Hey, Miya here again! After reading some heart-warming poems I decided to write one…I'm not much of a poet but hey, it's good to try new things every once and a while right? well don't forget to review afterwards.
Thank You
Dear Heavenly Father,
Thank you for taking me this much farther.
I don't know what I would have done
If it wasn't for Your perfect Son
Who took away the sins of the earth,
Renewing it for all it was worth.
You gave us chance for a second life,
But in return we did nothing but strife.
You know what was and is and is to come,
So why did You allow us to do what was done?
I have no words to express my gratitude,
But forever I promise to remember Your forgiving attitude.
Thank you Father, again I thank thee
For all Your trouble is not worth a sinful me.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
What else is there to say?
For You gave me the chance to follow Your way.
Miya K Hitachi
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So? Love it? Hate it? Well! tell me your thoughts! REVIEW!
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Miya: well, Xtians Suck, I'm sorry you didn't enjoy my little poem, but like I said I'm not much of a poet. And everyone has their own opinion. But thanx anyway for your time and thoughts. Criticism is a step toward improvement after all.
And for the rest of you reviewers, THANX!
