Ok heres another Beyblade Fic. I know I haven't updated the other one yet, but ya know I felt like making a new one. Dun ASK::Cries in corner: oh well anyways here it is!
DISCLAMIER- I DO NOT OWN BEYBLADE, only my OC... You will find out her name later, all of my OC's are MINE! DO NOT TAKE!
Ok anyways on with the story! YAY!
Oh yeah some of the chapters have songs in them.
Itallics are song parts... yeah just to let you know
Oh yes this song is by Avril Lavinge, Nobody's Home, I thought this matched the story very well! -NoT MINE
I took the liberty and have (after having more school ((which means learning)) I have learned more writing stuff... THUS! This thing has been re-edited!)- well I'm going to try and re-edit EVERYTHING (like.. everything, everything..). Wish me luck! Some things may change.
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Chapter 1 - Broken -
I
couldn't tell you
Why she felt that way
She felt it everyday
I
couldn't help her
I just watched her make
The same mistakes
again
Lilith trudged along the snow. She walked to where she thought she needed to be. Nowhere. Her mind was blank and her bright purple eyes were now dull, and lifeless. She wore clothing where if one had looked upon her, they would instantly shun her away.
What's
wrong, what's wrong now
Too many, too many problems
Don't know
where she belongs
Where she belongs
Lilith kept walking, until she ended up in a park. She looked at the sky, it was getting dark. She needed to find a place to sleep. She looked around, and found a bench she could possibly sleep on. It was cold, but she had gotten used it even if the cold winds would prick at her. She laid down on the bench, and cried. Every night she would cry herself asleep and let everything out besides she didn't care if anybody saw her like this. Even if they did see her they would just take a glance at her then keep walking.
After she cried her eyes out she fell asleep with the gentle snow falling upon her.
Kai couldn't sleep that night. He was thinking about the tournament that was going to be held in Russia. His team the 'Blitzkreig Boys' were sure to win, but he couldn't sleep. He thought about the teams that were going to be there. They were going to be several, and most he had heard about, but one team in particular was stuck in his mind. The 'Midnight Catz'. He had never even heard of them before. Where they that good that they could compete in the Russian Beyblade Tournament?
Kai got out of bed, dressed up, and grabbed his beyblade, then left pocketing his precious beyblade. He started to walk the path towards the park where he would always go to when he was troubled. He thought to himself over and over what the Midnight Catz where like. Soon Kai appeared at the park. What he saw was a girl about his age on a bench.
She
wants to go home but nobody's home
That's where she lies broken
inside
No place to go, no place to go
To dry her eyes broken
inside
"How pathetic," The cold hearted Kai went up to the girl and looked at her face. Her purple hair fanned out all over the bench. He looked at her with disgust, and started his way back home. He didn't care about the girl, it was her fault for being outside.
Open
your eyes (open your eyes)
And look outside
Find the reason why
(why)
You've been rejected (you've been rejected)
And now you
can't find
What you left behind
Lilith opened her eyes slowly. The sun did not shine, for it was hidden because of the grey clouds that covered its shining soul. She looked around, nothing really changed. No people. She was thankful that there were no people. She hated them here. Her only friends where the same as her. Lonely, sad, and cold. Finally she remembered she had to meet with her friends and get ready for the tournament that was held today.
"Damn..." Lilith swore at herself. She was walking toward where she would meet her friends, but her energy held her back. She was getting weaker and weaker by the second. She really hadn't had decent food for a couple days, and poor nutrition could of been the problem. Her vision started to become a blur as her knee's felt week. She lost her balance and fell onto the snow. She tried to get up, but her body wouldn't move.
Be
strong, be strong now
Too many too many problems
Don't know
where she belongs, where she belongs
"Now how am I going to make it?" Lilith smiled.
"She can take care of herself," Lilith's eyes then shut closed. She was left laying the the snow. The people just passed by her, like nothing happened.
She
wants to go home but nobody's home
That's where she lies broken
inside
No place to go, no place to go
To dry her eyes broken
inside
"Where is she?" A girl with shoulder long blonde hair paced around the ground, walking back and forth. Her partner was suppose to be with her five minutes ago. She wondered if she was o.k, because it wasn't like her to be late and the tournament was beginning in only 30 minutes.
"Ah, that girl is always in trouble," with a pout she ran off to find her friend.
Lilith opened her eyes. She forced herself to get up, but her legs where weak she could only be at her knees. Lilith looked at the town's clock and saw it was 3:40PM. She only had 20 more minutes till it began, but she couldn't get up. She was glued to the ground. Lilith sighed. There was no way she was going to make it on time, unless her friend had magically found her here.
"Lilith!" A voice called out to her.
Lilith looked around. She saw a flash of blond, then before she knew it she was tackled to the ground by her friend.
"Tai, you found me!" Lilith looked at her friend. Tai's emerald green eyes were bright as ever, unlike Lilith. In reality, Lilith really envied Tai's eyes.
Her
feeling she hides
Her dream she can't find
She's losing her
mind
She's fallen behind
She can't find her place
She's
losing her faith
She's fallen from grace
She's all over the
place (yeah!)
"I need some help Tai," Lilith said.
Tai raised a eyebrow.
"I need you to help me get to the tournament, I... can't walk," Lilith grinned sheepishly and tried to get up, but no avail. Tai walked over to her and grabbed one arm and pulled her up to her feet. Lilith tried to balance, but instead she mostly put all her weight on Tai. They started walking up towards the stadium with only 10 minutes left before the tournament started.
"Your getting really heavy!" Tai whined. She took Lilith and shifted her to her other side.
"Maybe if you worked out more you could carry me," Lilith frowned. She was putting a lot into her friend. Carrying her all the way to the stadium. After a long silence they saw the shape of a building appear in front of there eyes.
"There it is!" Tai grinned. It was hard for her to loose all the energy she had. After seeing the building, she sped up a little, walking much more faster than before.
She
wants to go home but nobody's home
That's where she lies broken
inside
No place to go, no place to go
To dry her eyes broken
inside
Lilith kept her head down and watched the snow trace where they stepped. Beyblading really helped her relive some stress and anger, but she played it because Tai wanted to try it. So they made their beyblades from scraps of metal and parts they found in the junkyard. They even had bit beasts within their possession. They had found them on the shore of the beach and snatched them away as soon as they saw them. Lilith used to think that it was just some kind of foreign coin or something, but then she realized that it was a bit beast. She knew it was one because of the kids talking about how "cool" and "powerful" they were.
"We made it!" Tai cried in joy. The registration area was still open. Tai dragged Lilith to the registration table.
"We are the Midnight Catz, ready to register!" Tai screamed at the man. The man flinched as he heard Tai's voice.
"U-u-h I u-m-m need your names," The man stuttered slowly, still a little surprised by Tai.
"Lilith and Tai," Lilith didn't want to scare the man anymore, so she took Tai's place for the moment.
"Thank you very much! You may go down to the main hall now," The man sighed happily and pointed down the hall.
"Hey Lilith, you think you can walk now?" Tai asked.
"Yeah I think so, lemmie try," Lilith got off of Tai. She wobbled a bit then took her balance again. She walked a few slow and careful steps without falling, then gave a thumbs up to Tai. They walked down to where the entrance ceremony was being held. Lilith hated these. They were always taking pictures, pictures of what her and Tai was were wearing. Torn up shirts and pants. They were going to beyblade like hobos. Tai really didn't seem to mind the attention though.
She's
lost inside, lost inside (oh, oh uhh)
She's lost inside, lost
inside (oh, oh uhh) oooh
When they opened the door, there were bladers looking at them like they were some freaks. Lilith hated how they stared at her. Like she was a sideshow freak. Tai didn't seem to care. She was too happy at the moment to hate others.
'Have I seen her before?' Kai looked at the girl with purple hair. He stared at her with his crimson eyes.
"Hey Kai, you think one of them is cute?" Tala asked.
"No, I'm trying to think where I've seen that girl before, now shut the hell up Tala," Kai gave a glare to the red head, then started thinking again.
"Jeez, no need to bite my head off," Tala left Kai's side and started to wander off.
'I've seen her at... at... at the park! How stupid am I.' Kai mentally smacked himself.
'Why was she here, and how was she qualified to get in? Is she strong?' Questions raced inside his head until the speakers blared out a familiar voice.
"Everybody who is qualified for this years Russian Tag Team Tournament, please come to the battle arena immediately!" The speakers then stopped. Everybody was starting to gather their beyblades and headed off towards the battle arena.
"Welcome lady's and gentlemen to Russia's first tag team tournament!" DJ Jazzman spoke into his microphone making the fan's scream and cheer for the tournament.
"This year we have some very new teams that you will all find out very soon!" DJ Jazzman said. The crowd went wild. They were all ready to see some action today.
"Now heres Mr. Dickenson!" DZ Jazzman handed off the mic. to Mr. Dickenson.
"I would like to say good luck and play fair in this entire tournament! Same rules do apply, and last but not least, lets see some action!" Mr. Dickenson smiled, this year will be fun to watch. After he handed the microphone. back to DJ Jazzman.
"Now for our first battle it will be decided by the computer! Remember each draw is random," The computer started to choose the first round that would be played.
"It will be G- Revolution VRS. Midnight Catz!"
Here was Kai's chance to see how good they really were.
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was it good? was it bad? please tell me so please review heh thanks!
And
yes this is a tag team match!
Also Tai is pronounced Tay, Tey they
both sound the same either one is fine, but thats just how it sounds
like! and Lilith is pronounced Lil-ith yeah just like how it is
spelled. Its just a FYI
Thank you!
YES! This has been re-edited by me. I've got spell check now, and other stuff... Oh joy... Yes, It may not be the greatest of all, but I tried. I'm not fond re-editing, but I do it anyways...
