then, Mr. Smith. What business brings you to Port Royal?" Yoyo let out a sigh. "It was to see my dear childhood friend again." Yoyo lied. He had forgotten what Jack had really said, so he decided to twist the story a little. "I haven't seen her in so long...excuse me." He turned around to wipe some invisible tears away. "I just want to see her one last time before I leave for London." From what he could tell, his plan was working.
Rhyth stood up at the cliff with none other than Commodore Norrington. To her surprise, he wasn't one of her friends. She let out a sigh of relief when she saw him. Now she was waving her fan frantically, trying to cool herself down and breathe at the same time. The corset was really getting to her. "Elizabeth..." The Commodore said after a long speech about her being a fine woman. What was she? 20? "Will you marry me?" "...I can't breathe." Rhyth gasped. Everything was spinning around her. The commodore's voice became faint. She lost her balance and fell off the side. Rhyth, half conscious watched as the crystal blue water closed in on her. Water wasn't a problem anymore. She hadn't been able to breathe on land either. Her indigo hair blended with the surrounding blue. 'Beat...'
"...and that's when I met her-" Yoyo was cut off by a large splash. They looked over to see what had happened. This was obviously Jack's rescue scene "Will you be saving 'im?" Yoyo asked the first guard. "I can't swim." He replied. Yoyo looked over at the other guard who shook his head. "Okay then. He took off his hat and belt (Which held his gun, sword, compass and other things) and shoved them into the guards' hands. "Do not lose these." He instructed. He then dove into the water. 'Hey! This is the part where I find Elizabeth!' Yoyo thought happily as he swam down further. He watched as the small girl gently floated down to the ocean floor. Yoyo swam down to the girl and nearly gasped at the sight of her. 'Rhyth...?' Yoyo wrapped his arms around her waist and tried to swim up. For some reason, he was having a ton of trouble. He had known Rhyth to be lighter than this...then he remembered the dress. 'Oh god! I feel like such a pervert.' Yoyo pulled the dress off her. She was much lighter now. He carried her to the surface and swam to shore with her. "Could you give me a hand here?" Yoyo asked with an annoyed tone to the two guards who quickly came to his aid. He rolled Rhyth onto the dock and checked her pulse. "She's not breathing." One of the guards said in panic. Yoyo thought hard for a moment. He then pulled the knife from his belt and cut the corset off. Rhyth gasped and coughed up some water. She looked up at the green haired boy and gasped. "Yoyo?" "Elizabeth!" Commodore Norrington ran down the dock to meet his love followed by several guards and the Governor. "Are you alright?" "Yes." She replied quickly. "Guards! Arrest this man!" The commodore instructed loudly. The surrounding guards held their guns up at Yoyo, who put his hands up in surrender. "Commodore! Stop!" Rhyth ran up in front of Norrington. "Do you really intend to kill my rescuer?" 'Thank god I read most of the book!' "..." The commodore looked over at Yoyo. "Well then," He held out his hand. "I do believe thanks are in order." Yoyo looked at the commodore in suspicion. As he reached his hand out, the commodore grabbed his wrist and pulled his sleeve up. "Well, well, well." Norrington said with a smirk. "Had an encounter with the East Indian trade, pirate?" He then pulled his sleeve higher. "Jack sparrow." Jack raised his hand to protest. "Captain Jack Sparrow, if you please." "Well, I don't see your ship...Captain." The commodore sneered "I'm in the market... as it were." He replied. "These are his." The first guard said as he handed Jack's effects to the Commodore. "No additional shot or powder..." He sneered as he looked at the gun, "a compass that doesn't point north..." He pulled the sword halfway out of the sheath, "and I half expected it to be made of wood. You are without doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of." Yoyo raised his hands to protest. "But you have heard of me." "Hang him!" Governor Swan stuttered. The guards immediately grabbed Yoyo and put handcuffs on his wrists. "Commodore!" Rhyth caught up to the men dragging Jack away. "I really must protest. Pirate or not, he saved my life!" "Elizabeth, one good deed will not repay all of the evil he's done." Norrington explained gravely. "But it should be enough to condemn him." Yoyo pointed out as the guards finished putting the handcuffs on his wrists. "Sorry about this, Rhyth." He then took the chain and threw it over her neck. "Commodore, my effects please." He waited a few seconds for him and then repeated louder. "Commodore!" Norrington handed the weapons to Elizabeth as Jack turned her around. "Sorry for being such a jackass, Rhyth." He whispered in her ear. "Just hand them to me. I don't want to feel like a pervert." Rhyth shoved the weapons in his chest as he released her. He quickly put them on and slipped his hat on his head. Still holding her, he started his little victory speech. "Commodore, You'd better start looking for another girl. You will all remember this as the day when you almost caught Captain Jack sparrow!" He pushed Rhyth over to the British navy and ran down the dock. He kicked a wedge holding a gear out of the way and watched as a canon dropped down on the dock, creating a hole in the boards. He quickly grabbed the rope and swung over to the next crane. "Fire!" The commodore yelled. The soldiers shot at Jack as he swung to the beam. "At his heels!" Jack slid down a rope onto the next dock. He was chased into the village. He raced by screaming women and other guards until he turned a corner and hid behind a big metal statue. He watched as the soldiers ran by the building. After the yelling had stopped, he looked to see if the coast was clear. He then turned and strode into the building, paying no attention to the sign above: Brown's Blacksmith Shop.
I know... It's long. How'd you like it (Fire of Darkness)? Huh? Huh? Ooh! Guess what? As soon as I get a website, I'll post the story there too. And guess what else will be there? FANART!!! Then you can see the characters through my imagination, and maybe I can see them through yours. Ah well. Review pleeze!
Fire of Darkness... read this!!: Thanks for the review. You're really enthusiastic... or just hyper. There are a few things I must say about your review. First of all... You said you'd go crazy, grab an axe, track the kid down and chop of his big head. I am a GIRL! Second, my head's not big! I'm just smart. (Why are people like me picked on so much? sob Ah, I'm just screwing with ya!) Thirdly, I am not affected with threats like that. There's a jerk at my school named Chris Vande Velde. If you don't know him, you're the luckiest kid on earth. Christoph is a bastard that threatens people... mainly me and... mainly me, so now, I don't mind them anymore. Don't feel bad. I didn't take it personally. I'm just telling the world the story of my miserable life. Anyway, I loved your review. Hope you like this chapter!
Cast: Rhyth- Elizabeth Swan Beat- Will Turner Yoyo- Captain Jack sparrow Ana-Maria- Oh... nice try! You'll find out soon enough!
Chapter 2: The famous Captain Jack Sparrow! Yoyo stood on the mast. Wind and mist blew in his face. He smirked as Port Royal came into view. He looked down at the hull, which was half full of water. Yoyo grabbed a rope hanging from the mast and swung down to the hull of the boat. He quickly grabbed a bucket floating by his feet and started to empty the water out of his miniature ship. He looked up at a rock formation where skeletons hung by their necks on ropes were shown. Hanging from another rope was a sign, which read: Pirates, ye be warned. Yoyo took off his hat and placed it on his chest to honour the long deceased pirates. After a few more buckets of water being thrown overboard, Yoyo finally gave up and climbed up the mast. He was almost there... The whole boat had sunk. One third of the mast and the sail were all that stayed above water. Yoyo stood proudly on the mast as it traveled to the harbour. The mast got closer and closer to the water. As the dock finally came close enough to reach, Yoyo stepped off and walked down the dock to Port Royal. 'Jack was the luckiest pirate alive.' Yoyo thought happily as he acted out the famous 'Jack Sparrow walk'. "You there!" Yoyo turned around. A man wearing a white wig ran up to him. He carried a large book in his hand. A small African boy followed timidly behind. "It costs a shilling to have your boat at the docks. They all looked over at the ship. The mast was the only thing above water. Yoyo sweatdropped and turned back to the man. He rummaged around in his pocket and pulled out three small coins.
"How about three shillings..." Yoyo dropped the shillings on his book, "and we forget the name." The man looked from Yoyo to the money. "Welcome aboard, Mr. Smith." He said happily as he closed the book. Yoyo nodded and walked away. As Yoyo passed a small stand, he snatched a small bag of money, shook it, and continued on his journey. Yoyo walked down a few steps to one of the ships at the harbour. As he walked onto the dock, a few fairly stupid soldiers blocked his way. "You there! This dock is off limits to all civilians." The first guard stated. "Really?" Yoyo said innocently. "Well if I see one, I'll tell you." He took a step to the right, but the guards ended up in his way again. "It seems like a ship like this..." Yoyo gestured to the ship before him, "seems like nothing to a ship like..." Yoyo walked to the left and sweatdropped when the guards blocked him again, "that!" Yoyo gestured to a ship on the other harbour. "Oh, well that's the Interceptor." The second guard said proudly. "There's no ship that can match the Interceptor." Yoyo rolled his eyes. There were obviously ships that could pass it in modern times, but he decided to stick with the story. "I've heard of one... one that's never been beaten. The Black Pearl." The guard started to laugh again. "Like I said... there's no real ship that can match the Interceptor." "I've seen the Black pearl." The first guard said quietly. "No you haven't." "Yes I have." Yoyo rolled his eyes and snuck away quietly. He walked onto the ship and stood at the wheel. He smirked at the thought of how easy this must've been for Jack. "You there! Freeze!" The two guards came up holding their guns up at him. "I'm sorry." Yoyo let go of the wheel. "It just such a pretty boat-ship." "What's your name?" the second guard asked. "Smith." "Well then, Mr. Smith. What business brings you to Port Royal?" Yoyo let out a sigh. "It was to see my dear childhood friend again." Yoyo lied. He had forgotten what Jack had really said, so he decided to twist the story a little. "I haven't seen her in so long...excuse me." He turned around to wipe some invisible tears away. "I just want to see her one last time before I leave for London." From what he could tell, his plan was working.
Rhyth stood up at the cliff with none other than Commodore Norrington. To her surprise, he wasn't one of her friends. She let out a sigh of relief when she saw him. Now she was waving her fan frantically, trying to cool herself down and breathe at the same time. The corset was really getting to her. "Elizabeth..." The Commodore said after a long speech about her being a fine woman. What was she? 20? "Will you marry me?" "...I can't breathe." Rhyth gasped. Everything was spinning around her. The commodore's voice became faint. She lost her balance and fell off the side. Rhyth, half conscious watched as the crystal blue water closed in on her. Water wasn't a problem anymore. She hadn't been able to breathe on land either. Her indigo hair blended with the surrounding blue. 'Beat...'
"...and that's when I met her-" Yoyo was cut off by a large splash. They looked over to see what had happened. This was obviously Jack's rescue scene "Will you be saving 'im?" Yoyo asked the first guard. "I can't swim." He replied. Yoyo looked over at the other guard who shook his head. "Okay then. He took off his hat and belt (Which held his gun, sword, compass and other things) and shoved them into the guards' hands. "Do not lose these." He instructed. He then dove into the water. 'Hey! This is the part where I find Elizabeth!' Yoyo thought happily as he swam down further. He watched as the small girl gently floated down to the ocean floor. Yoyo swam down to the girl and nearly gasped at the sight of her. 'Rhyth...?' Yoyo wrapped his arms around her waist and tried to swim up. For some reason, he was having a ton of trouble. He had known Rhyth to be lighter than this...then he remembered the dress. 'Oh god! I feel like such a pervert.' Yoyo pulled the dress off her. She was much lighter now. He carried her to the surface and swam to shore with her. "Could you give me a hand here?" Yoyo asked with an annoyed tone to the two guards who quickly came to his aid. He rolled Rhyth onto the dock and checked her pulse. "She's not breathing." One of the guards said in panic. Yoyo thought hard for a moment. He then pulled the knife from his belt and cut the corset off. Rhyth gasped and coughed up some water. She looked up at the green haired boy and gasped. "Yoyo?" "Elizabeth!" Commodore Norrington ran down the dock to meet his love followed by several guards and the Governor. "Are you alright?" "Yes." She replied quickly. "Guards! Arrest this man!" The commodore instructed loudly. The surrounding guards held their guns up at Yoyo, who put his hands up in surrender. "Commodore! Stop!" Rhyth ran up in front of Norrington. "Do you really intend to kill my rescuer?" 'Thank god I read most of the book!' "..." The commodore looked over at Yoyo. "Well then," He held out his hand. "I do believe thanks are in order." Yoyo looked at the commodore in suspicion. As he reached his hand out, the commodore grabbed his wrist and pulled his sleeve up. "Well, well, well." Norrington said with a smirk. "Had an encounter with the East Indian trade, pirate?" He then pulled his sleeve higher. "Jack sparrow." Jack raised his hand to protest. "Captain Jack Sparrow, if you please." "Well, I don't see your ship...Captain." The commodore sneered "I'm in the market... as it were." He replied. "These are his." The first guard said as he handed Jack's effects to the Commodore. "No additional shot or powder..." He sneered as he looked at the gun, "a compass that doesn't point north..." He pulled the sword halfway out of the sheath, "and I half expected it to be made of wood. You are without doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of." Yoyo raised his hands to protest. "But you have heard of me." "Hang him!" Governor Swan stuttered. The guards immediately grabbed Yoyo and put handcuffs on his wrists. "Commodore!" Rhyth caught up to the men dragging Jack away. "I really must protest. Pirate or not, he saved my life!" "Elizabeth, one good deed will not repay all of the evil he's done." Norrington explained gravely. "But it should be enough to condemn him." Yoyo pointed out as the guards finished putting the handcuffs on his wrists. "Sorry about this, Rhyth." He then took the chain and threw it over her neck. "Commodore, my effects please." He waited a few seconds for him and then repeated louder. "Commodore!" Norrington handed the weapons to Elizabeth as Jack turned her around. "Sorry for being such a jackass, Rhyth." He whispered in her ear. "Just hand them to me. I don't want to feel like a pervert." Rhyth shoved the weapons in his chest as he released her. He quickly put them on and slipped his hat on his head. Still holding her, he started his little victory speech. "Commodore, You'd better start looking for another girl. You will all remember this as the day when you almost caught Captain Jack sparrow!" He pushed Rhyth over to the British navy and ran down the dock. He kicked a wedge holding a gear out of the way and watched as a canon dropped down on the dock, creating a hole in the boards. He quickly grabbed the rope and swung over to the next crane. "Fire!" The commodore yelled. The soldiers shot at Jack as he swung to the beam. "At his heels!" Jack slid down a rope onto the next dock. He was chased into the village. He raced by screaming women and other guards until he turned a corner and hid behind a big metal statue. He watched as the soldiers ran by the building. After the yelling had stopped, he looked to see if the coast was clear. He then turned and strode into the building, paying no attention to the sign above: Brown's Blacksmith Shop.
I know... It's long. How'd you like it (Fire of Darkness)? Huh? Huh? Ooh! Guess what? As soon as I get a website, I'll post the story there too. And guess what else will be there? FANART!!! Then you can see the characters through my imagination, and maybe I can see them through yours. Ah well. Review pleeze!
