Title: Cloudy Night
Author: loveoftheblue
Genre: Action/ Adventure
Chapter Two: Last Glimpse
(a/n) Thank you! Thank you, thank you, thank you! You have no idea how much your reviews meant to me cuz this is my first fic! I'm sorry! I just realized that the title of my fic and the title I put in the fic are different! I'm sooo sorry! Gomen! Please forgive me! (I'm over-reacting aren't I?)
"Now, now, Dark. Don't you want to play?", Satoshi hissed, causing the sexy kaitou to shiver at the icy touch in his voice, "We haven't been able to see each other since the last time you tried to steal."
Suddenly, a voice sounded in the young commander's mind, a voice beautiful, furious, and deadly serious all at the same time, Satoshi, what are you doing! You are here to catch him, not play your little mind games!
Shut up. I know what I'm doing, Satoshi shot back, seeing in his mind's eye the beautiful, yet currently pissed, blonde that shared his body, I'll catch him in due time, just let me do this my way.
You had better know what you're doing. If you fail to catch Dark again, Hiwatari-san will make sure you regret it, the blonde, whose name was Krad, spoke in a pleading tone, hinting at the worry he seldom let show, He won't care if you get hurt in the process. You know that he will stop at nothing to catch the legendary phantom thief. Remember what he said will happen if you fail to catch Dark Mousy. Be careful, please. I don't want you getting hurt.
Thank you for caring, Krad, but frankly, I don't care what Hiwatari does. This is my family's battle, not his. He should know better than to interfere.
Satoshi-sama… please…stop messing around… you know that you mean more to me than anything else, even myself… please… be careful.
Satoshi looked around and sighed. This world we live in…nobody cares if others get hurt, as long as they get what they want.
Dark, what is Hiwatari-kun doing? Why is he just standing there?, Daisuke was surprised. the young commander had finally caught the legendary Dark Mousy, yet he was standing there with a depressed expression marring his perfect complexion, Is Hiwatari-kun alright?
Don't worry your little head, Creepy Boy is always alright, Dark couldn't help but chuckle at the worry he heard in his young tamer's voice, Maybe he has some second doubts about capturing us. Hehehe… Satoshi… having doubts… now that's funny…
Upon hearing the kaitou laugh, Satoshi was abruptly jerked back into painful reality. Spinning around, he quickly caught Dark's handcuffs and pulled him to his feet, as the Thief's Dagger lay forgotten in the corner behind them.
"Ouch, watch it commander. Just 'cause you finally caught me doesn't mean you have the right to be rude. You need to learn some manners," Dark scolded Satoshi, sounding like somebody's mother.
"Does that mean that you don't need to learn manners either? From what I've heard, the only people you're polite to are the girls you're hitting on. Or are my sources unclear about that, too?", retorted Satoshi, jabbing back at the thief's feelings.
"Why you little… let me loose right now and I'll teach you some manners!"
"No can do, kaitou. You really think I'm that stupid? Or are you just trying to waste my time? Either way, you're coming with me, and nothing can change that."
Dark finally resigned, letting Satoshi lead him away, but before they left, he had one more request, "Wait! Satoshi, before I get locked up, will you let me see the night sky one more time? Please, I don't want to go without seeing the moon one last time…"
Satoshi decided that one last glimpse wouldn't hurt, as long as he kept a firm grip on the handcuffs. He led Dark over to an open window, and watched the tears starting to form in the phantom thief's eyes, filled with longing, and pain, wanting to be free to fly through the night. Satoshi turned away. Who knew that the phantom thief could love something so much?
"Dark, please, don't make this any harder for yourself. Come on… You know you'll get away… you always do," Satoshi found himself encouraging the thief, he couldn't stand the broken look the phantom wore.
Dark… are you alright? Please, Dark, speak to me. Tell me what's wrong… Dark? Dark? Dark…, Daisuke was struck down by the emotion that his counterpart was feeling, Dark, what's wrong? You know you can tell me. Please…
It's no use, I've lost the will to be the phantom thief, that's why I'm losing my edge. Think of all the narrow escapes we had the past few weeks, we've been having closer and closer shaves… I'm tired of running, tired of living in the shadows, tired of living to please others. I don't want this Dai… I really don't want it…
Dark sighed and turned way from the open window and the beckoning breeze to face Satoshi. As he was led away, he gave one last look at the window, staring longingly at the clouds that obscured the beautiful full moon with glistening tears rolling down his tanned cheeks, and longed for the day when he would once again take to the skies with his wings as black as the blackest of nights…
(a/n) I'm sad. I made my precious Satoshi look like such a bad guy. My own story depressed me. (how pathetic is that?) And I'm very sorry if I made anyone else sad, too. Please review and tell me what you thought. And I'm sorry it took me so long to update! My stupid computer lost the Internet connection for the fifth time this week. And please tell me what you would say if I said "yaoi." Arigato!
Doveoflight- thank you for the compliment . do you really think so? And thank you for the offer to help. If you have any ideas, you are welcome to send them in. D
blue-0-demon- Did I do something wrong? Or do you always review like that? Thank you anyway .
Dark Mousy 0- thank you for not minding the length of my chappy. I'm gonna try my best to make them longer . Also, you should get your parents to fill out your permission form for neopets. They wouldn't let me neomail you. My username is nightwing156. Angels for adopting. You evil little girl. How could you!
Les Scribbles- I read some of your fics before! But I didn't review cuz I didn't have a pen name yet when I read them. As you can see, I have yet to do my profile yet. But hopefully, this chappy answered some of your questions. I will be going into more detail later . (luv ur profile! Satoshiiiiiii!)
