A/N okay this is my first atempt at writing and following with putting it online, All my other fiction has been for my own pleasure of reading, so nobody has ever told me "Hey, you are great, keep going" or "Hey stop while you are a head before you hurt yourself." So let me know what ya'll think.

Amanda

Whispers

Chapter 1

The phone was ringing, she put her wine glass down to answer.

"Hello" the burnette asked. The metalic sounding voice that was distorted, made shivers go up and down her spine.

"I'm coming to get you Lori." the voice whispered.

"Excuse me? Who is this" Lori asked

"All that matters is that i'm coming to get you" the voice

"Okay pal, I'm going to call the police" Lori said and hung up the phone. Then came the knock on the door.

"A guy was walking his dog and the dog lead him here. He saw the remains and used his cell phone to call police. He is talking toJetter now." Captain Jim Brass said leading Gil Grissom to the body. " So, what do you think" Brass asked.

"Well judging by the position and brutality of the looks of the body, I would have to say, Rage. Look at those ligature marks on the abdomen. Whoever did this wanted to make sure this person would not recover." Grissom turned to Sara Sidel. "Sara you go back to the lab and wait for the body, work on trac"

Grissom was cut off by Nick Stokes. "Griss, I found another body, same shape as the first, oh wait, I have a third arm here." Nick said looking over to Grissom who was making his way over to Nick, walking around blood, body organs and, other evidence. Grissom looked down at the forearm of a third victim and made his way back over to Brass and Sara.

"We Have a mass grave here, so were are going to work from here out, watch your feet, where you walk and where you put things down at." Grissom said raising his voice so all the officers could hear him.

"Sara forget about trace, I need you here, call Greg, this will be a good start for him. Brass I only want our guys working on this." Grissom called over to Nick. "Nick call Catherine and Warrick, pull them from what ever case they are on." Grissom turns back to Brass to go over details, then hearing comotion coming from Nick's direction.

"Hey, What's going on" Grissom said raising his arms.

"David stepped in some evidence." Nick said annoyed.

"Yeah well It's not like I meant to. Grissom I swear it was an accident. There were leaves covering the face." David said as Nick started to carefully remove leaves from where David had stepped.

"Face" Grissom said confused.

"Grissom, these people have been skinned." Nick said staring at the remains of a skin and hair but with no skull.

A/N Ok, I know you people are going to probably say 'why end there?' Well ashamed to say I have that dreaded disease Writers Block, It is dibilitating, renders you with out ideas. I know sound horrible, but maybe I will be cured sometime this week. But I do have to say, I am willing to take any ideas from anybody, help me, cure me! Any ideas welcome!