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"The demons will hunt me, until I am dead"
I decided to rewrite my story. I read it and I think it sucked. This one is much better then the first one. Please read and tell me what you think about it!
Summary: Ren is being hunted by demons. They want to kill him. Bason can't protect him any longer. Ren is acting strange and the others don't understand why. Can they save him from his terrible destiny? Pirika loves Ren. Does he love her too? What does Horohoro thinks about that? Read and Review!
Chapter 1:
Pirika's diary
"Hi! I am Pirika. Today is 17 October. So my birthday was today! Now I am 15 years old! I love my brother Horohoro, but it is only sister love. Oh, bah! I am not up to incest. And he is not the only one I love. I have a huge crush on Ren. And that's true love! He is just so cute and I know in the inside he is really sweet. That's why I also invited him for my birthday party. Horohoro doesn't understand why!
I also invited Yoh, Anna, Tamao and Manta. It was a nice day. Horohoro bought me a very nice dress; it's red with a beautiful patron. I've put it on today, in my party. Yoh gave me a CD from Evanescence; it seems to be good music. Anna gave me a very beautiful necklace. Manta gave me a book; it seems to be quite an exciting story. Tamao gave me this diary. And Ren gave me very pretty earrings; I noticed they matched with my aqua eyes! I think I was blushing, when he gave them to me. And I am not sure, but I think he was blushing too!
We ate cake and watched a comedy film: Legally blond 2. I already had watched the first one and I was curious to see the second. Then we ate pizza and Horohoro put some music on. So everybody danced, well, not everybody, Ren didn't want to dance. He's so shy! There was also wine. Yoh brought it with him. The boys drank it and all of them became drunken! Anna only drank two glasses, and then she stopped. When Ren was drunken, he danced, and Oh! He dances so well! He is really hot! He also talked much more; he was much nicer than usual! He, my brother and Yoh were laughing so much! Manta fell quickly asleep. Then when it was around 1:00 a clock, I, Tamao and Anna decided to go to sleep. My apartment is small. So we've put Horohoro and Ren together, hihi. They won't like it when they wake up. Yoh and Anna stayed together on the visitors' bedroom. Me and Tamao stayed on my room and Manta stayed downstairs on the sofa."
Pirika's PoV
I was just finished writing this on my diary, when a scream broke the silence of the night. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" I think it came from my brother's room. Tamao also woke up. "Who's screaming? What's going on?" she asked looking frightened at me. "Come, it think it comes from my brother's room." We walked to his room, I noticed Tamao was shaking a bit, she is like chicken, she is afraid of the dark, or maybe she thinks somebody is in our house, a thief or something. Anna, Yoh and Manta were also there.
Ren looked very confused and frightened.
"Uaaaauamm, what's going on, who's the screamer?" Yoh asked still halve sleeping. My brother laughed his head of and said: "Poor, scary, little Lenny had a bad dream, ahahahahah!" So Ren was the one who was screaming. Manta and Yoh, both laughed and Anna only said: "Hmmm." and then she turned her back to Ren and my brother. Suddenly Ren became all red and shouted: "You all, go away! Leave me alone! Horohoro stop laughing, you irritating idiot! Like if you never have a nightmare! Ahhhhhh! Shut up! Stop laughing!"
Then we decided to go away. My brother just continued laughing, Yoh and Manta were also laughing and telling jokes about Ren and what he could have dreamed about. Yoh said one which was quite funny: "Ren dreamed that Horohoro was kissing him and telling him that he has a huge crush on Ren, then Ren woke up with Horohoro next to him and yelled even more, ahahahahah!"
After this I went with Tamao to my room and went to sleep.
Horohoro PoV
I was sleeping so peacefully in my bed, when I woke up with Ren next to me shaking. I thought: "Bah, why is this guy sleeping with me, in my bed? Euh, disgusting, I am going to wake him up."
Then I looked at him. He was very pale, strange, and I heard him saying something like: "No…please…stay away. …Ahhhhhhhhhh, no… JUNNNNNNN…ahhhhhhh…no…don't come any closer…leave her alone, leave me alone … ahhhhhhhhhhh … somebody help me!" "Hmm, he is having a nightmare, I am going to listen to it, before I wake him up." I thought. Then he started screaming even more, like if he was being murdered. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Then he woke up.
I teased Ren in front of everybody and he got so upset that after shouting and insulting me, he went away. He just stepped of the bed, walked to the door and banged it behind him. I don't know where he is going to sleep, but now I have the bed all for my own!
Ren PoV
The demons are hunting me for more then two weeks. When are they going to stop? I can't hold it any longer. They only appear when I am alone or in my nightmares. Why do they want to kill me? The first time I saw them, I was training in the cemetery. They wanted to kill me and then Bason protected me. He was destroyed. Now I don't have a spirit. It's just like if I'm not longer a Shaman and I was one of the best! I don't even want a new spirit! I just want to be left alone. I want peace. Nobody knows about the demons. Not even Jun. One time, I was at home, there was a demon. He just stood there. And I asked if Jun saw anything, but she didn't saw the demon. I am the only one who sees them and they never stop, they only stop when I am dead. That's what they tell me every time.
This night I had a horrible nightmare again. I was at home. A demon wanted to kill me. I screamed for help. Then Jun appeared and the demon killed her. Afterwards he went behind me and started murdering me very slowly, I felt my soul abandoning my body and the pain was horrible. Then I woke up with Horohoro looking at me. Horohoro made fun of me, he is an idiot, and he doesn't even know what I dreamed. The others also find it funny. I hate them all! I don't even know what I am doing here with them! Well, some of them are my friends and Pirika is a very sweet girl and it was her birthday party today.
Now that I didn't want to sleep with Horohoro, I decided to pick Manta up from the sofa and just throw him on the floor. Then I tried to sleep on the sofa. But I couldn't. I couldn't stop thinking about the demons! Suddenly I heard a sound, first I thought it was a demon, but it was only Manta who woke up.
He looked angry at me and asked with his childish voice: "What are you doing in the sofa? I was sleeping there! Get of the sofa! You creep!"
I just answered coldly without getting of the sofa: "You are right, dwarf. You were sleeping on the sofa, but not any more. So go find another place to sleep. I won't go away. If you continue irritating me I will send you to the spirit world, so I guess you understand what I mean: I will kill you!" He looked very frightened at me, and I am sure he was shivering, ahahah! That gives me pleasure and it makes me feel better. So he went away, searching for a room where he could sleep.
After a few hours when I was nearly asleep, I saw a red light. I opened my eyes better and saw exactly what I didn't want to see. It was a demon. He was very tall and skinny, his black disgusting skin hardly covered his bones, and his eyes were red like blood. He opened his mouth to talk: "You die! You die! You die!" His voice was cold like freezing wind and his teed were yellow and sharp like knifes. The red light around him only became bigger and bigger, blinding me. I couldn't move, was I going to die? Was this another nightmare or was this real? I tried to scream, but my voice was too low to hear. The demon came closer; he put his hands around my neck and started strangling me. I couldn't breath. It was like my longs were going to explode. Everywhere in my body I felt a horrible pain, impossible to describe. My neck started burning like if he had fire in his hands. Then all became black.
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