The dungeon also happens to have a spectator ring, which has been filled up with the many fan fiction members around the world. Many of them share Christine's attitude of anger and hatred towards Mary Sue but hopefully some of them, like me, feel Mary Sue is just misunderstood and like her and all her crazy adventures, which are often hilarious and amuslingly melodramatic.
All of this scene will be written in this style because I find it's easier to understand and read! I am sorry if you don't...
Happy reading!
Note to whoever is reading this: THE FAN FICTION WRITERS ARE NOT REAL! I HAVE MADE UP THEM AND THEIR CHARACTERS. THESE ARE IMAGINARY FAN FICTION WRITERS. SO PLEASE DO NOT BE OFFENDED!
(Setting the scene: Mary Sue is currently lying on a platform just above a pit of fire, whimpering slightly though still looking beautiful as always. Christine is cackling manically below shouting helpful things such as 'Don't look down!' then cackling some more. She is currently standing next to a lever, which if pulled, will send Mary Sue to her death. The crowd of fan fiction writers are chanting 'Burn her! Burn her!' and ever so often someone shouts 'Drop her in the pit!'. Sarah Jane is in the front row of the spectators, leading the chanting.)
Christine 'MOH HAH HAH HAA! Now who wants Raoul?'
Mary Sue 'I never wanted him! He's a big fop…I mean he's just not my type. You're honestly welcome to him.'
Sarah Jane 'She's lying! She was after him all along. Just pull the leaver and drop her in the pit.'
Crowd 'IN THE PIT! IN THE PIT! IN THE PIT!
(Mary Sue whimpers loudly and starts to sob. The poor thing!)
Christine 'Hah! There's no Raoul to save you now like last time.'
Mary Sue 'What time? He never saved me. He kidnapped me!'
Sarah Jane 'Don't listen to her! She's trying to trick you with mind games.'
Crowd 'MIND GAMES! MIND GAMES! MIND GAMES!'
Mary Sue 'Please! Can't we just talk about this sensibly? How about making a deal? You let me off this platform and PRETEND I've died. Then Raoul will want you again!'
(Christine looks thoughtful, considering the idea. Sarah Jane starts to look worried so decides to stir up the crowd some more.)
Sarah Jane 'Why bother? Why not just kill her for real? This whole pretending thing would just be a lot of trouble. AND you would have to lie to your precious Raoul. Just send her to her grave!'
Crowd 'TO HER GRAVE! TO HER GRAVE! TO HER GRAVE!
Mary Sue (Under her breath to herself) 'Man that crowds annoying. All they do is repeat the last few words Sarah Jane says.' (Speaking loudly to everyone) 'No, please! Then you would be a murderer Christine. Can you really live with my blood on your hands? Can you really?'
Sarah Jane (To Mary Sue) 'Sure she can!' (Talking to Christine) 'Why on earth would you want to save her?'
Crowd 'SAVE HER! SAVE HER! SAVE HER!
Sarah Jane 'BE QUIET! You don't want Christine to save her!'
(But unfortunately for Sarah Jane the crowd are shouting to loud for her to be heard. Haa haa! The crowd seem to like this rather catchychant so start shouting it even louder.)
Crowd 'SAVE HER! SAVE HER! SAVE HER!'
(Mary Sue starts to cheer up at hearing the chanting but then Sarah Jane gets an evil plan.)
Sarah Jane (Looking sinister) 'How about 'Grave her' instead?'
Crowd 'GRAVE HER! GRAVE HER! GRAVE HER!'
(Sarah Jane smiles smugly at Mary Sue who shakes her fist at her. Christine looks at Sarah Jane and then to Mary Sue, clearly confused. Suddenly the door of the dungeons enter and Raoul bursts in the room.)
Raoul 'Don't do it Christine! You can't kill Mary Sue…I love her!'
(Christine quickly starts towards the leaver to go and pull it.)
Mary Sue 'You idiot Raoul! Only a stupid fop like you would do something as idiotic as that. Now I'm going to die.'
(Christine stops what she's doing to yell at Mary Sue.)
Christine 'Don't you dare insult my precious Raoul…you…you wench!'
(Erik a.k.a. the Phantom of the Opera bursts in through the dungeon door.)
Erik 'Don't you dare insult my precious Mary Sue…you…you hag!'
Raoul 'Don't you dare insult my precious Christine…you…you monster!'
Mary Sue 'Don't you dare insult my precious Erik…you…you fop!'
Christine 'Don't you dare insult my precious Raoul-'
Sarah Jane 'Now don't start that again!'
Crowd 'START THAT AGAIN! START THAT AGAIN! START THAT AGAIN!
(Sarah Jane groans, shaking her head at the stupidity of the crowd.)
Christine (Talking to Raoul) 'Do you really mean that? You think I'm precious?'
Raoul 'Of course I do, my love! How could I ever love Mary Sue now that she's called me a fop! Quickly, pull the leaver!'
Erik, Mary Sue and Christine shout 'WHAT?'
Raoul (Talking to Christine) 'You wouldn't let her get away with calling me a fop, would you?'
Sarah Jane 'Yes! I agree with him! Pull the leaver!'
Crowd 'PULL THE LEAVER! PULL THE LEAVER! PULL THE LEAVER!'
Erik 'No Christine! Don't do it!'
(Christine moves her hand and puts it on the leaver but then the crowd shouts….)
What should happen next? As the reviewers, I will let you decide what should happen. Can you really let poor Mary Sue plunge to her death to be burnt alive? Could you live with that on you conscience? Review, saying whether or not you think Mary Sue should be kept alive. The choice is YOURS.
