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Before I knew you : Chapter one
Help is on its way, Prince Syaoran
Greenleaf Blossom
"Prince Li, are you alright?" Princess Ling- Ling asked in that same voice. "Shui- Ling?" Syaoran whispered and looked up at her again. Ling- Ling had ocean blue hair and the bluest eyes, she was pretty attractive, but her appearance did not match Shui- Ling's at all. "Yo bro. are you alright? You seem dazed." Prince Ho commented as he walked up to his brother with worried eyes. "Huh? Oh no, I am alright, don't worry." Syaoran said while looking at Shui- ling again. What a weird girl, she is so much like Shui- Ling, and look at her sister, Tomoyo, what kind of a name is that? She even has the weirdest color of hair, raven with hints of purple. Kind of like Shui- Ling's but hers was just raven. "And here is my other son, Prince Ho." King Xiao Lei said and startled Syaoran out of his thoughts. "Pleased to meet you, fair ladies!" Prince Ho bowed deeply which caused a light giggle to come out from Ling- Ling' s mouth. He stood up and kissed them both lightly on the hand. Syaoran, which was just standing next to his brother, gagged mentally. sigh Its just like Ho to fall hopelessly for women! "Ah! I have a great idea, Ho and Syaoran why don't you show the 2 princesses around the kingdom?" King Li asked and Queen Yelan nodded her head slightly. "Yes father, I will be delighted!" Prince Ho answered and bowed in respect. Ling- Ling and Tomoyo walked ahead and Ho dragged Syaoran by the arm. "Brother, lighten up, you are about to be married to a princess! It is time to forget the past!" Ho said and Syaoran rolled his eyes. "Ho, listen, sure Ling- Ling might be pretty, but I barely know her and I am definetly in no hurry to get married to some girl." Syaoran huffed in a firm tone and Ho shrugged. "You should be happy, for true love will come through."Ho recites and walked off the show the princesses around. I cant believe how Ho can fall for every girl he sees. Syaoran thinks as he watches Ho laugh along with the two princesses. Syaoran sighed and walked up quickly to pull Ho away from the mess. "Hello Prince Li, " and sing song voice greets him "it looks like you aren't happy to be marrying my sister." Syaoran slows down and looks at Princess Tomoyo. The silent girl had purpulish raven hair her eyes were a somewhat amethyst color and she seemed like a mysterious soul. Hmph, I'll be that my
dorky prince cousin of mine would like her. "Why do you say that Princess" and he pretends to smile. "Prince, in your eyes you show no sign of happiness at all. Most people would have fallen for my sister the moment they looked at her. Perhaps, you have found true love elsewhere?" Tomoyo questions with a slight smile. "Why do you think I would tell you my feelings?" Syaoran says with an annoyed look on his face. Seeing that Prince Syaoran would not share anymore, Tomoyo did not stop Syaoran from walking ahead. "Or maybe, it is because of a girl called Shui- Ling?" Tomoyo questions one more time while twirling a strand of raven hair around her finger. Syaoran stopped and twirled around to look at her with a menacing tone. 'How do you know Shui- Ling?" he hushes. "Ah, so it is my dear cousin that still lingers in your heart, how sweet!" Tomoyo says with hearts in her eyes. "Huh? Dear cousin, don't tell me that you are related to her!" Syaoran spat out as if he had just eaten a bug. "Prince Li, I understand about what happened between you and my cousin. I know that she broke your heart , why do you still care about her?" Tomoyo says with a curious look in her eyes. "You think I care about her? Then you thought wrong, I will kill anyone that even mentions her here in the castle of Amiar. You are luck princess, that I have spared your life today." Syaoran threatens with a deadly glare from his brown eyes. "Oh" Tomoyo gasped when Syaoran speed walked to the garden. Tomoyo found her sister and Ho trying to catch butterflies and Ling- Ling caught Tomoyo's distracted look. "Tomo- san? Are you okay?" Ling- Ling asks with a worried look in her eyes. "Nani?" Tomoyo answers. "Oh, its nothing." Ling- Ling and Tomoyo walk and admire the palace once more. "Princess Chan!" A distant voice yells. "Come over here, I want to show you something!" Ho's grayish and blue hair sticks up and he flashes a smile. "Which princess?" Tomoyo and Ling- Ling both yell at the same time. Ho looked stunned for a second and then laughed. 'Both of you!" Ling- Ling smiled as she saw Ho's eyes look at hers. "Come one!" Ho yelled and Ling- ling giggled. "Alright! I'm coming, just hold your horses!" "Well, hurry up!" Ho cried and pretended to act impatient. Tomoyo laughed at the prince's acting skills and she wondered how Syaoran and Ho could be so different if they are brothers. Ho was totally different, he was cheerful and it seems like he has a great personality. Tomoyo caught a glimpse of Syaoran sitting alone when they were looking at the small butterfly that Ho had caught in his embroidered vest.(A/n- I dunno if that is possible but its my fic so bare with it!) I wonder what is really wrong with Prince Syaoran? Maybe he is just hopeless in falling in love again after what my cousin did to him. Tomoyo sighed then snapped back to reality. Wait, there is someone who can fix him, I think its time to call in reinforcement. Only this person could cure him: Princess---------------------
Did you like my story so far? Is it good or bad? Review and tell me because I need to know! I know that Syaoran is still fiery, but as I said, there will be someone there to help him. Only you are going to have to guess to which person will fit in the dotted line above….I'll give you a hint….the person is a princess…BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Don't abandon me just yet! Review!
