FanFiction-Games-Legacy of Kain Defiance

This is my first ff about LOK so plz don't flame. Thnx in advance

Raziel was once a highly ranked officer in the all-powerful army of Vampire lord Kain. But with time Raziel began to gain new abilities that corrupted Kain with jealousy. He captured Raziel and cast him into the pit of Hell. (Well, not actually Hell but a place of so-called-eternal-pain) (As all you players know he wakes up from this to start a hunt for the man who deceived him.) During this time in his painful slumber, he sees a vision, or dream that would point him in the direction of what to do when he awakens.

While he was dead to the world, Raziel thought long and hard about what to do. But not many goods things come to a man when he is confided to himself. His ponderings had become an adventure he couldn't put away…

In a fortified village named Trevalyn, humans had been fighting Kain's army for quite some time now. Raziel journeys to Gaia, the capital (he is seen as a human with a cloak over his mouth and wing-bearing but being covered up by a cape) but has to pass through the town. Kain is relentless when it comes to opposing forces. But Raziel knows of this already, so when he approaches the town he realizes that a-n-y-t-h-i-n-g could happen.

Just then a man with a scimitar and bandanna approaches him.

"Halt this town under lock-down to all those who have no wish to fight the Hellians (Kain's army's name)

Raziel found this information perfect.

"But that is why I come to this beat down settlement. I wish to join your struggle."

"Really?"

"I lie to you not."

"Then to prove yourself, you will need to do something to show your not one of them."

"What might that be" Raziel asked sounding serious.

Cinder, which is the man's name replied, "What would you do if I pulled out this…!"

And at the pulled out an ankh that was lined with a precious metal"

"Woh, don't pull anything sir" Raziel exclaimed sounding taken by surprised, but kind of trying to sound comical since he had no idea what Cinder was doing.

"Good your not one of them…unless you can control your anger"

"Explain this to me"

"The ankh is the symbol of a race of demons that broke away from Kain's army. It enrages the demons of Kain's kind. And the metal has an allergic reaction to the demons that enrage them even more. But with that much rage they often will begin acting on instincts. And that would mean going back to there primitive and barbaric ways.

Raziel finds this a hefty piece of info and replies "Well, knowing that I'll gladly, no willingly put myself into the fray against them then."

"Excellent, I know just how to prove your worth."