Well, here we go, sorry about the wait, but I can't keep up my "one update every two days" philosophy, and I had computer trouble.

Anyway, on to reviews!:

Chapter five reviews:

-La miseria y la muerte

-Good chapter. Nice job with the suspense and drama. I like.

Thanks, that was my goal, suspense and drama.

Chapter six reviews:

-CoyoteLoon

-Aha! I was sort of thinking along the lines of "parallel universe", so I wasn't too far off, here. Your story has definitely taken a turn to the dark side. So Jenny's an evil traitor in another existence, hmm? And is the mysterious figure a version of Vexus, or someone else?

-Good chapter, although there were a few grammar mistakes that made some parts of it difficult to read: "She noted that her wrists to a wall of metal strapped her", for example, should probably be "she noted that her wrists were strapped to a wall of metal." I always proofread my chapters before posting them, and I still let typos slip by. But with a little more polish, your dialog and your writing will continue to improve.

Thanks, yea, it does have a dark aspect to it, doesn't it? Oh, and don't jump to conclusions about Jenny, you can never tell with these things. And Vexus might be the figure, but I'm not gonna tell. Thanks for the info about my mistake; I guess that is what I get for uploading at 11:30pm. ;

-SailorCardKnight

-I LOVE stories where a parallel universe crosses over and the hero/main character meets their evil self. You must update soon...why you ask? Because I'm sitting at the edge of my seat wanting to see what happens next! That's why!

-(And keep writing!! you will get better at it! That's what happened to me.)

Thanks for all that, parallel universe crosses are fun, makes you think things like "what if this had happened, or that" I will keep writing, as long as you all keep reading. So now I have updated, and it was actually the two most recent reviews that encouraged me to do it!

I will keep writing, as long as you all keep reading.

PS: the only way to be sure if you do is if you review!

Brad was going ballistic, Jenny was in deep, and he did not know how she was going to get out of this one.

Most people were watching the scene with ether concern or interest. Although some people, like the crust cousins, seemed like they would be calmly munching popcorn if they had any.

He was not sure what he could do, but Brad decided to get involved anyway.

Slipping out of the bus, which was easy considering how many people were tensely watching the action outside, he slowly moved toward the whole bizarre scene before him. Brad could not help but whispered to himself "What the hell am I doing?"

Meanwhile...

#BLAST IT!# the creature bellowed #she still fights against me#

It was, of course, referring to Mrs. Wakeman, who although her thoughts were open to it, her free will was untouchable. Despite all the brain interfacing, she had not broken.

#I HATE it when they fight like this, now I have to get her to willingly help me# he growled

XJ-9 stepped into the room, and looked over the whole situation. The automatic door clamping shut behind her.

She looked over the scene of her frustrated master, smirked, and said, "Leave that to me my lord, I have an idea"

Mrs. Wakeman, barley contuse, groaned; now afraid of what was next.

Meanwhile...

"I'm telling you, I'm not who you think!" Jenny stated, now starting to panic. Kneeling on the ground with a gun to her head was not helping.

Silver Shell was apparently deep in thought, trying to make a very hard call.

Just then Jenny herd a whisper full of malice "I'm gonna enjoy killing you"

It was XJ-6

"Why don't you trust me" Jenny said desperately her

"Because I did before, it cost me everything"

The Silver Shell stood forward, apparently having made up his mind.

XJ-6, never taking her eyes off Jenny, asked "well, can I kill her now?"

"I've reached a decision, I think that-"

Just then the mysterious boy gasped. He was pointing at a figure approaching them. He seemed to have been going for stealth, but froze as he was spotted.

Silver Shell spun around to look, but paused as the figure came into view. "That's only a kid, what's wrong? What's going on here?" he asked, then his eyes widened as realization came to him.

Jenny looked, and saw Brad. She was worried about his safety, but much more confused as to why the sight of him was so strange. Brad was equally confused, wondering what the big deal was.

The mysterious boy looked like he was seeing a ghost, he was pail and seemed unable to speak. Finally, he took his helmet off and asked "...Bro?"

It was Tuck...

A fifteen-year-old Tuck...

Meanwhile...

Fifteen...

Fifteen helpless people killed in front of her...

Mrs. Wakeman could barley stand it. This worlds version of XJ-9 had, fifteen times, brought a miserable person, tired and hurt, filthy and dressed in rags. She always showed them Mrs. Wakeman, and then said, "here she is, and this is the reason you must die, because SHE will not help us."

Some had looked angry, some looked scared, some just looked like they did not care, but once the murdering started, they knew nothing but pain.

Not a single one tried to escape, they knew better than to try, but they all tried once the pain began. It did no good.

The manner of their execution was beyond description, but put simply, you might just have nightmares for the rest of your life if you saw it once. Mrs. Wakeman had seen it fifteen times.

One of the worst parts was seeing XJ-9 commit these acts, and almost seem to enjoy it. She bore a look one might have if they were trimming the hedges. The shadowy figure watched, not even making a sound, the pipes and wires that trailed off it moving softly, like a gentle breeze nudged them.

She could stand no more.

As XJ-9 began her sixteenth "this is the reason you must die" speech, this time to a mear child of 9, Mrs. Wakeman cried out "enough!"

She found that she had been sobbing, but through all the horror she had not noticed. "I'll...I'll help you, just promise you will stop this madness."

Inside she cursed herself, she knew far more might die if she helped them, but she could not stand any more of this.

#Excellent# the creature said, seemingly pleased #XJ-9, take this filthy slave back to the lab, I will be working with the doctor.#

As XJ-9 lead the relived looking slave out, the figure called back to her: #and send someone to clean up this mess# referring to the human organs and body parts strewn about.

Meanwhile...

"TUCK?!?" both Jenny and Brad said at once.

Jenny and Brad looked at Tuck, Tuck looked at Brad, XJ-6 looked at Jenny, the kids in the bus looked at the strange scene before them, and the Silver Shell looked just plain confused.

After glancing from person to person, Silver Shell threw his arms up in exasperation and shouted "DID I MISS SOMETHING HERE?"

Tuck paused, and said "but...Brad, your suppose to be dead!"

To be continued...

Wow, we are switching between a slightly dark scene, and an uber-dark scene.

Well, I've successfully kept you all in the dark about the villains master plan, or even his identity.

Well, Woe is Me has managed to keep her mouth shut...I'm scared. That's like a sign of the apocalypse, or something. Oo;

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