I decided to rewrite the Angel with a frozen heart, because I found the original story, horrible. So I changed a few things and hopefully got all the spelling and grammar mistakes out. Man I hate being Dutch. I also decided to put a few oc in it. If you have any ideas for the oc or you think something in the story that has to be changed email me. Because I want my fanfic to be good.
1 Svetlana.
It's night. The only light there is, are the stars and the full moon in the Russian forest. Wolves where howling to the moon, making the night even more mysterious. In a tree was a young girl, watching the night sky with emotionless ice blue eyes. Enjoying the peace. The wind was playing with her long flaming red hair. Below the tree where a herd of wolves. It was beautiful to see. Not for away a group of man where walking through the forest, looking for something. The girl heard the man approach. The wolves tensed up, to the approaching man, aware of the danger they could bring. The man came closer to the girl and the herd of wolves. The girl looked at them with emotionless eyes, that where as cold as the Russian winters. The man where amazed of the view before them. When one of the man, a bald man, took a step forward, causing the girl to tense up. She grabbed her black with crimson blade and launched the blade to the man. Sending it to attack. The wolves ran away, further into the forest, to a save place. The girl had knocked three man out.
"Relax we don't want to hurt you", said the bald man in a friendly tone.
The girl just ignored the man, not believing a word he said. To many people had tried to hurt her, including the ones she loved. The girl let her blade attack the man again, knocking another three man out.
"Please believe me. We don't wanna hurt you, we just wanna help you. That's all", the bald man said trying to convince the girl to stop attacking them.
"Why should I believe you", she said with a ice cold voice.
The bald man couldn't believe how such a young girl could be so cold. It reminded him of the blue-haired boy that was the captain of his blade team.
"Where are you parents?"
"I don't have parents. Now leave before I kill you", the girl said with venom dripping from every word.
He was shocked to hear she lived here in the forest. He shouldn't leave her here, in the cold.
"I want you to come with me and be part of the blade team I own", the man said suddenly.
The girl stared at him for a moment, thinking about what he said. Should she do it. It meant she should blade in competitions.
"Fine", the girl snapped.
The man smiled. He was planning to make her live better and hopefully she would stop being so cold and emotionless, but then again if he looked at the team captain. he wouldn't be so sure about it.
(With the Bladebreaker)
The Bladebreakers where walking to the park, on there way to mr. Dickenson. Max was being hyper, like always. Tyson was complaining that he didn't had breakfast, causing Ray and Hilary to say that he had at 50 pancakes. Kenny was talking to Dizzy And Kai was walking behind ignoring them completely. When suddenly a white wolf jump on Tyson, liking his face.
"Get this thing of me" yelled Tyson, causing the rest to laugh, except for Kai, who just smirked.
"Shiro here", said a emotionless voice.
The wolf walked to a girl with long flaming red hair and ice blue eyes, that reminded them of a red-headed friend. She was wearing a black sorts with a black halter top on top, black high-heeled boots and fingerless gloves. She caressed the wolf on his head and walked away.
"Aren't you going to apologies to me for your wolf", asked Tyson, it was more of a statement.
"No", the girl replied.
"Why you", yelled Tyson who was losing his temper.
"You could keep your temper down, wouldn't want to hurt you", said the girl mocking.
Now Tyson lost his temper (what he always fast does).
"I want a bey-match. I'll show you then. If you blade at all", said Tyson, holding his Dragoon blade.
"Bring it on, airhead", the girl said with a ice cold tone in her voice, while showing her black and crimson blade.
The bit-chip was completely black. Tyson and the girl walked to the bey-dish.
"Here we go again", Ray said sighing.
Max went to the dish to do the count-down. "3… 2… 1Let it rip" he yelled.
Kenny sat down looking at the match, Hilary and Ray followed his example. The two blades landed perfect in the dish.
"Go Dragoon. Storm attack", Tyson yelled.
/So Tyson wants to finish this match fast/ thought Kai with a smirk.
The white blade attacked the blade of the girl. The blade disappeared before Dragoon could hit it and reappeared behind him, knocking Dragoon out of the dish in a fast blow that nobody saw coming.
"I lost", wispered Tyson in disbelieve.
The girl turned around to walk away, but Kai stopped her.
"What's your name", he asked.
"That's none of your business", the girl replied, walking away.
Kai turned around to look at Tyson who was complaining he lost.
"I can't believe I lost. She must have cheated. She didn't even own a bit-beast", Tyson complained.
Everone sighed.
"Well exactly her blade had very much power. Her blade has hit Dragoon 40 times in a second", Kenny said.
Everyone looked shocked.
"A blade without a bit-beast can't do that", came Dizzy's voice.
"Uh you guys. Don't we have a appointment with mr. Dickenson", Max asked suddenly.
Everyone looked at Max and then started to run to mr. Dickenson.
(With mr. Dickenson)
The Bladebreakers walked into mr. Dickenson's office.
"Sorry mr. D that weare late. What did you wanted to discuss with us", said/ asked Tyson.
"It's okay, Tyson. I wanted to discuss with you that I have decited to put a new member on the team", mr. Dickenson said.
The Bladebreakers looked at mr. Dickenson.
"Cool a new member", Max said hyper.
"She's from Russia… ", mr. Dickenson was interrupted by Tyson.
"Whoa A girl. Girls can't blade", Tyson said.
"Tyson did you forget a girl defeated you this morning", Hilary said irritated.
Mr. Dickenson coughed to get there attention.
"Like I said she's from Russia and she's a excellent blader, maybe even more powerful then some of you. Her name's Svetlana", mr. Dickenson said.
"Yeah right", Tyson said.
"Yeah it's right that I'm stronger then you", said a ice cold voice.
Everybody looked at the door opening where the girl from the morning was standing.
"You", yelled a shocked Tyson.
"Yes me, airhead", Svetlana snapped.
Hilary jumped up and walked to Svetlana.
"Hi I'm Hilary and that are Ray, Max, Tyson and Kai", Hilary said cheery.
/God cheery people/ Svetlana thought.
/giggle/ You where ones like that, remember/ a male voice said inside her head.
/No, don't remember/
"Svetlana are you coming", asked Max.
The Bladebreakers had decited to take Svetlana to the dojo for training.
That's all for now.
