My favorite chapter! Yaay! This is the fastest weekend that I have updated like 4 chapters in two days! Yaay! Go me! Go me! Anyways, here's the edited chapter 3!
Chapter 3: A graveyard battle fresh and full of LIFE!!
Scene is Faust is doing a little "experiment" on Manta.
A creepy singer sings "Do do do do, do doo, do wah!"
Faust looks for some instruments to "experiment" and tells Eliza to get a knife. Manta squirms to get free.
The singer continues. "It doesn't matter what comes, fresh goes better in life,
With Mentos fresh and full of Life!"
Yoh struggles to fight off the skeletons that have held him. He is shouts to Faust as he teases Yoh's emotions by poking Manta.
Again, the creepy guy continues, now poking Yoh. "Nothing gets to you, stayin fresh, stayin cool,
With Mentos fresh and full of LIFE!"
Yoh manages to get a Mentos from his pocket and eats it. He turns to the camera and gives us an oh-so-cute smile (A/N: Me: faints of his beauty) He then bites the singer. "If you sing LIFE one more time⦠I'm going to cry" he pouts.
Yoh sprints towards Faust with Amidamaru in Harusame. Faust, too takes out a Mentos and eats it. He also turns to the camera and smiles.
Faust calls all the skeletons to life and charges them with full force as Manta is crying and screaming in pain with his abdomen showing.
The singer dances and twirls. "Fresh goes better! Mentos freshness!"
Yoh powers up and attacks Faust. When both clash, a white light appears and a boom is heard.
Then Ren appears in all his glory, with Yoh and Faust lying in exhaustion, holding a package of Mentos and giving his trademark grin.
Singer does his butt shake in front of Yoh and Faust. Ren growls, the singer taking his spotlight. "Fresh goes better with Mentos, fresh and full of LIFE!" the creepy one sings one last time before the three take an angry cat and run after him.
Manta is still screaming while Anna and Silva appear poking him with their umbrellas.
The same announcer from last chapter comes up and says "Mentos! The fresh maker!"
I love this chapter. I thought this one was the funniest. To me anyway. Much more to come! I need ideas so please state one if you have one! Thanks!
Thank you for reading!
Ja Mata!
Keiko
