I rented Star Wars: Attack of the Clones book adaptation from the library a few weeks back and wrote another poem inspired from it. This one is more from Padme's point of view. I don't think this one is as good as "Taking Over Me" but I'd really like a second opinion. So, please give one! Read and Review please!
Not Meant For Me
It scares me
Knowing how close you linger
Right there beside me
Lost in my thoughts for a decade
How you've grown
A rare subtleties in our life
My place is with you
In a child's dream
We've floated above Naboo
Reading the stars
It's beauty is simple
Expressing a known feeling
He is childish
Which brings me such joy
He is heartache
Which kills me slowly
The tiny look in his eyes
Shows a world I have missed
To be grown and still want
The pleasure is forbidden
Yet, what happened on the balcony comes to me
One touch and I'm frozen in your essence
So lean and powerful
It tempts me more than you can imagine
You protect me
Yet you love me
I'm distraught
For this is not meant for me
Not exactly my best but I tried and put much thought into it. So please REVIEW NOW! ;)
