Thanks to all who reviewed the old version: This is the second one, one that's updated and not missing any stanzas. ; Yeah. Sorreh bout that. -- Shot my brains out the other day, so... you gotta expect somekind of screw up, right?

Rakuen Seeker 2005-05-17 ch 1, anonymous Nice! You missed a few stanzas, but it is still awesome!Beautiful peice of work!

Zhan Shi - Holy, shit, I did? Thanks for telling me! I don't think I woulda caught it otherwise. And thanks again!


Jesia 2005-05-17 ch 1, signed Wow.
Awesome. Simply awesome. I don't know what else to say.
Jesia

Zhan Shi - To put it simply, domouarigatou. XD


Scar's fangurl 2005-05-16 ch 1, signed loved it, will you write more of your other story "but with cause"? please do!

Zhan Shi - Thank you for R and R-ing this story thing as well! And I'll see what I can do with that one FMA fic, "But With Cause". I'm glad you liked it!