Chapter 1:Ranma...the homewrecker!

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As the crescent moon appeared its head over the celestial meadow, the newly formed dew sparkled in the moonlight. Unfortunatly Tsukasa couldn't admire the scene due to his infatuation with Shampoo. Her indigo hair shimmered in his memory as he sat under his favorite willow tree. "Oh Shampoo...Why do you haunt my soul so..." he murmered to himself. "Shampoo how could I have your hand in marriage?...but first how can I get you to notice me?..." he pondered for a full several minutes on the notion. "If only you weren't Ranma's girl." The mere thought made his blood boil. The thought of Ranma's hands all over Shampoo's exquisite body and his lips on hers made him twitch in anger.

He pulled himself up with the help of his mystical staff. The eighteen year old slowly walked down the hill only to see a horrifying sight. Ranma and Shampoo kissing...his hand lowering to her thigh then to her ass. His anger was unbearable, he wanted to run down and stangle Ranma's neck,but his conscience held him back. He didn't want to make a scene in front of Shampoo. Tsukasa run behind a near by thorn bush...(he avoided the thorns.)

"Shampoo wants kids with you, Ranma." Shampoo's heart was set on a bright future with Ranma, but Ranma answered..."No offense but you arent the child-bearing type." He took in a breath then continued " You are more of a naive type of girl who can't take care of children." "You no want kids with Shampoo?" she looked hurt and felt as if she had taken a blow to the face."You see..." Ranma began, "personally I don't care for having children...they take out to much energy and money to have." Shampoo's eyes began to water in the edges and she let out a hurtfulwail..."Aiyyyyyyyyya! You hurt me feelings!" " You were just in the way of me meeting a real woman," Ranma smirked smuggly. "so you and I can just say good-bye...see ya or not,"he said with an incredibly jerky smile as he turned his back to Shampoo. She briskly ran and haulted Ranma and replied to his comment by slapping him across the face.

Thank you for reading this and the next champer will be called Comfort