Hey all, hope your having a good time; I know I am, so I decided to personally reply to all reviews in the order that they were received. Since I did not do this for reviews for previous chapters, I will do so now:

Chapter one reviews:

-Star-Kitten-The-Rebel-Cyborg:

-That is good! clapclapclap Very good! Please carry on!

Thanks person with the long name, I shall indeed carry on!

-TehRindesayu (Anonymous):

-Oh! Continue!

Trust me, I will...thanks!

-Delta X

-Good opening, but this is going to be a crossover of this fandom and what other ones? I think that Mega Man X, Final Fantasy 7 or 10, and Inuyasha would be good places to start off. This has a potential, so keep it up!

There might be a crossover, not sure yet though, (making it up as I go along) but I have one or two in mind. As for what they are, well...that would be telling, now wouldn't it? ;)

-CoyoteLoon

- Creepy opening, kind of sad too, with the discovery of poor Mrs. W. Let's see where you go from here.
-Don't be afraid to use more description in your narrative, especially when you're setting up a scene with a new location. The more senses you describe (what do you see, hear, feel, smell, taste?) the more vivid your story will be.
Keep going!

Thanks for the advice; I'll try my best. And yea, I was going for the "uber-creepy" opening.

Chapter two reviews:

None...

...I feel so alone...

Chapter three reviews:

-CoyoteLoon:

-Yikes, I feel like a need to leave a review to thank you for liking my review. (Uh, did that make sense?)
-The classic "It was all a dream" scenario (or WAS it? dun dun DUN...) Kudos on setting up some plot and foreshadowing! Now we're left to wonder how Jenny could "disappear" and not disappear at the same time ... and what's up with the bug robot?
I'm glad you're enjoying your writing! I wouldn't do it if it wasn't any fun. And you will get better the more you do it. So DO IT! Go on! Write! Go!

Yea, I always liked that "It was all a dream" thing, and that "dun dun DUN..." was more well placed than you know. As to the disappear issue, that will be revealed soon enough. The bug robot is a bit of a plot point, and that's all I'm going to tell you. I find that I love writing this thing, and I believe it will get better, and: YES SIR! WRITING SIR!

-La miseria y la muerte

-"I cannot say I am as good as some of the other MLAATR fic writers, like CoyoteLoon, (duh!) Queenbean3, La miseria y la muerte, or those others,! " Me? XD

-Okay, well, very good job on this fic! I noticed this is your first story. Keep going at it! I just love seeing the n00bs... I know so many that started out with terrible fics, and now they're amazing authors/authoresses!

Yes, you! XD

And thanks for the encouragement, it helps a lot.

Thanks for all your reviews, and it was actually fun and helpful to answer them coughwordcountcough

Anyway, on with the fic, and send in those reviews, they rock:

Jenny decided to make some light conversation with brad: "so, anything new going on that I missed on the bus?"

Brad smiled and said "well you know, just the usual gossip, the mean stuff some jerks say about you seems to have almost disappeared, except for the crust cousins rumors." He said with a frown.

Jenny was not truly upset by this, it was not much more then she expected, they had never truly excepted her, and the fact that only THEY were beating on her was great news.

"Anything else?" she asked, leaning back in her seat.

Brad thought for a second, looking deep in thought, it did not suit him. "Well, there is all the nightmares everyone has been having..."

...

Meanwhile...

(Don't you just HATE me?)

Mrs. Wakeman looked over the data, but it still made no sense.

At last, and after quite a lot of frustration, she threw her hands up in the air in exasperation and shouted "ARGH! This is insane! Just when I think I have something, I prove myself wrong! It's like someone doesn't WANT me to find anything out." The thought crossed her mind briefly, but she brushed it off as a sign of fatigue.

"Oh, all this stress cannot be good for my heart...best I take a breather" groaning, she sat up and headed into the living room. She flopped down on the couch, grabbed the remote, and flipped the TV on. Seeing that the TV was on something called "MTV 2" she flipped over to the science channel, and started to relax.

Had she stayed at the monitor for a moment longer, she may have spotted the screen flickering, displaying a short message, than changing back, with no sign of any change.

The message said quite simply:

ALL WILL SUFFER

...

In a distant, dark land, there was a dark city, and within that, was a still darker abomination of endless metal.

A figure entered a hidden chamber, the walls appeared to be made of machinery, and the sound of mechanics' was everywhere. She knelt before a moving and twisting shape.

#Report# it stated, in a voice that would make any normal person cringe, it sounded like metal plates being twisted, and it just might have been that.

The figure did not so much as flinch; she was use to her master's appearance and voice.

"The last of the rebellion has been crushed, it's remains scattered across the globe, off to lick their wounds"

#Good, and what of our "prisoners"#

"They are all performing normally, just as we hoped. The interface is optimal"

#Excellent, and our little project?#

"It will be done soon, the tests have already begun"

#Good, you may go now#

"Yes master, as you said earlier, all will suffer!" Jenny stated

To be continued...

dun dun DUN!

Hope you like it so far, we got a ways to go, but it's looking good so far

So send in those reviews, or I'll feed you pets to the mysterious villain...I'll do it too, just you wait!

One more thing: CoyoteLoon AND La miseria y la muerte reviewed my fic! Insert hi-pitched girly scream here passes out