Nikki: I know i've been gone for a long time and I hardly remember this fic but it still continues thanks to my reviewers.
I have never gotten so many reviews for one demo chapter.So thnx.The first chapter i am rewriting but leaving on for some odd
reason...can't really recall why I am leaving the first demo chapter on.

Disclaimer: I don't anything.


Save Me
chpt.1 rewritten

Kagome's P.O.V/Normal P.O.V

My panting came in short breaths as my feet pounded the forest floor in a steady rythm, making the odd stumble over fallen branches and rotting logs.I didn't know where I was or what direction I was going.All I knew was that the full moon was over head and a cold chill ran through the forest.Making the leaves shiver as if they could feel the cold.The reason of my frantic running is because a scene I saw and that now replays over and over in my head.

How could he do this to me!My tears start flowing again and all I see is a blurr.I don't notice the branch infront of me and I fall
to the ground, this time not carring to get up.Not carring about the growls of hungry demons around me.Not carring for anything.

(?) Change of Scene (?)

A tall handsome well feared demon stalked the borders of his lands.Taking out anything that stood in his way or threatened him.Walking silently untill coming to a sudden halt.A familiar scent lingers in the air along with the salt of tears.

Sesshomaru's P.O.V

Kagome...what is she doing in my lands?I can't smell her friends or my idiotic half brother.Shes crying to.What has that mutt done now?

Normal P.O.V

Sesshomaru followed the lingering scent to come apon kagome lying face down on the forest floor, her shoulders wracking in sobs.Sesshomaru walked next to the girl and kneeled down and brought her up to a sitting position.Tears making their way down her cheeks and onto her lap.

"Why are you crying Kagome?" Sesshomaru asked, softly.

All he got was a light whimper and more tears.Sesshomaru brought up his hand to wipe away the tears."Kagome answer me" Sesshomaru said slightly hardining his voice.Another whimper and a sob before Kagome replied "I saw Inu-yasha making l..lo..love to Kikyo."another sob and more tears.

Sesshomaru narrowed his eyes and took Kagome into his arms(yes he has both arms.in all my stories he has both arms).
Kagome just cried harder and Sesshomaru rocked back and forth, petting her hair and smoothing out the nots."Sesshomaru...why? I don't understand" said Kagome between soft sobs.

It started raining.Adding to Kagome's mood, so Sesshomaru stood up and took Kagome into his arms bridal style and flew off to his castle.

When he got there he ordered servants around to get a room and a bath made ready for her and a Kimonos to be put in the closet.He gave Kagome to one of his female servants and she carried Kagome off to her bath and helped her bathe and then into bed.


Nikki: There that should be good for the first chapter.Rewrittin of course.So RnR and tell me if the rewritten one was better than the orginal.Thnx!