Ok form the reviews err… review I got from How Do I Love Thee. I'm taking a wild guess that not very many people didn't like the one shot so I'm going to try once more. Well I hope you guys like it it's really just to funky poems that I stole form my sisters love letters man I'm mean (laughs evilly)
Ok well hear it is.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything but this hot Beatles Shirt O Ya Beatles rock
My First Love
We used to talk all the time. You were the reason I would rush home from school everyday. , You cheer me up when I say I'm sad and it makes me cry when you say the same. Every day when I don't talk to you make's me sad. You're the best friend I could ever ask for.
You penetrated my soul,
like a fresh ocean breeze,
filled me up to overflowing,
a torrent of devotion.
Now we barley talk and never see each other, It's been so long and it makes me cry .I get excited to think I'll see you when I go out, But I never get to see you. Your like a faded dream and it kills me to know that. Thinking your mad at me for some unknown or dumb reason. Hearing that you hate me for no reason for the 3rd time this week. Knowing that I hurt you kills me.
There was no preparing,
the clouds began to swell,
there was no mistaking,
this hurricane of turmoil.
You promised me you would never hurt me and I'm beginning to think that you were lying. When our song comes on I think of you and it kills me. You are the meaning of my existence, and now its time to tell you. Why is it that when we are apart it feels like we haven't talked in years.
The storm isn't over,
Denying this would be wrong,
I am deserted, bare and desolate,
My first love was swept away.
Your my best friend and always will b no matter what people say or what happens. But I want more do you?
OK well there is the first half of this BTW if you didn't know that was from Kagome's point of view on her feelings for Inuyasha can you guess who's next?
Review I love to hear what you guys think of my ideas
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