Jak's Final adventure, chapter 2

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As Jak and Daxter jumped off the zoomer, and walked into Keira's garage, Jak sensed a presence behind him. He turned abrubtly around and caught Keira as she flung herself twords him, his lips found hers, and they spun three more times before they stopped. "Okay Keira, enough fooling around, for now at least,i need to grab my gunJak walks over to the bench it's at and grabs it I left it here when i had to bring your wasted self back to your apartment, and there is something else..." Jak said, and told her about the dream, and what it had said. Keira then without missing a beat smacked him in the face and knocked the hero of Haven city to the ground. Before Jak could ask for an explanation, he tried to ask daxter for help, but Keira kept on hitting him, repeating " oh sure, yeah, go off again, and get yourself killed". While this was going on, Keira's eyes were filled to the brim with tear's; Jak too, although not from emotional pain; and daxter was sitting in a lounge chair eating popcorn and recording the whole thing. Daxter's furry face was spread in a smile, and explained to Keira that they were bringing a couple of Krimson Guards with them. She promptly started chatting with Daxter the usual things, threatning to kill him if Jak got hurt. Meanwhile, thanks to Daxter, Jak managed to sneak out and shouted immediately " COME ON DAX, HURRY!" Jak then put the petal to the metal on his zoomer and got out of there. Keia then whispered to herself, sobbing silently, " Jak please dont get hurt." She then realized, she was in love.

After Jak arrived at the metal head nest, he told Daxter to stay with the zoomer, and to guard it. Daxter replied by pulling out a cigar, an army hat, and a small blaster pistol with the power of a blaster but none of the kick. Jak then ran into the cave. Immediately he leaned against the wall, heard a voice, and the grunts of metal heads, three as far as he could tell. He cautiously peered around the corner and saw a metal head leaving the chamber which the voice was coming from, and bent back around the corner. When the metal head rounded the corner, Jak dashed at it. the metal head, seeing Jak coming, dashed after Jak. The metal head swung it's claws but Jak ducked under it's attack and grabbed the offending arm. Jak then flipped the metal head on it's back, and punched it in it's face with enough power that he shattered it's skull gem. Sprinting away from the dead metal head's corpse, he lept into the chamber where the voice was coming from. Jak pulled out his morph gun, and shot the two other meta heads. He then turned his attention to the voice. Jak then gasped, "you, you're dead." the hologram then said, "i never was dead Jak, hahahahahahaha, you never would have guessed that Kor was my servant, would you. Hahaha, excellent. My army is preparing to move out. I'll let you go warn the city Jak. Jak swallowed his pride, and ran back to Daxter and the zoomer. before Dax could even ask a question, he grabbed him, jumped on the zoomer, and sped back to the city. While speeding back to the city, Daxter heard Jak mumbling, "Erol, still alive?"

End chapter two,

whew, two chapters done in one day, oh well, please review, i wanted to give two chapters to the audience so they could review efficiently.